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Based on Rush's album. In a world lit only by fire, a lavish steampunk alternate universe, Twilight Sparkle gets the chance to go to the big city. However, the arrival of a new group called the Clockwork Angels stirs trouble...and Twilight can't fight them on her own.
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>>1035945 Thanks! I can't use word here, so the colons and all that are hard to catch. But, I am using google docs, so I think that will go away. Again, thank you for your time. At least you actually read it and didn't dislike it only becasue you hate the genre or anything, as if anypony would do that 
Good story, will track. However, ya gotta add some compound sentences and semicolons. Ponies eat that stuff up, metaphorically speaking. Ya seemed tense, so here is a video to calm ya down.
>>1070951 Ah, you are one of those guys who goes on to peoples stories that they worked on vey hard and dislikes them even though they didn't read it and don't know the quality of the story. Long story short, you just hate everything and everyone. Okay, that's cool, just try not to drive away anypony from my story by your baseless flaming, I would like some other people to read it besides a flamer
1. That was written by a hater just like you, a person who hates everything.
2. You've been hitting on Rarity on your profile page too much not realize that this story is based on A BANDS ALBUM that was BASED on steampunk. This is my first steampunk story and I only wrote it for the love of the band. This proves that you have no idea what you are doing.
3. You haven't read this story. You don't know if it sucks.
4. You haven't wrote a story on here, so how do you know what a good story is like?
5. Remember "love and tolerate"? No. You don't because you completely miss the message the show presents, you are not a brony. You are a hater.
6. This is the last thing I do on this site. I'm going back to FANfiction where I'm ten times more popular and there isn't and people mindlessly running around telling people to suck their nuts. I hipe you fare well in the future, Mr. Testified, because I can assure you I won't be a part if it.
Ah, I see. I still haven't been able to read this. Real life has gotten in the way time and time again. 
I will read this--eventually! >.< I do have a question, however: Why so many ponies hating on this, your story? Is it because of the steampunk aspect of it? If so, that's no reason to hate it.
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