(First-Person, Reader X Chrome Pony)
So, you wake up to find you're in your iPod. Not to mention, your web browser is kinda cute. Now what?
An idea I couldn't get out of my head. Thank SwiperTheFox. But be warned, I'm pretty sure most of his stuff airs on the dangerous side of fanfiction.
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Bro this is second person. First person would be "I did this." Second person is "You did this."
Third person "He did this."
"Your web browser is kinda cute, now what?"
Take all of my lulz.
Today I learned that Chrome is available for iOS.
Wait... Why is the description in second-person while everything else is in first-person?
This was so beautiful it hurt. Good work
I'm not made for anybody
< hah, I'll admit, I read it because of my name.
But, wow, this was a really sweet story. It was really cute. I noticed a little too many spelling errors for my liking though. The story was great, but I suggest writing with word, or something that will spell check for you, so you can pick up on those pesky spelling errors. Great work, my friend.
This was great!! Also, the cover photo looks really hot
Why must my body be into clop?
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D'awww
This is... amazing.
Mind you, if it wasn't for the picture of Romi I wouldn't have clicked this. I was just clicking random things on the home page, and I don't normally read shipping fics.
I say that, and yet I have favorited so many, and favorited isn't even a word! This is another one I shall favorite.
My first thought when I learned that Romi was connected to all of the internet, my mind wondered. What does she think of the most... questionable... parts of the internet.
Really, really good.
But, there were a ton of spelling errors. Maybe get a proofreader?
Other than that, it was an amazing story. Good job.
1014052 these kinds of thing are sorta decided for not by you.
"USER.exe"
Time to get coding...
What? This is to good to be complete.
I have my iPod plugged in now.
Now I need a storm...
Chrome + ponies + Tron in the title + Second-person = ?
If ? means "Fricking amazing story!" or "WTF is this?!".
? has a very likely chance of being fricking amazing.
Please don't be a oneshot, please don't be a oneshot.....
For the record, this was written on my iPod, with no access to any kind of spellcheck, so I sincerely appoligize for spelling errors and they will be fixed at a later date. Sorry for the inconvience!
And also, second person would be like "you did" but considering this is an unconsious thought-recording datalog or whatever, of course you would think of yourself as an "I". Just my little spin on things.
I love the idea of the story.
I hope to see a continuation!
Because this was really beautiful
I shall await the next chapter.
interesting concept so i put in in my read later list.
1014134 your one of the people who believes that its a choice to be gay aren't you?
HOLY SHIT I OWN CHROME ON MY LAPTOP.
I must now fall asleep with my headphones on listening to my Fatboy Slim playlist,
You have all my d'aawwwws
Manly tears were shed..
Oh god, so beautiful, now i want an iPhone D:
I really like this, liked and faved, looks like front page material.
1014455 what I meant to say was "these kinds of thing are sorta decided for you, not by you." and
your sorta half right. I didn't choose to be straight it just happened naturally, I do however have the choice to ignore my own sexual interest (some people might think they don't but ultimately they do). I believe that you can only choice to ignore the things you want, you cannot choose to want things. so gay people are gay because they want it. but they choose not to stop themselves too, don't get wrong idea here I do support gay rights. its that combination of want and choice that makes a person gay because being gay is a personal thing its not decided by other people, you have to come out of the closet for that kind of recognition. you have to choose to accept that your gay in order to be gay, and the outcome is usually unavoidable.
if my point doesn't any sense to you then forgive me because for me its 3:22 AM
Unusual concept, but I enjoyed it! Very nice.
Im not gonna lie this is wrong on so many levels... but so epic! lets get down to ratings.... 7/10 for happy factor (letting him have the ability to re access the app made me scream yes so much) 9/10 for pacing (almost perfect good work on that) 7/10 for descriptive scenery (a bit hard to understand but still nominal) and finally 9/10 for originality (Chrome pony, and apps... very new concept, that i have yet to see!) total score is..... *drum roll*
8.8/10! fantastic score!
this is cool, I would like more of like this.
1015614...
brohoof /)
From someone who uses his iPad 7 hours a day, I have to say this better make sense. And this web browser= pony idea is officially overdone.
1018108 (\ brohoof
dam now you made me to find an icon like that
This was awesome. Now continue it pl0x.
please dont be just a one shot. but anyways i enjoyed the story quite a bit. you sir get 5/5 stashes
God, if my internet browser was conscious, it would hate me.
har haar! I got chrome to! Browser never "breaks" unexpectedly.
Oh my mother of Celestia that was actually fantastic.
omgsh i love this story :D
i mean reallly, its so friggin amazing that i wanna fall asleep wit my earbuds in my ipod and see what happens
>:O
ARGH ASDF RAGE etc. unfair man i wanna have a web-browser like that on my ipod
Update. NAOW
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Yes
I enjoyed this
... i did exactly as was instructed...
WHY I NO MEET CHROME PONY
Great chapter! Totally worth the wait!
So cute! Why can't I make out with my internet app? Well, I guess it would be weird if Chrome made out with Chrome... Hell, I'd still do it.
I wish i could do that on my computer.
D'awww this story is so sweet.
I love it, damn why did anyone came with this idea before because its genius.
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MLPFan12 I know right.