1. Published 1st Aug 2012
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Rarity's Generous Plan - GenericUsername

Rarity decides that her friends need some rather unorthodox help to become better friends.

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#1 · 161w, 22h ago · 1 · ·

I can't for the life of me why people upload stories written by other people. Why don't people just do it themselves?

Oh wait, that's right. Most of us do. :facehoof:

#2 · 161w, 22h ago · 3 · ·

NO.Just NO.I don't care if this is intentinaly bad,you should feel bad.

#3 · 161w, 22h ago · 1 · ·

I read this previously and found it to be an out of character excuse to throw a bunch of random rape fics together. Hence the thumbs down.

#4 · 161w, 22h ago · 1 · 5 ·

I came to this.

Have an upvote.

#5 · 161w, 21h ago · 3 · ·

However, will getting raped really help her friends mature as ponies

:twilightangry2:all of my FUCK NO :flutterrage:


#6 · 161w, 21h ago · 1 · ·

I can imagine Rarity trying to hook up her friends. I don't see it turning into rape.

#7 · 161w, 21h ago · · ·

>>1008198 Perfect avatar pic for that comment.

#8 · 161w, 21h ago · · ·


#9 · 161w, 21h ago · 5 · ·

"However, will getting raped really help her friends mature as ponies"


You do NOT trivialize rape like that. I understand that people have kinks, but that statement alone is just one big slap in the face to ANYONE that's suffered from the emotional turmoil, the stress and the IRREVERSIBLE trauma that sexual abuse can deliver.  

It's rare that a story manages to piss me off in the description alone. Good job, original author. Good. Fucking. Job.

#11 · 161w, 21h ago · · ·


I'd certainly advise not reading further, if at all possible. It will only aggravate your sensibilities. It is unfortunate, in the world's current state, we've begun to forget how terrible some things truly are.

#12 · 161w, 21h ago · · ·

Do you have Tozac's permission to post this here?

*reads editor's note*

You do not. I'm sorry, but the word "stealing" won't leave my head.

Now for the fic itself: the only chapter I like is the Fluttershy one. I can't really classify that as "rape," since Big Mac is horny out of his mind and therefor can't think straight.

Every other chapter though, I'll happily skip.

But I still think you made a bad move uploading this here, honestly, especially without the original author's permission.

#13 · 161w, 20h ago · · 1 ·


Actually, that's an excellent point.

From the FAQ:

Don't Post:

. . .

Stories that you did not write, unless you have explicit permission from the author, AND have discussed it with the moderation team.

He pretty much said right there that he didn't have explicit permission from the author. Wanna take bets on whether he talked to the mods?

#14 · 161w, 20h ago · · ·


Now that you mention it: I gave the E/N another read, and apparently, he got Poultron's permission to post it.

I guess only Poultron can settle this to clarify any issues, yet I don't he'll be able to find the time to resolve this, busy as he is.

But still. Only 1 out of 2 criteria has been met (supposedly), so this still shouldn't be here.

#15 · 161w, 20h ago · · ·


True. My mistake as well.

#16 · 161w, 20h ago · 1 · ·


Just to note something here: The original author, Tozac, stressed in his posts regarding the story how much Rarity is screwed up for believing that. I also don't think the fic presented what she was doing in a positive way.

What I'm trying to say is: I wouldn't blame the introduction found here on Tozac.

#17 · 161w, 20h ago · · 3 ·

You guys are all fucking retarded idiots for disliking this.

#18 · 161w, 19h ago · 7 · ·

Wow this story is amazing.

Rarity is so perfectly in character and raping and mentally destroying some of the most innocent, loveable and well-rounded characters is a really big turn on of mine

Quote from: Hopefully not a single fucking person in existence.

Seriously. I hate you. I hate you so much. Meet a rape victim. A real one. A real, honest to god rape victim.Then trivialize ponies with such disgusting imagery. Have a mental illness, or PTSD, and then do something like this.

As someone who actually has very severe PTSD and has seriously loved a very, very unfortunate victim I can honestly tell you that this is the most offensive and insulting thing I have ever, ever seen. I can tell you and the author are neither.

