Thank you! i just finished the color of apples yesterday and was wondering when i could see this. i bow to your expert timing.

Awesome Possum

I already love it!

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Please?

Hmmm a mystery about what happen to him I see where this is going already.

Cool, keep it up.

This is what everypony was hoping for. I kind of wish there was more to this chapter, but I'm more than content with waiting for more

How unlucky of him to do that twice

Round two already? My my Twilight dear you are popular..

saw the story name, meh, looked at description, blah blah, the colour of apples, blah, wait what. .... FAVA!!

....my god.... the legends are true. There IS a sequel!!!!!

That was a pretty good start for your sequel. As always your story gives me that image of true greatness and awesomeness. Keep up the good work

I'm liking this already. and YAY sequel woohoo!!

Plz moar this storyline is AWSOME! Also (random time ) I submitted a new story how long does it usually take to be approved?

Twilight shipfic! Yesyesyesyesyesyes!

cant wait for more

First things first; mistakes. Although I'm not sure that this would count as a mistake (as it is not part of the story) but you messed up the story's name so that 'would' isn't capitalized. Should be 'I Would Give to You'. Also, 'You’d left home less than twenty four hours ago,' twenty-four should have a hyphen. One more thing, 'After I moved away from Cloudsdale contact with her became harder and harder.' Right after 'Cloudsdale' there should be a comma. Sounds weird without it.

Well now that that's out of the way, Great start to a great story. And I see that this takes place during the whole Applejack missing incident. I also liked how you foreshadowed the two stallions in the suit and stetson hat, respectively, although it seemed a little, I dunno, out of place? You seem to put emphasis on them all of a sudden, and then, just as quickly, forget about them. But meh, why would this 'you' have to worry about them, right? There's also, 'A new beginning awaits us all, you just need to find, and open, the door to your new future.' All I'm thinking of is Keyblade, because of this.

One last thing, 'Then there was the accident, and everything changed.' 'You were the best flyer in Fillydelphia, but everything changed when the Fire Nation attacked.' ....I had to again...

You did excellent, infact all your fanfics is really good! continue the good work buddy! really excited for the next chapter also im going to follow you

So, does this happen after The Color of Apples, or during roughly the same time frame?

^same question

>>10151891015189  >>10152251015225 I would say it takes place just after Scoots finds the letter and AJ and T are off to find T's sister, so at the same time, near the end.

Damnit Howitzer adding more RS hints.

Bwaahahahaha! Bloody brilliant so far! I enjoy how you write Howitzer, keep it up! Thumbed-up and faved, just like the last story!

Another second person story after perhaps the greatest Aj ship (not that im a huge fan of shipping. Some are good) of all time? Howitzer, dude, you've made your heavenly contribution to us mortals. Txt me wen u get 2 valhalla

am i first? btw awesome story

This chapter made the wait worth it, and now comes the long, unberable wait until Ch 3 come ot.

another brialliant chapter, keep it up.

Immense amounts of magic you say? I think we might just have some of that here somewhere. Clever play there Howitzer, and really glad to see an update to this!

Loving the story. Here is one mistake that I found.

“I’m ready to go Flutterhsy.”

Pretty easy fix. Other than that, the story seems good for grammar & spelling.

Can't wait for chapter 3!

>>10489511048951

That has got to be one of the cutest pictures I have ever seen.

Was that platypus for me<3

>>10490941049094 Thanks. I found it one day while roaming the internet, and when i saw it i was like, "I must have this".

She looked up at you as you approached, and she had a large smile on her face.  “I’m ready to go Flutterhsy.”  

not to be a grammer nazi but i though i'd point that out

great chapter i'm looking forward to more

Totally worth the wait my good sir. Although I'm really waiting for RD to come into the picture. Not because she's my favorite but she'll be good for getting some more information on our hero. oh and one more thing...needs more applejack :D

Sequel...I think I just died a little..... Of happiness ooooooooooooophhhhhhhhh yyyyyeeeaaahhh

>>10493241049324That would be impossible. She was leaving with Taupe as this guy was coming into PonyVille.

