D'awwwwwwwwwww!

lol at Spike at the end.

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please continue?

I would like to see more.

I agree, I'd love to see you continue this.

Oh wow that was funny as hell

more please? please? with a cheery on top?

I request more, as well as Spike remaining a Pony. I've seen only one SpikexSB before, this can go places.

Please continue this! There is so many possibilities here! PLEASE!!!

In case the above comments aren't enough of an influence, I will add my voice to the campaign.

This concept had the potential to become a really great drawn out story.  It is really a shame that it ended so soon.  You could go on for ages about Spike's adventures with the CMCs and his building relationship with Sweetie all while Twilight tries to create a cure.  And for a twist in the usual 'Twilight creates the cure at the end' story you could make it irreversible and delve into how spike feels about being pegasus for the rest of his life.  The possibilities are endless!

This would mean that this chapter would have to be redone but I reckon it would be worth it.

I have given this story a like and a fave in hope that it will be continued.

It wasn't physically possible for Twilight's jaw to hit the ground and still remain connected, but it sure was making a fine effort to do so. In front of Twilight stood a purple colt with a green mane. She knew instantly that it was Spike.

Twilight is brian in this link

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pkPgYbdQ1kQ

I think this would work out really well as a longer story, just think of all the adventure's spike would get up to with the CMC's as well as his relationship with Sweetie, I really think it would be a good idea

I, want mooooooooooooore

That was great! More please!

Feature box. Called it...again...

-or maybe a burly bicep, to represent how buff and manly he was!  MANLY. Ummm what exactly is a man? Anyway, interesting, I would like to read more.

MOAR MOAR MOAR , umm if thats okay with you

This was awesome. Short, sweet, and had that distinct pony feel to it. I've always been a fan of Spikebelle, so that was also a plus.

Great job, friend!

When I liked it the number jumped up to 55.

>>10165731016573

Sixty five, in my case.

Jolly good show!

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You said it, good sir!

MOAR!!!!!

The moustaches demand it!!!!!!

This is just so AWESOME /)^3^(\

Please write more!

That was adorable! it would be nice to see more of this.

As Spock would say: This story has large quantities of Win and Awesome.

It makes me sad that there isn't going to be more. Then again, given the easily reversed nature of the powders, that means that, in theory, we can have a lot of sequels.

That was awesome, and I want Moar.

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Moar I say!

If you need an Idea for a sequel, let me know.  This was an excellent read.

MOAR!MOAR!MOAR!

id post an image but I'm still kind of new

Heh, saw this on EqD a while back.

It's still as funny as I remember it.  

Short, cute and sweet... I love it!

I made an account to tell you: Make more of this, it's pretty great.

Twilight has become asian tigah mom.

I liked this one quite a bit, but one question is nagging at me: where exactly did Sweetie and Spike do the makeovers and all that? It can't very well have been Carousel Boutique, or Spike would at least have wondered about it. My guess would be it was at Sweetie Belle's and Rarity's parents' place, but then how did Twilight get in there to find Spike?

Otherwise, quite a nice little story there. Just possibly missing a Romance tag, but then I guess this is a borderline case.

More! I'm sure Sweetie Belle would like to hear that...

I would say more but I see you where going for a fic that is much like a episode but it would be nice to read one where the whole gang turns into a dragon and Spike a pony because the got in a fight over what speices has it rougher and celestia says walk a mile in the other body.

Arrgh gettng me all excited about Spike Sweetie shipping and then it just ENDS! Whyyy!? Do more??

Pretty please with sugar, nuts, a cherry and chocolate sprinkles?

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a sequel wouldn't be a bad thing.

Spike loves all the girls in Rarity's family!

He can't help it. Rarity's family is a good family.

I thought i had seen it all. Ponies turning into alicorns. Ponies turning into humans.  Ponies turning into CLOUDS! but this?

Spike as a pony?

There are not enough in the world to describe how awesome this is.

Sparkle Kitten semi-sequel? Nice. You need a multipart story  - I'm more than willing to help if you need an editor.

(ps: effect ponies is incorrect - use affect .)

this was originally written back in May last year?!

hoo boy, that's some ancient history! i love it, and as if there aren't already a million people calling for a sequel/continuation/extended-cut, i'll add my enthusiasm for such a thing. this was very sweet, and i'd absolutely love to see more.

MORE! This is a great concept, you should do more chapters on this, there are few SweetiexSpike fics, and this one is great!

Great ending! :D A perfect little story :3

More please! SparkstarxSweetie OTP!

Nice! I DEMAND MORE!!!

So, let me see if I understand, now Spike is hitting on not just Rarity, but Rarity's sister as well?

Puh...puh...puh....puh...PLAYER.

MOAR !! That was so great

Chapter 2 suggestion : spike find the copy of the potion, which twilight has made after the accident

This need a sequal or more chapters. Can't just leave it here and I love Spike/Sweetie Bell stories

we need moar my good sir

I believe the people have spoken my good brony... And I have a great idea for what could be used as a plot point to start the sequel. The cure interacts negatively to high adrenaline counts which Spike had before fainting due to being told he was kissed by Rarity's sister. So the cure has the opposite affect, making him a pony FOREVER!

:WE WANT MOAR, DAMMIT!

:...

:Umm, I mean, that is, if you don't mind. I wouldn't want to impose, or anything. S-sorry for bothering you...

More would be nice.

"FIX IT FIX IT FIX IT FIX IT FIX IT!!!"

Spike is best Fry

Clicked because drawing style reminded me of rainbow dash presents.

Stayed for pony Spike.

<- Do you SEE this pony? Do you want her to go all on you and then go all on your corpse after she STRANGLES you? Didn't think so, make more,

<- do you see this pony, do you want her to go all on you, because that'll happen as well.