You destroy the characterizations and... Look. Really. I can't get this clear enough: Anyone who fantasizes about rape needs to be removed from humanity as quickly as possible. Anybody who fantasizes and puts this much time and effort into raping ponies and enjoying the destruction of their psyche? I don't know how their bodies haven't simply shut down in self defense.

But if you not only took the time to read the story, the whole way through, and not only just like it but actually re-write it to "improve" it...

Your parents have obviously failed humanity and you have failed as a human being. You sicken me.

#19 · 161w, 19h ago · 1 · ·

>>1008518 Uhm, being horny and not thinking straight is an excuse for ra... ah, right, "not-rape"? I think you might want to think again.:pinkiesick:

#20 · 161w, 19h ago · 1 · 2 ·

Man, the moral circle jerk going on in here is amazing.

#21 · 161w, 19h ago · 1 · 1 ·


This right here.

#23 · 161w, 18h ago · · ·


Yeah, I gave him permission, he claims he could not contact the original author. If you can contact him, then I'll take further action.

#24 · 161w, 18h ago · · ·

Oh no, first Coal Buck disappeared, and now his guy. My theory is true.

#25 · 161w, 17h ago · 4 · ·

Oh dear fucking christ no.

RGP?! HERE?! Oh god, no. For anyone who doesn't know, this fic is legendary. It's like Cupcakes, except it isn't written like shit. It's out of character as you can possibly get, but holy shit, is some of the rape well written (as much as I hate to say it).

Cupcakes is just bland shock fic, this is a shock fic with well written shocking content, and that makes it fucking disturbing. Is this a good fic? Overall, no. Definitely not. Is it worth reading? No, and I would advise against it. Is it fucking disturbing with well-written intentionally disturbing rape? Dear god, yes.

#26 · 161w, 17h ago · 1 · ·

i'm not offended i'm not angry i'm not even upset i just didn't like the story at all, thumbs down.

#27 · 161w, 17h ago · · 3 ·

prudes be swarming this story.

#28 · 161w, 17h ago · · ·

Rarity is so out of character here that it defies all reason. It's a totally different character with the same name. Chapter 1 switches between colt and stallion seemingly interchangeably, when they are two different things.

As for the plot itself... Are you sure this wasn't written just to make bronies look bad? :facehoof:

#29 · 161w, 17h ago · · ·


I have been unable to speak with Tozac in any way since October last year. If you have any way of contacting him, please do so, I'd very much like to talk with him again.

#30 · 161w, 17h ago · 1 · ·



The Fluttershy and Big Mac one, WAS rape, but it wasn't just Flutters that was raped. You could think that Big Mac was raped too, as he was drugged into it. Of all the chapters, that one is the only one that was halfway decent, and even then it was a still a big, steaming pile of shit. Granted it was well written and that, from what I understand, gives it a few notches above cupcakes in terms of bad, but still bad.

note - never read cupcakes, never will, came close and held out, and yes I do reference it in my story but that's based off of reviews and other people mentioning it. IE: I know general plot, don't need the details.

#31 · 161w, 15h ago · · ·


I am aware of the colt/stallion problem, filly and mare are also mixed like this. However, I can't really fix that, since that would be changing the story, and that I can't do.

#32 · 161w, 14h ago · · ·




I do believe I owe all of you an apology. Seems like I've managed to run my mouth once again. I was only quite skeptical about the legitimacy of the editor's note, but clearly it's as legit as can get. If at any time it seemed I was insinuating GenericUsername was bending the truth, then I do apologize, that wasn't my intention at all.

Also, thank you Poultron for reassuring us.

And I'm sorry, I never had any contact whatsoever with Tozac, so I'm afraid I cannot offer any assistance there.

And not to spread wild rumors around or anything (if they haven't already), but seeing as apparently Tozac hasn't given a single sign of life for over eight months, do you think there might be the possibility that maybe, just maybe, he might have... you know, passed away? Again, I have no idea if that's what happened, just throwing the possibility out there.

