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Jet Howitzer

Joined February 2012
984 followers

If you close your eyes, it's like nothing's ever changed.

Stories (23)

  • I Would Give to You
    You move to Ponyville, and a certain mare catches your eye, but are you right for her?

    51,178 words · 5,370 views · 576 likes · 17 dislikes
  • Faster Than Light
    An Astronaut finds himself quite a long way from home... Quite a long way indeed.
    22,034 words · 3,633 views · 475 likes · 14 dislikes
  • Tears of an Angel
    It's hard to recover from a loss. Even harder to recover when the pony you turn to has problems too
    18,186 words · 2,306 views · 229 likes · 6 dislikes
  • Faux Pas of the Heart
    You've been trading letters with a certain fashion pony, and you'll finally get to meet her.
    53,520 words · 3,398 views · 383 likes · 13 dislikes
  • The Color of Apples
    40,734 words · 8,738 views · 736 likes · 33 dislikes
  • Opportunity
    1,308 words · 665 views · 78 likes · 1 dislikes
  • In Tenebrae Invenit (In Darkness Found)
    19,690 words · 2,546 views · 105 likes · 3 dislikes
  • Rising Sun
    74,923 words · 6,807 views · 461 likes · 28 dislikes
  • Wander
    8,044 words · 275 views · 33 likes · 0 dislikes
  • Artistic Grandeur
    1,325 words · 436 views · 44 likes · 3 dislikes

Blog Posts (187)


You spent quite a bit of your time back home honing your flying skills, but an accident grounds you.  Without a place to stay any longer, you move in with your cousin, who gladly takes you in.  However, you take note of a mare in town, and you begin to wonder if there could be more to life than flying...

Sequel to The Color of Apples.  Reading The Color of Apples isn't really necessary, but I do recommend it, as some events may not make sense without the context.

As of 9/14/12 10:53 Eastern time Approval rating is 97.6804%

First Published
31st Jul 2012
Last Modified
19th Oct 2012

Comments ( 594 )

#1 · Chapter 1 · 104w, 2d ago · · ·

Thank you! i just finished the color of apples yesterday and was wondering when i could see this. i bow to your expert timing.:pinkiehappy:

#2 · Chapter 1 · 104w, 2d ago · · ·

Awesome Possum

#3 · Chapter 1 · 104w, 2d ago · · ·

I already love it! :rainbowlaugh:

#5 · Chapter 1 · 104w, 2d ago · · ·

Hmmm a mystery about what happen to him I see where this is going already.:ajsmug:

#6 · Chapter 1 · 104w, 2d ago · · ·

Cool, keep it up.

#7 · Chapter 1 · 104w, 2d ago · · ·

This is what everypony was hoping for. I kind of wish there was more to this chapter, but I'm more than content with waiting for more :scootangel:

#8 · Chapter 1 · 104w, 2d ago · · ·

How unlucky of him to do that twice

#9 · Chapter 1 · 104w, 2d ago · · ·

Round two already? My my Twilight dear you are popular..

#10 · Chapter 1 · 104w, 2d ago · · ·

saw the story name, meh, looked at description, blah blah, the colour of apples, blah, wait what. :rainbowderp: .... :pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy: FAVA!!

#11 · Chapter 1 · 104w, 2d ago · · ·

....my god.... the legends are true. There IS a sequel!!!!!:pinkiehappy::twilightblush:

#12 · Chapter 1 · 104w, 2d ago · · ·

:pinkiegasp: That was a pretty good start for your sequel. As always your story gives me that image of true greatness and awesomeness. Keep up the good work :ajsmug:

#13 · Chapter 1 · 104w, 1d ago · · ·

I'm liking this already. and YAY sequel woohoo!! :pinkiehappy:

#14 · Chapter 1 · 104w, 1d ago · · ·

Plz moar this storyline is AWSOME! Also (random time ) I submitted a new story how long does it usually take to be approved?

#15 · Chapter 1 · 104w, 1d ago · · ·

Twilight shipfic! Yesyesyesyesyesyes!

