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AmberRoss


Fanfiction author from Ohio.

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Rainbow Dash's biggest dream has always been to join the Wonderbolts, but it doesn't seem to be working out for her. With the help of her friends, she decides to start up a new stunt flying team, in the hopes that it will prepare her for a new year of training. Will she overcome her attitude and make the team, or move on to something new?

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 6 )

Verey nice. this story was really well written and it was fumy in a cleaver way.

Now you could have laid of the "how small is ponyville" jokes. at first is was funny but then it stared sounding like whining.

AT first I was put off by who played the team mates and the couch, and part of me still is,m but you dd sucks a great job in pulling this off I cant get mad.

this story is a fantastic read. Good work.

:twilightblush:8 out of 10:twilightblush:

Fantastic, and the reasons why Rainbow can't fly in formation make perfect sense. Gilda a couch was a nice touch. I wish you would write more chapters on this line, a underdog flight team story series would be pretty sweet.

Also, first comment is spam? Really?

Yeah, spammy jerks! :twilightangry2:

A series may be a possibility at this point. Most of my stories link together though, so the Dash Pack will pop up some more!

Very nice story. Needs extensive editing, but a very enjoyable read.

This story needs more views. And a sequel. Go forth and reproduce.

Love this story to bits, but I don't like how Pinkie treats Surprise. Dunno, it just kind of seems out of character. Anyway, Love how you included G1, that has my favorite ponies (and my all time fave Firefly). I wish it had more chapters or a sequel or something though..

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