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Redback Spino


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Carried over from EqD

Deep in the Everfree Forest, something has awakened. Something ancient. Something monstrous. Something hungry. What could this mysterious figure be who walks among the trees on legs far longer than any other pony? Where did it come from? And what does it want with Twilight Sparkle?

Chapters (13)
Comments ( 96 )

Ah, a true slender pony story. Very nicely done and written, and I look forward to more.

I really like how you pictured the slender pony. It gives it that extra...chill.

Oh shit son! It's Slendermane! Well written and I shall read more my good fellow!

I was all like come on rainbow save her!:fluttershbad: Then I was all happy when she was saved!:pinkiehappy: Then I read the last bit and I was all scared :pinkiesad2: I will read more, I am hooked!

Oooooooooh, I wonder what is in the book? Read on I shall! (Lol wtf Yoda?)

I need moar! Moar my good sir! I am hooked yet I can read no more! Curses!

The Chest camera from MarbleHornets. Did you get some ideas from those videos :pinkiehappy:

63539 Eyyyup. I take most of my inspiration from three Youtube series: MarbleHornets, TribeTwelve and DarkHavest00

Stupid Slender mane! Y U SO SCARY :twilightangry2:

Very spooky, onto the next chapter!

Oh snap! I can't wait to read more!

This is getting EXCIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIITING!!!!!!! :pinkiegasp:

my dear pony-god....
:pinkiegasp: this is simply epic....
i love it!!!!
:rainbowkiss:

Dun dun duuuuunnnnnnnnnn! Very creepy. Cannot wait for more!:pinkiehappy:

Oooo Princess Celestia is even scared of him!
I wonder what his world is like...

*Shudder*
I can just imagine Thistle's head, like a stepping on a rotten pumpkin. :pinkiesick:

77735 -see's name- :pinkiegasp: TOTHEARK! WTF ARE YO DONG HERE!

~SQUEE~ OMG THIS IS SO EXCITING :rainbowkiss:

I cannot wait! Need moar! This is so exciting bro!:pinkiehappy:

:pinkiecrazy: Story, why u make wait?!?!?!?1?

Yeah...Sorry folks, but it looks like you'll have to wait a while fo the next chapter. Y'see, when I started posting on here, the entire story up to this point was already on EqD, so posting the chapters on here was nice and quick. But it looks like I've caught up with the posts on EqD, so new chapters will be coming alot slower.
Adding to that, I have come down with a serious case of writer's block for this story. It's like, I know what I want to happen, but don't know how to get there or how to write it down.
So, long story short, sorry but it'll probably be a while until the next chapter is up, unless I have some sudden divine inspiration in the next few hours.
But I have some good news too: I may be working on another story on the sidelines. It's probably goin to be considerably lighter and less...well, horrific. As it stands, it looks to be a high-adventure fantasy fic. So stay tuned for any new developments, my loyal fans!

:scootangel:i will wait, im a faithful reader, my sir!

Oh snap! I didn't realize you were the author of 'Ever-Watching'! I love this story! /)

111086 Coal Buck?! Didn't expect to see you on my readers list! Kudos on your story dude, I'm really enjoying it. And thanks for the compliment, it's good to see I have some sort of fanbase!

Oh, and I come bearing good news everyone! (You just read that in Professor Farnsworth's voice)

I have finally started to get over my writer's block! I've had a real bolt out of the blue for this story, and the pieces are finally beginning to fall into place. So, sincerest apologies for making everypony wait so long. I'm part way into the latest chapter, and with some luck, I should have it done and uploaded by this time tomorrow. I should also have a new chapter for "Turn Loose The Hippocampus" up soon too!

So fear not, my loyal fans. The Red one is back, baaaaaayyyyyyyyyybeh!

Poor Fluttershy:fluttershysad:

But wait, since Twilight read it, then she should know where to find her. So she should be fine.

Poor Celestia:fluttershysad:

Going crazy-paranoid is never fun. Even if it's justified.

Oh snap. Fluttershy is going to be okay right? Right?:fluttercry:

112722 You mean the "Te Ante Tempus" note? Well, not really...Here's a hint: Old Equestrian is basically Latin. I'll leave the translating up to you.

Translate's (very roughly) to "The End Time"... 'Time's up' maybe?

i dont think if ever said SHIT at a better time. this story actually sent aa chill down my spine..:rainbowderp:

KEEP IT COMING! (tthe story and not the ....thing...)

as i said earlier.....shit's goona hit the fan:rainbowderp:

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:fluttershysad:

Well that stuff after the Latin was also bold when I first read it, so I thought that was part of the note.

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Like, it was some sort of 4th wall message showing the future type thing.

113112 Oh right. Yeah, that was just a little glitch in the layout:derpyderp2:. Fixed now though.

WAS FLUTTERSHY BURRIED ALIVE OR SOMETHING! OMG! :raritydespair:

Oh dear. Well at least Fluttershy's okay.

........................................ Fucking cliffhangers..................................

how are they going to save her?

261532 maybe they dont save her and twilight dies :pinkiecrazy:

so im not familiar with slenderman, is he the same as enderman from minecraft except slightly tweaked and what i meen is does he have the same weakness's water sunlight diamond sword ect????

307542 Oh no no no no. The Slenderman is a much older, and much more dangerous entity. Not much is known about his origins or abilities, since they vary from story to story. But for the best impressions of him, look up the following youtube shows:MarbleHornets, TribeTwelve, DarkHarvest00. I'd say the Endermen (or at least their appearance) are actually inspired by him.

And no, he does NOT have the same weaknesses. I honestly don't know what weaknesses he has in the regular stories, but I'm pretty sure sunlight, water and diamonds are not them. And I won't give away whether they are or are not his weaknesses in this either.

308465 thanks i was confused cause i didnt read any of the legends befor hand and your correct i do beleive enderman derived from slender man but thanks for clearing that up ive been shouting RARITY MAKE A DIAMOND SWORD FOR PETES SAKE every chapter but now i know that it doesnt work :P

Oh shit. Didn't see that one coming.

Also Tartaros? Do you mean Tartarus? As in the Greek underworld kind of thing?

This was one majorly creepy story. Please don't make a sequel. I really want to be able to sleep at night!

I approve of this ending.

0_o awesome story...but the ending was like OMGWTF!!??!?:applecry:

Heh, dont look behind you, thats awesome. The ending was perfect. Why are young fillies and colts afraid of the dark, because they know that I am waiting for them.

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