Also, >>1009084, I meant pretty much what >>1009646 said. Mac realizes afterwards what he did was bad and is terribly ashamed of himself, so that's why I think that chapter is pretty much the only "good" one in there.

#33 · 161w, 14h ago · · ·


No worries, no hard feelings. However, while there's always the possibility that Tozac has passed away, I think he just decided to quit the fandom. It has happened before that people have just left, but unless he comes back, we'll never know.

#34 · 161w, 14h ago · 1 · 1 ·


While your serious case of butthurtniss is very amusing, it's also very sad.

I'm very sorry that someone you loved became a victim, but you have to separate fiction from reality. I didn't rape her, nor did Tozac, his story, or any of the other 30+ people who faved it. Writing, reading or liking a story like this doesn't make you a rapist.  It doesn't make you a bad person. These are words on a screen, they can't hurt anyone. Reading the Holy Bible didn't turn me into a Christian fanatic, nor did reading the Quran turn me into an islamist, and after reading Mein Kampf I have never been more convinced about what a complete idiot Adolf Hitler was. The same thing applies to movies.

Watching Salò, or the 120 Days of Sodom didn't turn me into a child rapist, nor does it make me a bad person. Watching Saw, Hostel, The Human Centipede, Frontiers and Srpski Film didn't turn me into a sociopathic serial killer nor did it in any way diminish my value as a person.

I suggest pulling your head out of your ass saying 'hello' to reality.

#35 · 161w, 14h ago · · ·


"Anyone who fantasizes about rape needs to be removed from humanity as quickly as possible."

That would be a whole lot of people, some of them rape survivors themselves. Some of them after it happened.

#36 · 161w, 13h ago · 3 · 3 ·


Well done, now, can we please move past the straw man argument here and focus on the real issue:

Reading Meine Kampf doesn't make you a Nazi. Being the author, however, does. Reading the bible doesn't make you religious. Taking the message to heart does.

There is a very, very clear distinction.

Those movies you listed are aimed directly at the physical aspect of it.

This story, which you yourself rewrote, not only attacks that with the scenes themselves but derives giddy pleasure from the psychological destruction it causes too. You also have to break character a huge amount just to achieve these scenes in question, but you also keep them perfectly in character once the actual horror starts. That's what fiction can do though: Unlike a movie it can show you what's inside the characters mind. This fiction just happens to love focusing on only the horrible, awful things. In great detail.

For pleasure.

It's not just like in a movie where it's physical trauma. Here you are doing this for the express purpose of enjoying rape and only rape of characters that everyone here loves.

Why do you enjoy the rape of the characters you love? I surely hope you don't.

Enjoying that is wrong and deeply disturbing on a very fundamental level.

Hell, even The Human Centipede had more plot then simply "Ass to Mouth. End Movie."

Don't give me bullshit about how reality is separated from or a movie or I'll have to wave some goddamn degrees I have in media analysis, and I don't want to be that guy.

I've mentioned that in my own story, though, which is a ponified version of Nightmare On Elm Street and the Mane 6 reactions to watching it.them. Ehen the person who is merging THAT movie (A lighthearted comedy that already features a graphic death scene) with ponies tells you you are crossing the line for merging something with ponies that is far too graphic?

You are crossing the line. End of story.

#37 · 161w, 13h ago · 4 · 2 ·


Roleplay in the bedroom is different to actual rape fantasy like this.

There's a big difference between consensual non-consensual and flat out non-consensual.

That victim I mentioned? Very into Dom/Sub type stuff as the sub. Very against rape, for obvious reasons.

There's a line crossed between harmless and harmful fantasy. It's important to stop trying to justify it to yourself once you cross that line.

#38 · 161w, 13h ago · 3 · 2 ·


The fact remains that this is a work of fiction. It details fictional characters and fictional events, fictional feelings and fictional consequences. This is not real, and liking this does not make you a rapist. Any parallels you draw to real events are entirely made up by you.

Also, I find this statement very interesting:

"Anyone who fantasizes about rape needs to be removed from humanity as quickly as possible."