<- do you see this pony? do you want her after you?

and don't think you can hide from a naturalist, an outgoing party-organizer, and a social climber with connections in basically every level of society, they WILL find you if you don't make more, and that's not a threat, it's a promise.

I love short stories like these; they're quick and easy to read, and seem like they could be actually episodes of the show!

Only one thing to say-

READY.

AIM.

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FIRE THE MOAR-TAR.

If you'd like to, of course.

MOAR!!!!!!!! Sequel! now! Or I will exact my vengeance upon you!!! And it's the bad kind of vengeance too! With rocks and sticks and knives and PAIN!... GIVE US MOAR.

SweetieSpike? Awwwwww! So sweet! Great story!

I don't know why, but I like this ship. It just makes so much sense.

CONTINUE IT! It deserves it.

This was a cute and funny story.  I'm surprised Spike didn't already know any of the CMC other than Applebooom.  I didn't mind the SpikexSweetie Belle angle at all.

I know a lot of people are begging you for a sequel, but I can understand if you don't.  Why possibly ruin an already great little story.

Hmm....Ya know what mate? You're leaving us with a (small) cliffhanger here.... You simply MUST do another  chapter... be it a squeal, or an epilogue....

Not even joking, I could see this as a real episode, if you take out the shipping aspect (not that I don't like it, I love SweetieSpike).  It'd be really cool, too.

I'm going to have to agree with, well... everypony. this definitively needs a sequel.

So much dawwww I got diabetes.  Kudos to you for the awesome story. Now go read my 270k plus word story.

more i want spike to stay a pony

WE RECURE MOAR FOR THE MOAR THRONE!!!!!!

That was cute. It was funny with a good story about what it means to be friends, with a nice little shock for spike at the end. Would have made a good episode, which is what it felt like.

oh and whether or not you make a sequel doesn't quite matter it is a great story as is.

How about this... If you don't make chpter 2 for this, I will personally....AW WHO AM I KIDDING!? MAKE MOAR! NOW!!!!

this was awesome please squeal or continue would love to see this develop

So sweet. I do think it would have been awesome if the change was permanent, and the sweetie/Spike relationship went on. But a great story!

>>10173051017305

You mean Dragonshy, right XD?

Fluttershy will cry if you don't make any moar. Please!!!!!!   + =

take that "completed" status off right now and continue this because it is pure gold

I eagerly await the shenanigans that should no doubt ensue.

AUTHOR, Y U NO TALK

But seriously. Give us more. Or we will find you. And hold a lazor to your head until you break the interwebs or give us a new chapter.

True story.

Man I like to read more about Sparkstar. this should so be an episode    

Okay this was just plain adorable! I agree with the others though, there needs to be a sequel! SweetieSpike FTW! <3

... Wow. So many comments about it being continued... I think it's fine the way it ended though. Great job TwinkleTail! You made an excellent story.

This was a great little story, and it'd be cool if you wrote a continuation!

I feel a strange disturbance in the force...

As if hundreds of cried out for moar and suddenly got it and were silent.

Make moar, Make fans happy, Wins for everyone (and pony!)

Now to read it again!

Pretty good short story

I could see this being an awesome, longer fic, with us seeing more of the CMC, and it takes longer for Twilight to make a cure. Then, when she does, Spike's like "Hmmmm...naw" and gets to stay a pony and stuff. With SB

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Wow that took ages!

OK the reason I reason I replied to your comments is because you all wanted this story to continue (some more enthusiastically than others).  Well I for one, think it is a crime having that completed status on such an excellent concept and brilliantly written piece of literature!  It should be continued!  I am considering starting a group to protest for a continuation in one way or another of this story.  If any of you would seriously consider joining the faction (as I like to call it) then send me a PM or reply to this comment.  If I get enough support I’ll start the group.

I might just be misinterpreting things here, but I'm gathering that people would like a sequel

I'm considering it. I often find that if I add a continuation past where I originally planned on ending a story, it seems tacked-on and the quality often suffers. Part 4 of Appleshy and Part 2 of Sparkle Kitten were past what I expected to do with both stories (Though I'm still quite happy with how Sparkle Kitten turned out, and I guess part 4 of Appleshy was acceptable). But I'm still considering it, partially because I had at one point considered it a while back and partially cause of all the demand

So I guess the short answer is "There may be a sequel!" Though I guess that doesn't clear things up at all.

Thanks so much for all the interest in the story, by the way. I was honestly kinda surprised at the reaction to it

That was pure unadulturated awesome. Totally head canon now.

That was absolutely adorable.

And I could totally see this as an actual episode. You might try reworking it as a treatment; I know the cast and crew are aware enough of the fandom that it wouldn't be hard to get it picked up as a season 4 episode.

It would be a surprise if Hashbro or whoever owns My little pony FiM used this for one of the season 3 episodes. Cause this would make a great episode.

THAT WAS AMAZING you MUST continue. I am going to start following you for the sole purpose of seeing a sequal, do not let me down

anyways it WAS exelent and w=it was to short and had to much potential to stop here please continue

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That pic has so much win.

You could have easily made this longer, but I liked the way it came out.

It would be cool if you wrote a fic called What if Twilight couldn't Find the Antidote? (Dragon Hooves Crossover)

And it would be about Spike living several days as a pony, instead of a few hours.

But anyway, this was a nice read, and I thoroughly enjoyed it.

SEQUEL! I DEMAND A SEQUEL!

Wait, I'm a bit confused. With the number of times Spike has talked to Rarity and been to her boutique, shouldn't he already know that Sweetie is her sister?