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The Buccaneer 224

Joined July 2012
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    The Buccaneer's Stories (2)

    • Rainbow Dash: Suprisingly Adequate Attorney
      Rainbow Dash is the weirdest attorney you'll ever meet! But, she is capable...suprisingly.

      1,584 words · 307 views · 9 likes · 2 dislikes
    • The Clockwork Angels
      Based on the album by the greatest band of all time, Rush.
      5,625 words · 134 views · 5 likes · 2 dislikes
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    Based on Rush's album. In a world lit only by fire, a lavish steampunk alternate universe, Twilight Sparkle gets the chance to go to the big city. However, the arrival of a new group called the Clockwork Angels stirs trouble...and Twilight can't fight them on her own.

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    First Published
    5th Aug 2012
    Last Modified
    8th Aug 2012

    Comments ( 32 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 45w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Could anypony help me on how to make stuff italic? I don't get it. I'm :derpytongue2:'d.

    #2 · Chapter 3 · 45w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Oh, and I'm sorry about the gramatical errors. They will be fixed in the future.:pinkiehappy:

    #3 · Chapter 3 · 45w, 3d ago · · ·
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    GET OUT STEAMPRICK

    GET OUT GET OUT GET OUT

    #4 · Chapter 3 · 45w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1035516 Aaaawwwww! Is someone feeling Grumpy-wumpy? Have a Pinkie Pie! :pinkiehappy: There ya go! Did that make you feel better?

    #5 · Chapter 3 · 45w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1035945 Thanks! I can't use word here, so the colons and all that are hard to catch. But, I am using google docs, so I think that will go away. Again, thank you for your time. At least you actually read it and didn't dislike it only becasue you hate the genre or anything, as if anypony would do that :twilightsheepish:

    #6 · Chapter 3 · 45w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Good story, will track. However, ya gotta add some compound sentences and semicolons. Ponies eat that stuff up, metaphorically speaking. Ya seemed tense, so here is a video to calm ya down.

    Glowsticks

    #7 · Chapter 3 · 45w, 3d ago · · ·
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    A story where Applejack, Rainbow Dash, and Twilight are in the same room and no shipping happens? Now I'm suddenly very interested.

    #8 · Chapter 3 · 45w, 3d ago · · ·
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    #9 · Chapter 3 · 45w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1036076 Is that good or bad?

    #10 · Chapter 3 · 45w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1036102 I dunn0, ya tell me.

    #11 · Chapter 3 · 45w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1036109 Well, did you think it was :pinkiehappy: or :twilightangry2:

    #12 · Chapter 3 · 45w, 3d ago · · ·
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    #13 · Chapter 3 · 45w, 3d ago · · ·
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    oh, okay. Thank you for the feedback. Have a steampunk Rainbow. :rainbowdetermined2:

    #14 · Chapter 3 · 45w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1035831 >grumpy-wumpy

    >trying to ruin Pinkie Pie

    I should kill you where you stand.

    #15 · Chapter 3 · 45w, 3d ago · · ·
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    RUSH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    :pinkiehappy: HOORAY! I've been waiting for this moment...

    #16 · Chapter 4 · 45w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1036287 aaawwwwww! Did you not wike pinkie? Maybe twilight will make you better! Here you go, buddy! :twilightsmile:

    #17 · Chapter 4 · 45w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1036311 I know, right! The greatest band ever deserves some mlp, does it not? Thank you for reading.

    #18 · Chapter 5 · 45w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Sorry, NOW...

    FFFFIIIIRRRRSSSTTTT! :twilightblush:

    #19 · Chapter 5 · 45w, 23h ago · · ·
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    >>1036441 Fuck no. Twilight is in the top 3 for worst pony.

    #20 · Chapter 5 · 45w, 14h ago · · ·
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    >>1048708. Then you need an onslaught of awesome. You need best pony.


    :rainbowdetermined2:

    #21 · Chapter 5 · 44w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>105039 OMG GOGGLES AUTOMATICALLY = STEAMPUNK LOLLLILOLILILIOL

    The faggotory is strong with this one.

    #22 · Chapter 5 · 44w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1061094 have you read this story?

    #23 · Chapter 5 · 44w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1066560 Why would I? Seriously.

    #24 · Chapter 5 · 44w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1070951 Ah, you are one of those guys who goes on to peoples stories that they worked on vey hard and dislikes them even though they didn't read it and don't know the quality of the story. Long story short, you just hate everything and everyone. Okay, that's cool, just try not to drive away anypony from my story by your baseless flaming, I would like some other people to read it besides a flamer:pinkiehappy:

    #25 · Chapter 5 · 44w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1073179 Effort? Kid, you're a steamprick. Your weapons represent how much work you losers put into them. Which is why they're the exact same thing with different colors and gear sizes.

    #26 · Chapter 5 · 44w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1074681 You don't understand writing, Mr. Testified. That's why you hate us, because you don't get us.

    #27 · Chapter 5 · 44w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1075107 No, because...You know I'm just going to post this because it explains it perfectly.

    #28 · Chapter 5 · 44w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1080755

    1. That was written by a hater just like you, a person who hates everything.

    2. You've been hitting on Rarity on your profile page too much not realize that this story is based on A BANDS ALBUM that was BASED on steampunk. This is my first steampunk story and I only wrote it for the love of the band. This proves that you have no idea what you are doing.

    3. You haven't read this story. You don't know if it sucks.

    4. You haven't wrote a story on here, so how do you know what a good story is like?

    5. Remember "love and tolerate"? No. You don't because you completely miss the message the show presents, you are not a brony. You are a hater.

    6. This is the last thing I do on this site. I'm going back to FANfiction where I'm ten times more popular and there isn't and people mindlessly running around telling people to suck their nuts. I hipe you fare well in the future, Mr. Testified, because I can assure you I won't be a part if it.

    #29 · Chapter 5 · 42w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Finally I see a Clockwork Angels fic. Gonna be putting this on my need-to-read list, and bumping it to around number three. :pinkiehappy:

    Edit: The "big city" is called Crown City, btw, where the Watchmaker keeps to his schemes. :ajsmug:

    #30 · Chapter 5 · 38w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1139628 I'm not going by the novel(which I just found out was realized, so I'm half way through it now) this is my own story :pinkiehappy:

    #31 · Chapter 5 · 38w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1314687

    Ah, I see. I still haven't been able to read this. Real life has gotten in the way time and time again. :raritycry: I will read this--eventually! >.< I do have a question, however: Why so many ponies hating on this, your story? Is it because of the steampunk aspect of it? If so, that's no reason to hate it.

    #32 · Chapter 5 · 38w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1314920 yea, that's just timeaus. He's a meanie. Other than that, it just doesnt get alot of attention.

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