Young Celestia? You have my interest.

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Congratulations! You are the first person to comment on a Fic whose Second Chapter (Chapter 1 I think. I know, confusing) I helped to write partially and finish earlier this night!

Mateei! Tell him what he's won!

Sorry for the video quality. I was too lazy to find better clips.

Also, sorry for the OBVIOUS GIGANTIC MISTAKE we made in the Second Chapter (Chapter 1). I'm trying to get into contact with Arby so that we can fix it together, but he isn't on Google or Skype at the moment, and though I've edited it, I still need his approval of the edit and for him to make the change to the story.

*Sheepish Grin*

>>10952541095254  I proof-read the... prologue, I think? Yeah, grammar suggestions and whatnot. It intrigued me enough that I came to see what became of it. For as short as it is, I think it's nice so far.

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Uh...actually...I was talking about Chapter 1...if you read it, you'll notice that theirs a gaping logical flaw in the conversation Celly and Bob (as he's officially called by me and Arby at this point) have. A REALLY big one.

Though, as to what else you say, I give a curt and genuine internet nod and thank you kindly (which I admit is kinda weird considering that I didn't have a hand in the prologue at all besides maybe a few changes in word choice here and there, but hey. Arby isn't here to hog the credit. ).

>>10953161095316 Erm... if YOU find these things, you aren't supposed to tell the public... you are supposed to tell me... Anyway, where is this flaw you mention?

This story sounds promising, GA. I'll wait until there is a bit more meat to the story before starting to read. 3k words barely wets the appitite, and I hate waiting ages for more of a good story.

>>10958601095860 Well, given the fact that it took me... 15 days and another person to pump out this 3000 words....

I'll try harder...

Interesting, not even god knows how he created the universe.

Please remember everyone, I am doing this without an editor, so any mistakes you find, point them out!

Also, please comment! Tell me what you think. I need to read what people think about my stories to live

In other news, that RD emoticon has some serious insinuations... I mean, I cannot look at without thinking RD, what are you doing with your tongue out like that?

Enjoy.

this is great. i would like to find out more about this mysterious woman with jet black hair

also. baby Celestia is best Celestia.

>>11215781121578 Actually, it's more like teenage Celestia... But if that isn't clear, I'll clarify in the next chapter.