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DeiStar 17583

Joined April 2012
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    DeiStar's Stories (17)

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    It's been a hard day of study, and Twilight needs to rest for her upcoming test. However, not everything will go as expected when a certain mosquito barges into her room. What will Twilight do?

    First Published
    31st Jul 2012
    Last Modified
    31st Jul 2012

    Comments ( 36 )

    #1 · 42w, 1d ago · · ·
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    All my PTSD triggers.

    #2 · 42w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Very good fic sir, although I have one major criticism. The lack of a Slice-of-Life tag. I swear, whenever this happens to me, I will not shy away from using my improvised deodorant flamethrower. Take that, you whiny, blood sucking bastard :pinkiecrazy:

    #3 · 42w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Story of my life....

    #4 · 42w, 1d ago · · ·
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    What? A comedy one-shot that has nothing to do with a suggestive misunderstanding? How refreshing :twilightsmile:. I have to ask, was this partially inspired by the 'Fly' episode of Breaking Bad?

    #5 · 42w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Somehow I immediately thought of Soul Eater when I read "Mosquito"

    I will read this later.

    :coolphoto:

    #6 · 42w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1006539

    I think many people can relate with having those issues as well, eh? :twilightblush:

    >>1006558

    Naw, just common things that happen in life. Like a damn mosquito annoying you when trying to sleep.

    #7 · 42w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1006558 Suggestive misunderstanding. The cause of, and solution to, every boring fiction out there :twilightoops: :scootangel:

    #8 · 42w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Love it!!! :yay:

    #9 · 42w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1006560 Same. Is that the "mosquito" that this fic has in it?

    #10 · 42w, 1d ago · · ·
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    An amusing read, very good :rainbowlaugh:

    #11 · 42w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1006562 Aye, nothing can match the adrenaline rush of hiding under the covers, praying there is no breach in your defences. And then wondering how much oxygen is left. And if it is worth the risk to open the covers, even for a second. :twilightoops: And that is how Equestria was made :pinkiehappy:

    #12 · 42w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1006580 I have no idea, but I shall find out tomorrow or whenever I get to read it.

    :coolphoto:

    #13 · 42w, 1d ago · · ·
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    The mosquito's a clever little bastard. You can track him for days and days until you really get to know him like a friend. He knows you're there, and you know he's there. It's a game of wits. You hate him, then you respect him, then you kill him.

    :twilightangry2:

    #14 · 42w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Poor Twilight, all she wanted to do was go to sleep for the exam and that annoying Mosquito wanted to do everything in it's power to annoy her.

    #15 · 42w, 1d ago · · ·
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    #17 · 42w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Very good! I mean, you killed off the characters in the end and the fic's still enjoyable.

    Helps that it's not particularly grimdark, just crazy Looney Tunes stuff.

    #19 · 42w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Been there lol luckily I was allowed to come back down from heaven for ponies

    #20 · 42w, 1d ago · · ·
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    > Tiny mosquito in your house.

    > Use magical nuke.

    Seems legit.

    #21 · 42w, 1d ago · · ·
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    After she made the first barrier, since it was obvious she had tons of magical energy left, she could have created a second "barrier" around the mosquito to trap it. Then she could have flung it out the window.

    #22 · 42w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Happens to me, and I always feel like doing what Twilight did... ok, not blowing the place up, but you know what I mean.

    #23 · 42w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1006539 Deodorant? Wussy; i'll whip out the friggin' butane torch! its incineration and light to see by all in one! Also useful for making lighting the birthday cake candles badass and for removing pesky curtains from windows! :pinkiecrazy:

    #24 · 42w, 1d ago · · ·
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    So Twilight killed herself in an attempt to kill a mosquito? :pinkiehappy: I guess you could say she committed pesticide. (Rim-shot.)

    My weapon of choice against the little buggers is a wet washcloth, which can be used like a flail, or thrown with surprising accuracy. I have actually caught them in midair before, though I haven't done it in a while.

    #25 · 42w, 23h ago · · ·
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    I feel for ya Twilight. I feel for ya.

    Terrorizing her in death? That's terrible. You are a terrible, terrible, famous, terrible person.

    #26 · 42w, 23h ago · · ·
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    That's all folks!

    #27 · 42w, 16h ago · · ·
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    Mosquitoes... words cannot accurately describe the utter loathing I have for those blood sucking fiends. If I hear one, I go on high alert. Because sure enough, I'll get bit. I always do. Camp in a group of 20 people, no one gets bit, I wake up, bitten all over.

    Mosquitoes... I'm with Twilight on this one, if you have to blow up everything like Daffy Duck to do it, I'll support your decision. I once considered buying a bug zapper and hanging it in my room one summer but never ended up doing it. I can relate to this story.

    Those horrible buzzing sucking itch-inducing disease-carrying sneaky little bitches. :twilightangry2:

    Also, good story.

    #28 · 42w, 12h ago · · ·
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    I did something very close to this when I played modern warfare 2. I managed to get a nuke, and a mosquito started bothering me. I hit it with my controller and called the nuke in.:twilightsmile:

    #29 · 41w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Annoying Mosquito's are a pain like no other.

    #31 · 41w, 3d ago · · ·
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    You have just earned yourself a fave.

    #32 · 39w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Who doesn't hate those tiny little bastards...they annoy the shit out of me...always. Good story, love it.

    :coolphoto:

    #33 · 39w, 15h ago · · ·
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    I know your pain Twilight...i know your pain...those things MUST DIE! :twilightangry2:

    P.S. another BRILLIENT story and another poor Twilight moment

    #34 · 34w, 3d ago · · ·
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    bahahaha :rainbowkiss: ... :rainbowlaugh:

    #35 · 31w, 6d ago · · ·
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    A wild annoying mosquito appeared!

    Twilight used Random Spell!

    It's super effective!

    Twilight killed herself in the process!

    :twilightsmile:: Worth it.

    :trollestia: mosquito: hi

    :pinkiecrazy: :Shit.

    #36 · 18w, 6d ago · · ·
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    never expected this to be quite funny!!:rainbowlaugh:

    silly me, there is a comedy tag right there!!:facehoof:

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