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Mekanik 1025

Joined March 2012
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    Mekanik's Stories (1)

    • The Excursion to the Spirit
      Learning can get kind of boring. Why not learn on a journey... a journey into the mind.

      7,232 words · 224 views · 4 likes · 4 dislikes

    Note: Contains use of psychedelics (drugs). Do not read if you're too cool for hallucinogenics or if you're a wannabe YOLO kid.

    Twilight Sparkle tries to bring a distant object with a spell she learned, but doesn't get the target by a few... galaxies, if not multiverses, and brings back a strange looking wagon. Finding out who it belongs to, she learns that the owner of the strange wagon has strange technology, herbs, and chemicals she's interested, so are her friends, and said stranger takes them to the experience of their life. Earning the interest of many more.

    First Published
    4th Aug 2012
    Last Modified
    28th Aug 2012

    Comments ( 6 )

    #1 · Chapter 3 · 40w, 6d ago · · ·
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    :twilightsmile: nice story dude

    #2 · Chapter 3 · 40w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Looks decent so far will keep an eye on it

    #3 · Chapter 4 · 40w, 2d ago · · ·
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    HA! funny doped up ponies.:rainbowlaugh: will keep track and see where this is going

    #4 · Chapter 4 · 40w, 6h ago · · ·
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    I would also recommend trying to make the chapters longer. Really hard to get a feel when its oven right when I try to get into it!

    #5 · Chapter 4 · 40w, 5h ago · · ·
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    I'll take that into consideration, thanks.

    #6 · Chapter 5 · 19w, 1d ago · · 1 ·
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    I.....I love your story, the writing is so fulfilling, the situations are good to visualize. And I like that they're eating space cakes, it is neat. Please continue. :yay::raritystarry::pinkiesmile::eeyup:

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