#16 · Chapter 1 · 104w, 1d ago · · ·

cant wait for more

#17 · Chapter 1 · 104w, 1d ago · · ·

First things first; mistakes. Although I'm not sure that this would count as a mistake (as it is not part of the story) but you messed up the story's name so that 'would' isn't capitalized. Should be 'I Would Give to You'. Also, 'You’d left home less than twenty four hours ago,' twenty-four should have a hyphen. One more thing, 'After I moved away from Cloudsdale contact with her became harder and harder.' Right after 'Cloudsdale' there should be a comma. Sounds weird without it.

Well now that that's out of the way, Great start to a great story. And I see that this takes place during the whole Applejack missing incident. I also liked how you foreshadowed the two stallions in the suit and stetson hat, respectively, although it seemed a little, I dunno, out of place? You seem to put emphasis on them all of a sudden, and then, just as quickly, forget about them. But meh, why would this 'you' have to worry about them, right? There's also, 'A new beginning awaits us all, you just need to find, and open, the door to your new future.' All I'm thinking of is Keyblade, because of this.

One last thing, 'Then there was the accident, and everything changed.' 'You were the best flyer in Fillydelphia, but everything changed when the Fire Nation attacked.' ....I had to again...

#18 · Chapter 1 · 104w, 1d ago · · ·

You did excellent, infact all your fanfics is really good! continue the good work buddy! really excited for the next chapter :yay: also im going to follow you :pinkiehappy:

#19 · Chapter 1 · 104w, 20h ago · · ·

So, does this happen after The Color of Apples, or during roughly the same time frame?

#20 · Chapter 1 · 104w, 20h ago · · ·

^same question

#21 · Chapter 1 · 104w, 13h ago · · ·

>>1015189  >>1015225 I would say it takes place just after Scoots finds the letter and AJ and T are off to find T's sister, so at the same time, near the end.


Damnit Howitzer adding more RS hints.

#22 · Chapter 1 · 103w, 5d ago · · ·

Bwaahahahaha! Bloody brilliant so far! I enjoy how you write Howitzer, keep it up! Thumbed-up and faved, just like the last story!

#23 · Chapter 1 · 103w, 3d ago · · ·

:pinkiegasp: Another second person story after perhaps the greatest Aj ship (not that im a huge fan of shipping. Some are good) of all time? Howitzer, dude, you've made your heavenly contribution to us mortals. Txt me wen u get 2 valhalla

#24 · Chapter 2 · 103w, 1d ago · · ·

am i first? btw awesome story

#25 · Chapter 2 · 103w, 1d ago · · ·

This chapter made the wait worth it, and now comes the long, unberable wait until Ch 3 come ot.

#26 · Chapter 2 · 103w, 1d ago · · ·

another brialliant chapter, keep it up.

#27 · Chapter 2 · 103w, 1d ago · · ·

Immense amounts of magic you say? I think we might just have some of that here somewhere. :rainbowlaugh: Clever play there Howitzer, and really glad to see an update to this!:twilightsmile:

#28 · Chapter 2 · 103w, 1d ago · · ·

Loving the story. Here is one mistake that I found.

“I’m ready to go Flutterhsy.”

Pretty easy fix. Other than that, the story seems good for grammar & spelling.

Can't wait for chapter 3!

#29 · Chapter 2 · 103w, 1d ago · · ·

>>1048951

That has got to be one of the cutest pictures I have ever seen.

#30 · Chapter 2 · 103w, 1d ago · · ·

Was that platypus for me<3:rainbowkiss:

#31 · Chapter 2 · 103w, 1d ago · · ·

>>1049094 Thanks. I found it one day while roaming the internet, and when i saw it i was like, "I must have this".

#32 · Chapter 2 · 103w, 1d ago · · ·

She looked up at you as you approached, and she had a large smile on her face.  “I’m ready to go Flutterhsy.”  

not to be a grammer nazi but i though i'd point that out

great chapter i'm looking forward to more

#33 · Chapter 2 · 103w, 1d ago · · ·

Totally worth the wait my good sir. :ajsmug: Although I'm really waiting for RD to come into the picture.:rainbowwild: Not because she's my favorite but she'll be good for getting some more information on our hero. :rainbowhuh: oh and one more thing...needs more applejack :ajbemused: :D

#34 · Chapter 2 · 103w, 1d ago · · ·

Sequel...I think I just died a little..... Of happiness ooooooooooooophhhhhhhhh yyyyyeeeaaahhh :rainbowkiss:

#35 · Chapter 2 · 103w, 1d ago · · ·

>>1049324That would be impossible. She was leaving with Taupe as this guy was coming into PonyVille.