>>10489101048910  It seems that you are first.  And thanks, I do like to think I write good stories.

>>10489511048951  Hopefully it won't be too long till I get out the next chapter.

>>10490411049041  I aim to do just that.

>>10490711049071  Well, it looks like things might work out for you.  I've just got this feeling I can't quite shake...

>>10490731049073  Mistake has been fixed.  Thanks.

>>10490941049094  Agreed.

>>10490981049098  ... Maybe.

>>10491971049197  Do you enjoy your apple juice?

>>10492011049201  I appreciate you pointing out the mistake.  I'd rather be informed of things like this, than left in the dark.

>>10493241049324  Dash will be showing up soon enough, have no fear.  As for Applejack?  Well, you'll have to wait a few in-story days for her to even have a chance of showing up, given that she's off having some 'fun' in Manehattan.

>>10494941049494  Don't die just yet.  I've got plenty more to write for this before you can die.

>>10504581050458  At least, it'll be impossible for a few days.  They do make it back in time for the Summer Sun Festival.

>>10505911050591Meh,screw your logic.

Someone call me?

Wha- Pinkie, what are you doing here?

I heard someone say screw logic. I thought you were calling my name.

No, I wasn't. Sorry Pinkie

Oh, do you not want me around?

No, no it's not like that. I, you, but...

?

Hey Pinkie, is that a new pony? Maybe you should throw him a party.

OhmygoshanewponyIhavetogosayhi

Celestia... that was close.

>>10505911050591

The fun of doooooooom!

>>10505911050591 Yes, i enjoy it very much.

Fuck that one dislike... Fuck it hard. I mean, the writing style is almost perfect, the details extravagant, and the plot unfolding slowly! Who could ask for more from a story?

Wow, one dislike? I would make a joke about it, but I would be unoriginal. Anyways, great chapter! Definitely worth the wait.

What's this!? A plot setup!? My my I was wondering where that would come from. Nicely painted, now it's time for the plot guided narrative missile.

great chapter! Pinkie has plans Anyways nice chapter. MOAR! i mean. If you can

Very good so far. I have to say Taupe is an odd name for the Reader's character in Color of Apples. Not to say it's a bad name. Its a bit like Dell Conaghier. Not bad, but definitely unique.

Anyway, love this story, its going in my Favourites list. I eagerly await more.

Would you look at that. A feature. I have yet to read this, though. :P

very good chapter. No grammatical errors as far as i can tell, and it flows nicely, so well done!

Mistakes: Fourth paragraph. "Would you get some music going." Needs a question mark.

Seventh paragraph. "Flutterhsy"

Aside from the wingboner thing (a concept I always thought was stupid), very good chapter! Twi and the reader character already make a cute couple, and set up the next chapter to be rather interesting. Good job!

Good chapter, I'm liking this story more and more!

Next chapter should be just as good and I look forward to it.

ME GUSTA

amazing as always.

Not bad, I like how you didn't rush the romance. Most people make that mistake and turn these types of stories into complete poo. But as always. GOOD FREAKING JOB

Not bad, I like how you didn't rush the romance. Most people make that mistake and turn these types of stories into complete poo. But as always. GOOD FREAKING JOB

So the love interest is met.

-attempts to read next 2 chapters-

-gets 502 bullshit-

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on an ipod (4th this month!), ready for moar.

Really good chapter. Well all three were great and I cant wait for more to come. Keep up the good work.

Excellent chapter as always

Oh, Twilight. Anyways, great chapter, monsieur. Only problem I noted was

Now, Pinkie, would you mind getting some music going.

After Pinkie was out the door, you looked to Flutterhsy and Twilight, a questioning look plastered on your face.

Woohoo, I got the 100th thumbs up. xD

Also, loved the new chapter, AND SO THE WAIT BEGINS

"And if you can’t think of something, than I’ll just have to get creative.”

...........

...........

...........

AND THEY F**KED VIGORUSLY FOR HOURS.

jk

AWESOME 3rd chapter bro! Keep it up. (oh, and, please, ummm if you don't mind, ummm please work on RISING SUN NOWWW! , that is, uhhh if you don't mind, of course.  )

Am I the only one to notice how he does something stupid, gets into an argument with his father, then gets 'grounded'? I find that really funny.

