When Rainbow Dash finds her thoughts colliding, she decides to go to her friends for some advice. What she discovers is the every one of them keeps a diary to help them sort things out, so with a brave face and a second-hoof notepad, Dash does just that. What follows is an account of her life - warts and all - her friends, her job, Tank, a very special mare, and her dreadfully embarrassing parents. So, what is it like to be the Element of Loyalty? You're about to find out!
(Warning, Applejack x Rainbow Dash shipping!)
Chapters (9)
This was a really good story! Juouikl seal of approval!
Read this on DeviantArt, glad to see it's finally here!
Great Story!
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Thank you both!
Ah think Ah have a glass of apple juice with your name on it."
"Of course! Ah mean, all of you girls are my best friends, but me an' you have that little bit more. It's like we're soul-sisters."
I love this chapter
Massive Hat Guy...
I love your humor and I love your portrayal of AJ and RD
"B-but... big brother... Ah'm... Ah'm an orphan! Oh, darnit! Ah mean... Okay, Ah can't do pressure."
That line is gold, right there
As I friend
As a friend
Why do they call it punch, anyway? It's not like there's some random pony hiding in your bottle waiting to come out at any moment and smack you in the face.
Have I mentioned I love your humor? I think I did...
A truly heartwarming story! Out of the many AppleDash fan fics I have read this one stands out! The relationship you fostered between Applejack and Rainbow Dash is very touching. Hats off to you.
Everybrony loves this ... Now this gem of a story is in its rightful place on Fimfiction!
I hope you'll be uploading the marvelous sequels here too!
Read this on Da....and still love it
Because this needs more likes, comments, and favorites.
Yeah, glad to see your story here. I was reading it on deviantart and already told you thousand times its the fic which convinced me of appledash- . One of my top favourites. Love your sence of humor and how you describe the characters. It feels so.....canon. xD
I hope youll upload "in the city" too because i prefer to read on fimfiction =)
I'm so glad I decided to click your name on a whim. This is a great story and the only bad part is it gave me diabetes from how sweet it was. Watching and hoping that there's much more to come.
-Ace
1034049 No problem! You deserve the praise!
This is why there is a comedy tag!
Awww this story is so gay and i dont mean homosexual ... or happy either I mean that third one you know wich one im talking about
But seriously great story you had me snickering and on the verge of tears so thank you for that truely wonderful experience
If I had a diary, I think it would mostly be written like this. I'm just lost in this maze of luuuuuuurve
You got Rainbow's character well and I love Firefly's character, awesome mom! Her dad too!
SEQUEL! PLEASE!
Loved this so much!
Beautiful, really, it was a good time well spent reading your story. I liked it a lot
This was very very good. Read it this morning in one sitting straight. I like pretty much everything about it and can't immediately think of anything I would've liked to see changed. I wish I hadn't already read it, so that I could read it again. Firefly's presence was great and a nice addition to the shipfic recipe. Nothing was rushed, and instead happened at a nice credible pace. I love how Applejack was the one to come out before Rainbow did, even doing it to a Rainbow she thought was straight. Again, very nice work. Loved it
Dawwww, nice fic I really enjoyed reading it.
I've said it many times before and I'll say it once again here. There's nothing more adorable than Appledash. Fantastic story, loved every minute of it. I also like how you made Firefly her mom, good touch there.
I liked RD's ritual
Hah, love it! "Had a sandwich. Oh, the doorbell!"
"But big brother, Ah'm an orphan!"
lol that line made my day
SEQUEL????
Very sweet story. Wasn't a fan of the "two minutes later" sporadic entries, but the overall story was very cute. Thanks for a fun read.
very good, very cute :) I like it
Really cute chapter c:
Love the humor in this story
and the scenes with Dash and her mom c: Don't often see the two, and I love how you've written them. Nice seeing her with a pretty cool, loving mom, and how Dash is still her kid and relies on her at times.
I love you as an author.
I loved this story. Might even be my new favorite AD fic.
Your writing style was excellent, and I enjoyed the journal aspect. The humor was quite funny, and I really liked how you did the characters. Great job c: Lots of great moments in this story.
You missed the bolding on one of the times you said five minutes later
Another missing bolding
Missed another bolding but great story
Uuughhhh, I think I'm kind of like.. really really late commenting on this
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but, I totally love this fic!!!!!
I really loved Firefly in this, kind of reminded me of my own mom kind of. My moms awesome and buys me stuff.
O////O Love this fic sooooooo muuuuuuchhhh!!
Probably the best line I've ever read with the Pinkie Promise ever! lolz
One minor issue, if you could seperate Dash's thoughts from the narrative parts, it would be easier to tell that it's her thinking, it gets kind of confusing.
I would advise using italics for thoughts.
FEELS FEELS FEELS FEELS FEELS FEELS FEELS FEELS FEELS FEELS
HOLY CRAPNUGGETS DECIMAL POINT ASKED OUT DASHIE!!!
WHAT THE FLYING FRICK IS THIS CRAZY FANFICTION WORLD I LOVE?!? 
I love this.
That last line. It killed me. LITERALLY WHIPPED OUT A GUN AND SHOT ME LIKE SIX TIMES IN THE HEAD.
OMIGOSH OMIGOSH OMIGOSH OMIGOSH OMIGOSH APPLEJACK!!!!!! YES YES YES THIS IS PERFECT OH I LOVE FILLYFOOLER AJ!!! WHOO HOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!
Don't worry. Thery're 95% good.
I FRIGGIN LUV YOUR LAUGHS, MY FRIEND. K? K!
OH MY FRICK OH MY LORD OH MY GOD OH MY LAND OH MY GOSH OH MY WORD OHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSH!!!!!!! I DIED. JUST DIED. This is the CUTEST most FLUFFY thing I have EVER read!!!
YOU ARE ONE HECK OF A GENIUS.
Hear that sound? It the sound of me dieing from cuteness!
One Big Mac doesn't talk. Ever. Count you have used Granny Smith for that scene? Did I love you mean anything? Wasn't clear.
2nd love doesn't work that way.
Why was rainbow upset about Dessie?
I, I can't explain this.
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Out of ten
More than 174 weeks late..bah! I can comment when I feel like it.
Thats all
~ADG
This chapter was... jarring. Very jarring. I had a hard time picturing it happening. Everything went horribly wrong way too quickly and easily. Maybe if you had spent more time describing the storm - particularly its size...