#36 · Chapter 2 · 103w, 1d ago · · ·

>>1048910  It seems that you are first.  And thanks, I do like to think I write good stories.

>>1048951  Hopefully it won't be too long till I get out the next chapter.

>>1049041  I aim to do just that.

>>1049071  Well, it looks like things might work out for you.  I've just got this feeling I can't quite shake...

>>1049073  Mistake has been fixed.  Thanks.

>>1049094  Agreed.

>>1049098  ... Maybe.

>>1049197  Do you enjoy your apple juice?

>>1049201  I appreciate you pointing out the mistake.  I'd rather be informed of things like this, than left in the dark.

>>1049324  Dash will be showing up soon enough, have no fear.  As for Applejack?  Well, you'll have to wait a few in-story days for her to even have a chance of showing up, given that she's off having some 'fun' in Manehattan.

>>1049494  Don't die just yet.  I've got plenty more to write for this before you can die.

>>1050458  At least, it'll be impossible for a few days.  They do make it back in time for the Summer Sun Festival.

#37 · Chapter 2 · 103w, 1d ago · · ·

>>1050591Meh,screw your logic.

:pinkiesmile:Someone call me?

Wha- Pinkie, what are you doing here?

:pinkiesmile:I heard someone say screw logic. I thought you were calling my name.

No, I wasn't. Sorry Pinkie

:pinkiesad2:Oh, do you not want me around?

No, no it's not like that. I, you, but...

:pinkiesad2:?

Hey Pinkie, is that a new pony? Maybe you should throw him a party.

:pinkiehappy:OhmygoshanewponyIhavetogosayhi

Celestia... that was close.

#38 · Chapter 2 · 103w, 1d ago · · ·

>>1050591

The fun of doooooooom! :applejackconfused:

#39 · Chapter 2 · 103w, 1d ago · · ·

>>1050591 Yes, i enjoy it very much.

#40 · Chapter 2 · 103w, 1d ago · · ·

Fuck that one dislike... Fuck it hard. I mean, the writing style is almost perfect, the details extravagant, and the plot unfolding slowly! Who could ask for more from a story?

#41 · Chapter 2 · 103w, 1d ago · · ·

Wow, one dislike? I would make a joke about it, but I would be unoriginal. Anyways, great chapter! Definitely worth the wait.

#42 · Chapter 2 · 103w, 1d ago · · ·

What's this!? A plot setup!? My my I was wondering where that would come from. Nicely painted, now it's time for the plot guided narrative missile.

#43 · Chapter 2 · 103w, 1d ago · · ·

:pinkiehappy: great chapter! Pinkie has plans :pinkiecrazy: Anyways nice chapter. MOAR! :flutterrage: i mean. If you can :fluttercry:

#44 · Chapter 2 · 103w, 23h ago · · ·

Very good so far. I have to say Taupe is an odd name for the Reader's character in Color of Apples. Not to say it's a bad name. Its a bit like Dell Conaghier. Not bad, but definitely unique.

Anyway, love this story, its going in my Favourites list. I eagerly await more.

#45 · Chapter 3 · 102w, 5d ago · · ·

Would you look at that. A feature. I have yet to read this, though. :P

#46 · Chapter 3 · 102w, 5d ago · · ·

very good chapter. No grammatical errors as far as i can tell, and it flows nicely, so well done!

#47 · Chapter 3 · 102w, 5d ago · · ·

Mistakes: Fourth paragraph. "Would you get some music going." Needs a question mark.

Seventh paragraph. "Flutterhsy"

Aside from the wingboner thing (a concept I always thought was stupid), very good chapter! Twi and the reader character already make a cute couple, and set up the next chapter to be rather interesting. Good job!

#48 · Chapter 3 · 102w, 5d ago · · ·

Good chapter, I'm liking this story more and more! :pinkiehappy:

Next chapter should be just as good and I look forward to it. :twilightsmile:

#49 · Chapter 3 · 102w, 5d ago · · ·

ME GUSTA

#50 · Chapter 3 · 102w, 5d ago · · ·

amazing as always.

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