Hey im a fan of MLP FIM and im trying to get a story down so yeah.
6d, 9hHey Not dead yet and need help with Dark Souls 0 comments · 5 views
16w, 15hSome news 0 comments · 36 views
16w, 4dNeed Inspration 4 comments · 38 views
16w, 4dHey guys not dead and help please? 0 comments · 26 views
22w, 3dGood News and Anime Suggestion 0 comments · 21 views
24w, 1dComputer problems. 6 comments · 35 views
25w, 5dUpdate 1 comments · 22 views
28w, 2dFew new fic ideas and help needed 1 comments · 32 views
28w, 3dAbout Equestria Girls 0 comments · 29 views
30w, 5dSad News 5 comments · 46 views
Armor was the first to move. Out of nowhere he galloped forward and was nearly in front of me in a second. I had little time to react. I managed to raise my arms up to my face as he jumped into the air and used both of his fore hooves to hit me right in the arms. I skidded across the ground as it seemed dirt flew into the air. The other guards cheered on as armor had an evil grin on his face. I lowered my arms as I looked at the sleeves of my suit. I chuckled as I yelled,
"You know Rarity is gonna hate you for this right?!" He looked at me surprised.
"WAIT WHAT!!??" I could hear most of the guards blurt out laughing.
"Yeah rarity made this...but don't worry she won't believe me if I say you did it if I do this." As I said this I tore the sleeves off myself. I forgot about the few tiny marks on my arms that showed scars. I got back into my fighting stance. The other guards didn't seem to notice the small scars nor did armor. He started galloping towards me. This time I was gonna fight. He did the same thing jumping into the air. But this time I ducked and punched him in the side with my right arm. My strong one. He let out a sound of pain as he hit the ground. But he immediately got up and looked at me.
"Not bad for a rookie." I just chuckled as I went back to the middle of the circle.
"Let's make this a little more....fun for you guys. I will allow two more guards into the fight what you say!" I yelled. The guards cheered as two more got into the fight. I chuckled.
"Who's first?" I asked. One of the guards that joined charged forward. I decided to end this part of the fight quickly. As he galloped I ran forward and when he jumped into the air I did an uppercut in his jaw. I didn't even looks back as I heard him hit the ground from behind me. I turned my head and saw him get dragged off as he was breathing heavily.
"Huh....same weak point as an average horse." I turned around. "Next?"
The other guard charged forward he was a pegasus. He opened his wings as he flew into the air. When he was high enough he charged down at me. I had a few seconds to react. Either jump out of the way or do a move I never did before. I thought I might as well go out in glory. I did what some famous soccer players do to kick a ball into the net. I jumped so I would land on my back,but I used my arm to stop me halfway as I lifted my right leg into the air and kicked. I hit him square into the left side of his face as he plummeted into the ground. I did a back flip to my feet.
"Holy crap I didn't think that would work." I said with complete surprise. I looked back at shining armor the last one standing. He was also surprised. But then I heard him growl as he snorted looking like steam went out his nose. He charged forward jumping into the air. I jumped to the right but was immediately grabbed by one of his hooves. Next thing I knew I was on the ground as he started to beat the living crap out of me. A few hit to the face I could feel that my nose was broken. But before he could do anymore damaged I punched him as hard as I could on the snout. He leaned back gripping his nose. Then I hit him in the chest to get him off of me. I rolled to the side as I quickly got up.
"Damn.....you sure can fight i'll give you that." Armor said. I saw the door to the training room open. I saw Celestia,Luna,and cadence walk in. I quickly ignored them when armor again charged forward. He jumped into the air, horn facing me. My eyes went wide as I put my hand up in defense. His horn went right through my hand. Extreme pain went through me as I need him in the chest the hit him right in the jaw. His horn slid out of my hand now having a hole in it. "SON OF A BITCH!!!" I blurted as the pain set it, it was intense, but it was also about the same as when the knife went through my shoulder. But then armor had his horn light up then......he hit me with some sort of energy as it launched me into the wall and I coughed up blood. Back in severe pain. I slid down as armor came charging at me.
I could barely get the energy to dodge him in time. He looked at me anger in his eyes. He tried to bite me in the chest but missed when I moved a little. Instead he tore off my shirt exposing my scars. I got up holding my hand that was shaking. It was a miracle that I was still even awake. I started to feel lightheaded as the cheers stopped. Instead I heard loud gasps. Armor then let go of my shirt out of shock. He shook his head as he realized what he just did. The last thing I heard before I passed out was Celestia yelling,
"JERRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" I fell backwards as everything went black.
(AN: Okay well here's another cliff hanger......i'm trolling *sings troll song* ok but anyways this just came at the top of my head. Oh and thanks to RebelPony1997 for editing...and sorry if shining looked out of character but there will be a purpose soon so just wait for it okay?)
(Editors Notes: Im going to say one thing, as i have been the editor for i think 4 chapters now, it started out sloppy in grammar. But now, you sir PonyLover have little errors that needed to be fixed, or at least in this one. I think I counted like 12 but that's an amazing improvement compared to the rest of the segments. All in all, this is very fun editing for you, hope to continue.)