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Spica 938358

Joined March 2012
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    Spica's Stories (9)

    • The Ponyville Way
      Twilight Sparkle learns how things roll in her new home

      3,639 words · 3,323 views · 53 likes · 2 dislikes
    • Cadence's Hearts and Hooves
      Cadence wants to be Cupid, but what do her targets have to say in the matter?
      16,309 words · 1,631 views · 103 likes · 9 dislikes
    • The Honeymoon
      Shining and Cadence lose. Hard
      10,430 words · 2,080 views · 86 likes · 13 dislikes
    • Celestia's Flare
      Princess Celestia falls sick, and it's up to Twilight Sparkle, Rarity and Pinkie Pie to help her
      20,584 words · 1,505 views · 45 likes · 5 dislikes
    • Playing the Heart's Strings
      82,891 words · 2,036 views · 115 likes · 22 dislikes
    • The Gift
      14,131 words · 599 views · 15 likes · 6 dislikes
    • Snowdrops
      1,509 words · 194 views · 6 likes · 1 dislikes
    • Playing the Night's Strings
      1,941 words · 224 views · 9 likes · 3 dislikes
    • Wings
      4,144 words · 113 views · 5 likes · 1 dislikes
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    A mistake on part of the Cloudsdale Snow Factory causes an unusual winter in Ponyville. When Rainbow Dash and the weather team catch wind of it, they set off to fix it.

    But now Ponyville will have a really White Winter.

    First Published
    2nd Aug 2012
    Last Modified
    2nd Aug 2012

    Comments ( 8 )

    #1 · 41w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Not too bad, here, have a thumb! :twilightsmile:

    I really like the use of pictures, I used to do that in my stories. Ya'no, for better imagery?

    #2 · 41w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Oh, this should be interesting. I can think of somepony :derpyderp2: who's in for a rather unpleasant time because she got locked out of the loop. Oh, wait. Add in three more someponies. :unsuresweetie::scootangel::applecry:

    #3 · 41w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Good, so far at least.

    I did notice a few mistakes, but only one bugged me. WHY DID YOU REPLACE A QUESTION MARK WITH A PERIOD THAT IS MY LEAST FAVORITE GRAMMAR MISTAKE EVER!

    #4 · 41w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1015369 Yeah, when they're needed, they're needed. When there are not well known ponies running around, much better.

    >>1015585

    Miss Hooves is way too important for that :derpytongue2: Besides, I reckon she'll have her hooves full soon...

    >>1015589

    Ok, I fixed a couple things I could find. Truth is I don't use editors of proofreaders. Yes, I know :unsuresweetie:

    Thanks for your comments and following. I though a different story such as this would be a little better received. Still, if someone reads it, I'll work on it. I also can point you to my other stories? :3

    #5 · 41w, 3d ago · · ·
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    I liked the solution o using links to explain who some of the background pony characters used are. :twilightsmile: Maybe I should start using that as well, everytime I write about the background pony Rainbowshine I get somebody telling me "you mean Rainbow Dash, right?" :rainbowhuh::trixieshiftright:

    #6 · 41w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1023743

    Yeah, most fics grab the most known BG ponies, Lyra, Bon Bon, Cloud Kicker, Vinyl, Octavia...

    There are so many severely underused ponies.. I searched in the database and chose two pegasi whose design really impacted me. In fact I had to drop some, such as Blossomforth because they don't seem to be active as weather ponies, though I suppose they could be called for emergencies ala Hurricane Fluttershy.

    #7 · 41w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1023829

    Airheart is one of those I was gonna use as well, cus I too liked her design. :twilightblush: and I just really liked the name for some reason.

    #8 · 41w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1023974

    You know what, it sounds like Amelia Earhart (or whatshername) and given her flying helmet... Hey, that could be an awesome idea...

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