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Twinkletail

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I write poni. I am easily distracted. I like Oreos.

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While helping Twilight rearrange her lab, Spike comes across a magical powder that changes him into a pony! While Twilight tries to find an antidote, pony Spike has some adventures of his own.

(Originally posted (part 1, at least) to EqD in May 2011. I'd run across a ponified Spike picture and suddenly got an urge to write it. Another story that I tried to make seem like a viable episode)

NOTE: This story takes place in the same continuity as Appleshy, Sparkle Kitten, Trixie's Great and Powerful Revenge, and Tragic Magic. It takes place chronologically after all of those except Tragic Magic. The other stories are not required reading to fully enjoy this story (though feel free to read them anyway!), but there are one or two elements that call back to Sparkle Kitten in particular.

First Published
2nd Aug 2012
Last Modified
21st Aug 2013

Comments ( 362 )

#1 · Chapter 1 · 103w, 19h ago · · ·
#2 · Chapter 1 · 103w, 18h ago · · ·

please continue?

#3 · Chapter 1 · 103w, 18h ago · · ·

I would like to see more.

#4 · Chapter 1 · 103w, 18h ago · · ·

I agree, I'd love to see you continue this.

#5 · Chapter 1 · 103w, 17h ago · · ·

Oh wow that was funny as hell :rainbowlaugh:

more please? please? with a cheery on top?:pinkiehappy:

#6 · Chapter 1 · 103w, 17h ago · · ·

I request more, as well as Spike remaining a Pony. I've seen only one SpikexSB before, this can go places.

#7 · Chapter 1 · 103w, 17h ago · · ·

Please continue this! There is so many possibilities here! PLEASE!!!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

#8 · Chapter 1 · 103w, 16h ago · · ·

In case the above comments aren't enough of an influence, I will add my voice to the campaign.

This concept had the potential to become a really great drawn out story.  It is really a shame that it ended so soon.  You could go on for ages about Spike's adventures with the CMCs and his building relationship with Sweetie all while Twilight tries to create a cure.  And for a twist in the usual 'Twilight creates the cure at the end' story you could make it irreversible and delve into how spike feels about being pegasus for the rest of his life.  The possibilities are endless!

This would mean that this chapter would have to be redone but I reckon it would be worth it.

I have given this story a like and a fave in hope that it will be continued.

#9 · Chapter 1 · 103w, 15h ago · · ·

It wasn't physically possible for Twilight's jaw to hit the ground and still remain connected, but it sure was making a fine effort to do so. In front of Twilight stood a purple colt with a green mane. She knew instantly that it was Spike.

Twilight is brian in this link

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pkPgYbdQ1kQ

#10 · Chapter 1 · 103w, 14h ago · · ·

I think this would work out really well as a longer story, just think of all the adventure's spike would get up to with the CMC's as well as his relationship with Sweetie, I really think it would be a good idea :pinkiehappy:

#11 · Chapter 1 · 103w, 14h ago · · ·

I, want mooooooooooooore :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

#12 · Chapter 1 · 103w, 13h ago · · ·

That was great!:pinkiehappy: More please!:yay:

#13 · Chapter 1 · 103w, 12h ago · · ·

Feature box. Called it...again...

#14 · Chapter 1 · 103w, 12h ago · · ·

-or maybe a burly bicep, to represent how buff and manly he was!  MANLY. Ummm what exactly is a man? Anyway, interesting, I would like to read more.:pinkiesmile:

#15 · Chapter 1 · 103w, 11h ago · · ·

MOAR MOAR MOAR :flutterrage: , umm if thats okay with you :fluttershysad:

#16 · Chapter 1 · 103w, 11h ago · · ·

This was awesome. Short, sweet, and had that distinct pony feel to it. I've always been a fan of Spikebelle, so that was also a plus.

Great job, friend! :moustache:

#18 · Chapter 1 · 103w, 11h ago · · ·

When I liked it the number jumped up to 55.

#19 · Chapter 1 · 103w, 11h ago · · ·

>>1016573

Sixty five, in my case.

#20 · Chapter 1 · 103w, 10h ago · · ·

Jolly good show!

#21 · Chapter 1 · 103w, 9h ago · · ·

>>1016811

You said it, good sir!

#22 · Chapter 1 · 103w, 9h ago · · ·

MOAR!!!!!:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

The moustaches demand it!!!!!!

#23 · Chapter 1 · 103w, 9h ago · · ·

This is just so AWESOME /)^3^(\

Please write more!

