Colgate's bored of her life. Sure, owning a dental practice is fulfilling, but it lacks that certain... je ne sais quoi. But when a mysterious stallion appears offering her a new life in exchange for unwavering loyalty to the Crown, she is plunged into a shadowy world of intrigue and lies, stretching from the searing deserts of Saddle Arabia to the frozen wastes of the Crystal Empire.
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Interesting idea... I like it! I will stick with this story. For now! MWAHAHAHAHA!
ROFL at the very end.
You're gonna have everyone thinking it's... another kind of... yeah, you get it.
That is so awesome
Can't wait for the new chapters!
I liek dis.
Shut up and take my favorite!
DEAR GOD YES!!!! SO MUCH WIN! I DEMAND MOAR! sir you are a mad GENIUS!
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oh yea and have a like/fav/watch! please make moar! i love this so much! oh and btw LOVE the color scheme thing!
Looks cool...ima take a look...
EDIT: I read it, and it was good. Keep up the good work
I thought she was going to pull some kind of candy out of the drawer
Nice story.
I cant really see a lot of good story plots if things continue being this..."vanilla".
I was expecting Colgate to be more..."Maniacal"
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When I was reading, I actually thought that was what happened until I reread that part.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia_O_O.png
Nationalized healthcare in Equestria? No wonder all the ponies are so happy!
As of this comment, the rating of up:down votes is at 23:0
SOMEONE WROTE A COLGATE FIC BEFORE I DID
Haha. jk.
You might wanna take a look at a few grammar/spelling errors though :o
"So far, most of the days patients had been overflow..."
day's, overflown?
Just some thoughts
Holy goddamn horseapples, I never, ever, expected it to be this popular
I'm away hiking atm, so updates will be slow, but I have a pretty good plot set out, hopefully it won't disappoint!
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Ponies LOVE free healthcare (relatively speaking, anyway 
)
1026929 I know! I woke up, checked my notifications, 53 notes and 4 mails
1026972 I'll certainly look at that, I thought overflow was the correct term but I may be mistaken
Cheers for pointing that out.
1026343 If you want typography like that, I can make you something :) All it takes is a fairly good knowledge of bbcoding and an artistic eye ;)
Thanks to everyone that enjoyed this! If anyone wants to ask questions or whatever, go ahead! Hopefully I will continue to entertain you with minty-fresh goodness!
Your story is good! And you should feel good!
1028421 Well, I almost died when I saw my notifications thing this morning, so I guess that's an indication
22 place on the popular stories list 
I will be keeping my eye on this one. You have raised my expectations. This is a dangerous thing.
1028584 *gulp* I shall certainly try to meet them, good sir
It's been 2 days and no updates! It's over! WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY! NOOOO>
1028637 On holiday buddy, it took ages to get through submission so I didn't know if people liked it or not. Working on chapter one now
I submit to the theory that Colgate is a time pony like Dr.Whooves
1046116 The brush is a tardis. Just throwing it out there
Not in the story though, that would just be... strange.
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Would somepony please tell ol' sierra why 6 different people favourited this in the space of 3 minutes? I'm scared
Edit: Really really scared. Over 25 new views today and I haven't done anything! Well, I haven't published anything yet. Writing the next chapter now, I shall try and keep you crazy foals sated with your daily share of Brushie!
1046142 Because this stories great
1046156 Thanks! But I don't understand where all the new readers are coming from!
awesome i love what she does when nopony is around though it is a lil' wierd that anyone would look down on her because of it.
Love it. MOAR! NOW!
If that's ok of course
1046158 have you noticed that your story is in the featured box?
this is adorable, and well written. Definitely tracking and liking
Keep it up x3........god they need a colgate face
1046162 Yes... I don't understand how anybody could have an obsession with brushes... *casually slides brush out of the window* Nope, no brushes here!
1046173 Thanks
Next chapter should be up soon!
1046169 NO! Oh my gawd, this is amazing. I am grinning ear-to-ear like a goddamn fool. Thanks to everypony that got it here! I love you all!
1046186 you are quite welcome
Love getting a little peek into the life of our favorite dentist/brush enthusiast.
I can't wait to see what other hijinks ensue.
okay, that ending was...
unexpected...
colgate must be caught in the act!
should be hilarious^^
I assume you were joking about getting sued. There's no monetary gain in writing fanfiction, so if Hasbro doesn't complain, no one will. Also, why would Spike hurt his tooth on an ordinary rock? Sapphires, along with rubies are made of corundum (Aluminum oxide), and are among the hardest naturally occurring substances. In fact, if we get an episode with Spike chewing through diamond, we can safely say that his teeth can break through just about anything.
And then the Brony appears behind her in the mirror! "Brusssssssshyy... brussssssshyyy..."
Nopony heard Colgate's screams.
It certainly is a entertaining idea. I look forward to what comes next.
Thought it turned into clop.troll
)smiling at its elegance and simplicity'
'Opening a drawer, she levitated her favourite toy out,(
you trolling basterd
dat ending
'Tis GLORIOUS!
If nothing else, the story appears to be interesting, and the formatting for the title, it makes me feel warm and happy inside.
I like when authors do that to the chapters...
You've got my attention.
Always good to see an amusing, well-written story about background ponies.
As a future dentist, I can definitely say four things:
. Just kidding, it was fairly accurate 
)
1. Colgate is among my top three favourite background ponies, together with Vinyl Scratch and Octavia
2. I HAVE TO favourite this fic.
3. You described pretty well what happens at the end of the day at a dentist's clinic. (But you forgot to make her put the teeth in a jewelry box
4. BRUSHIE!
-Jolly Roger
"If anypony discovered what she did after-hours, her reputation would surely be ruined, and she would become the laughing stock of the town. But nopony would know, she went to incredible lengths to ensure that her favourite toy remained hidden from her co-workers and patients.
The brush, in all its glory, hovered above her mane. "Brushy brushy brushy" she hummed, running the small brush through her hair."
That part alone made the 1st chap. awesome!
I'm going to keep an eye on this.
where abouts are you hiking, if you dont mind say.
Why shameful? Is it wrong to keep your mane as tidy and clean as your teeth?
The beginning is awesome, one complaint though:
If Spike can bite through gems, I'm presuming diamonds included, why would he chip his teeth over a rock? Should it be a piece of metal, or a hollow dummy that made him squeeze his jaws so hard his teeth broke, I'd understand.
But it's just me, Mr. Nitpick!
Oh, and I still haven't forgotten you totally owe me that laptop.
Colgate... Colgate...
Colgate of the EDA!
Colgate... Colgate...
Colgate of the ED-
Colgate of the ED-
ED- EDA-ay-Ay!
It's a Mare's Life in the Equestrian Dental Association!
Soon as I read the synopsis, I was planning to suggest Spike be a patient; all kinds of fun could be had with his unique biology. And look who it is, right off the bat, getting abuse from friends and strangers! At least they didn't call him a pet to his face.
I have a fanfic planned called "Twilight's Pet Dragon". The use of "pet" in the title is specifically meant to indicate that the dragon in question will suffer constant abuse and degradation.
A Brushie Brushie fic?? MUST READ!
So was the brush a hairbrush or a giant toothbrush that she ran through her mane?
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Well. The end was a little odd.
A female brushing her hair, oh Celestia, it's terrible!
Brushy brushy brushy~