Really now? Because someone enjoys a work of fiction, you want them executed? And how should you go about that? Hang them? A merciful lethal injection? Or do you think you should inflict upon them the things they fantasize about? And who will be the judge that decides when the line is crossed, and someone to be sent to die?

#39 · 161w, 13h ago · 1 · 2 ·


The ends (Fiction) don't justify the means (A lot of incredibly detailed planning on how to write said fiction and plan the emotions.)

Liking this does not make you a rapist. It does, though, make you a sick human being.

Ha. Removed from humanity isn't necessarily referring to death, no.

No, I don't wish rapists, of any extent, to suffer in any way. Again, straw man argument.

They do, however, need to be taken away from society in some way for the good of everyone around them.

#40 · 161w, 13h ago · · ·


OK, so clarify for me then, ought Tozac and I be "taken away from society"?

#41 · 161w, 13h ago · · ·


How does one put a youtube video in a comment?

#42 · 161w, 12h ago · 1 · 3 ·


Until you find treatment, yes, yes I do. A sexual fixation on rape is actually very, very psychologically destructive.

To you and all your readers it seems.

When something is this well written but gets this many downvotes you know it's not the writing that is being so loathed.

#43 · 161w, 12h ago · 1 · 1 ·

Excuse me, future readers of this comment, but I have perfect permissions to lose my composure for a minute. I honestly am so sorry for what is to occur, Im just that type of guy who hates my angry side, and therefore I keep all of my anger and testosterone bottled up...you are about to see the results of such acts ;



15 Minutes of Time to 'Cool Down' Later...


Again I am so-so-so-so-so-so-so-so-so-so-so-so-so-so-so-so-so SORRY.

Hopefully this oh-so-sexy image of me will help you all forgive

me...[img]I.imgur.com/zTUJT.jpg [/img]

#45 · 161w, 12h ago · · ·


Look here everybody, we've got ourselves an honest-to-goodness PhD in psychology talking!

#46 · 161w, 11h ago · 3 · 1 ·


I honestly don't feel like commenting on this story, as I haven't read or plan to read it, but you are stupid beyond belief. :facehoof:

For one, in the E/N, it says SPECIFICALLY that all that was done was proofreading. No re-write, no "improving", as you claim. Using your argument of holding the author responsible, the only person you should be angry at is Tozac. Also: are you honestly claiming that every person who republished and painstakingly translated Mein Kampf since WWII was a nazi?

#47 · 161w, 11h ago · · 3 ·


Meh, don't waste your breath doing anything other than simply mocking them.

Assuming they're being honest when they say they "loved a victim," and not just being a member of the intardnet, all of this is a knee-jerk reaction to something they don't like by locking down in, "IT'S WRONG AND I WILL CRUSADE IN THE NAME OF RIGHTEOUSNESS"...ess...ness...mode.  Or something like that.  Anything you say is just going to make you another bad guy and "rape apologist," or so has the phrase become popular lately.

And if they're, more than likely, making shit up to sound more experienced - then fuck them and their bullshit.


#48 · 161w, 11h ago · · ·


But I'm quite glad he reacted the way he did, it truly made for todays entertainment, and it made up for missing 200m butterfly final yesterday.

#49 · 161w, 11h ago · 3 · ·

>>1010682 Now you're being a jerk. Rape in real life is a really serious thing, and people are going to have strong reactions to stories like this one because of it. Particularly if they've been affected in RL in some way.

There are two ways to handle that. You can either handle it like an adult: recognize that it's a divisive issue and show some tact while defending the right of the story to be posted (since there are people who enjoy this type of content but don't go on to become actual rapists, going by the thumbs).

Or you can do what you're doing right now. Going by the earlier comments, you posted it here to give Tozac's work some more visibility, and that's fine. Just remember that since you posted it, YOU represent Tozac's work right now. When you act like this, it reflects on Tozac and the story too.

#50 · 161w, 11h ago · 1 · ·


I could act maturely, and I probably should, but I find it rather amusing to be told that I should be sent away from society until I can find treatment, because I read this story and fixed a few spelling errors.

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