#24 · Chapter 1 · 103w, 9h ago · · ·

That was adorable! it would be nice to see more of this.:moustache:

#25 · Chapter 1 · 103w, 9h ago · · ·

As Spock would say: This story has large quantities of Win and Awesome.

It makes me sad that there isn't going to be more. Then again, given the easily reversed nature of the powders, that means that, in theory, we can have a lot of sequels.

#26 · Chapter 1 · 103w, 8h ago · · ·

That was awesome, and I want Moar.

Moar I say!

#27 · Chapter 1 · 103w, 8h ago · · ·

If you need an Idea for a sequel, let me know.  This was an excellent read.

#28 · Chapter 1 · 103w, 6h ago · · ·

MOAR!MOAR!MOAR!

id post an image but I'm still kind of new

#29 · Chapter 1 · 103w, 6h ago · · ·

Heh, saw this on EqD a while back.

It's still as funny as I remember it.  :pinkiesmile:

#30 · Chapter 1 · 103w, 6h ago · · ·

Short, cute and sweet... I love it! :twilightsmile:

#31 · Chapter 1 · 103w, 6h ago · · ·

I made an account to tell you: Make more of this, it's pretty great.

#33 · Chapter 1 · 103w, 5h ago · · ·

Twilight has become asian tigah mom. :twilightsmile:

#34 · Chapter 1 · 103w, 5h ago · · ·

I liked this one quite a bit, but one question is nagging at me: where exactly did Sweetie and Spike do the makeovers and all that? It can't very well have been Carousel Boutique, or Spike would at least have wondered about it. My guess would be it was at Sweetie Belle's and Rarity's parents' place, but then how did Twilight get in there to find Spike? :rainbowhuh:

Otherwise, quite a nice little story there. Just possibly missing a Romance tag, but then I guess this is a borderline case.

#35 · Chapter 1 · 103w, 5h ago · · ·

:twilightsmile: More! I'm sure Sweetie Belle would like to hear that...:unsuresweetie:

#36 · Chapter 1 · 103w, 5h ago · · ·

I would say more but I see you where going for a fic that is much like a episode but it would be nice to read one where the whole gang turns into a dragon and Spike a pony because the got in a fight over what speices has it rougher and celestia says walk a mile in the other body.

#37 · Chapter 1 · 103w, 5h ago · · ·

Arrgh gettng me all excited about Spike Sweetie shipping and then it just ENDS! Whyyy!? Do more??

Pretty please with sugar, nuts, a cherry and chocolate sprinkles?:pinkiehappy:

#39 · Chapter 1 · 103w, 5h ago · · ·

Spike loves all the girls in Rarity's family!

He can't help it. Rarity's family is a good family.

#40 · Chapter 1 · 103w, 5h ago · · ·

I thought i had seen it all. Ponies turning into alicorns. Ponies turning into humans.  Ponies turning into CLOUDS! but this?

Spike as a pony?

There are not enough :moustache: in the world to describe how awesome this is. :moustache:

#41 · Chapter 1 · 103w, 5h ago · · ·

Sparkle Kitten semi-sequel? Nice. You need a multipart story  - I'm more than willing to help if you need an editor.

(ps: effect ponies is incorrect - use affect .) :twilightblush:

#42 · Chapter 1 · 103w, 4h ago · · ·

this was originally written back in May last year?!

hoo boy, that's some ancient history! i love it, and as if there aren't already a million people calling for a sequel/continuation/extended-cut, i'll add my enthusiasm for such a thing. this was very sweet, and i'd absolutely love to see more. :twilightsmile:

#43 · Chapter 1 · 103w, 4h ago · · ·

MORE! This is a great concept, you should do more chapters on this, there are few SweetiexSpike fics, and this one is great!

#44 · Chapter 1 · 103w, 4h ago · · ·

Great ending! :D A perfect little story :3

#45 · Chapter 1 · 103w, 4h ago · · ·

More please! SparkstarxSweetie OTP!

#46 · Chapter 1 · 103w, 4h ago · · ·

Nice! I DEMAND MORE!!! :flutterrage:

#47 · Chapter 1 · 103w, 3h ago · · ·
#48 · Chapter 1 · 103w, 3h ago · · ·

:moustache::unsuresweetie:

#49 · Chapter 1 · 103w, 3h ago · · ·

So, let me see if I understand, now Spike is hitting on not just Rarity, but Rarity's sister as well?

Puh...puh...puh....puh...PLAYER.:moustache:

#50 · Chapter 1 · 103w, 3h ago · · ·

MOAR !! That was so great :pinkiehappy:

Chapter 2 suggestion : spike find the copy of the potion, which twilight has made after the accident :raritywink:

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