>>10687761068776  Finally someone who sees it.

Nice. keep being awsome.

Hmmmmm let me see... 28392374738.9873 jigawatts of magic... too much magic to put a number on... here we are! A shitton of magic! Will this do?

Problem? Apples? This will not be pleasant for those involved, of that I'm fairly certain. I love it, keep it up!

I know nothing of what is to come

"those of you who read apples will know what it is" Crap. I read it, but I still don't know for sure. I must be an idiot Other than that. good job!

Oh FARGING ELL

That is all

The part about how the sun being far away reminded me of a picture, Im gunna have to go find it

I'm always up for some good Twimance.

Oh goodie, another crossover bit with Apples. I imagine it's when AJ and Taupe return, battered but victorious? Can't wait to see what next chapter brings.

Ah yes, as I recall they return with a certain somepony who is in a certain state of health. Interesting to be sure.

>>10085811008581

You were the best flyer in Fillydelphia, but everything changed when the Fire Nation attacked.'

You had no idea how hard i'm laughing.

Man, "I'm" kind of a self-centered jerk. I know we'll be working on that, but still.

>>10709911070991  Maybe...  We'll see.

>>10835201083520  Yeah, it won't be pretty.

>>10835291083529  You and the rest of the world.  Don't worry, things will be clarified next chapter.

>>10836071083607  You can't figure it out?  It's been a day since Taupe left.  Do some figuring, and I think you'll get it.

>>10836661083666  Yeah, that's pretty accurate.

>>10836761083676  I know that picture, but I don't have it...

>>10838391083839  Twi is a good pony.  I like her.

>>10842151084215  It's only been a day.  Too soon for that.

>>10843671084367  It's only been one day.  It's too soon for that to happen.

>>10846681084668  ...  Yeah.  But I'm funnier.  Just you wait.  I'll have a doozy in this story that'll put that joke to shame.

>>10848001084800  It's part of character development.  What fun would this be if we all knew the road would be perfectly smooth?

>>10849791084979

Not a whine, just something that I noticed like a pie in the face. No worries, you tell good stories.

Also, where should I know Storm from again? (derp)

>>10849791084979

Huh. Shows what I know, then.

Fuuuuuuuu! Why u do this to me Howy! I have to go read Apples again now!

>>10849791084979

ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo thanks for the hint, I got it now.

How is he going to get better with the mares if he never gives himself the chance to be good with the mares? And screw his father, guy's a dick.

>>10849791084979

We'll see about that...

...this won't end well in any way, shape, or form, espicially because i'm pretty sure i know what you're talking about.

FIRST

Good chapter

>>10849791084979 YAY I got replied to twice in the same message I feel spechal!

Om Nom Nom!

Sandvich make me strong!

"What does this have to do with me?  I’m not a chicken"

Silly Scootaloo, yes you are.

>>10897581089758

aha

SO AWESOME!

D'AAAAAWWWWW Dude, this was a fantastic chapter as a tie between Apples and Give to You. Great moment between Scoots and...can't remember the main OC, if his name has been mentioned yet . Looking forward to your next chapter

>testing

>testing

I'm loving these crossover moments, it gives an interesting outside perspective to characters that we think we know inside-out, to see them judged by another character is very...ech, somebigimpressivesoundingwordthatIcan'tthinkofrightnow

Here, have some staches'

OH SNAP SON I didn't even know you had posted this yet!

Faving and upvoting beforehand, because I already love all your other stuff.

Howly(Howie? Howdy?), I can't help but be impressed by the rate at which you put out chapters.  Thank you for the lovely stories!

OH GOD NO!

NOW YOURE GONNA KILL SCOOTALOO IN THREE STORIES I JUST REALIZED!!!!!!

WHY WOULD YOU DO IT??!!

I don't believe that I need any more proof to show that this story is fantastic and that Howie is awesome. xD

DR. SEUSS LIKE A BAWS

Really liking the development of the story! And fast enough to keep it interesting. Good on ya, Howitzer