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Hawk Kaldin 24207

Joined June 2012
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    Hawk Kaldin's Stories (2)


    Things have always been peaceful for Equestria, there have never been any real conflicts in the last 1000 years or so. That all quickly changes when Equestria becomes the new battleground for the warring factions of New Eden. The Gallentians want to set up a partnership and introduce the sentient equines into New Eden, the Caldari see a world filled to the brim with rare natural resources,  the Minmatar see new warriors they can use to help fight and free more of their republic from the vice like grip of their slave lords. The Amarrians see new slaves and rare artifacts in their world, more gifts for their mighty empress and their God.

    It is a wonder...will Equestria ever find its place in the universe?

    Note: The story picture has something to do with the initial plot but i'm not going to say what in the interest of keeping the story intact. I do not own anything created or endorsed by 'The Hub' or CCP games. All rights go to them.

    First Published
    31st Jul 2012
    Last Modified
    6th Oct 2012

    Comments ( 8 )

    #1 · Chapter 2 · 41w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I like this, being and EVE player for the Gallente navy myself :twilightsheepish:. I'm interested in how you're going to bring the other factions in and how the game world (space) will have an effect on the planetary interaction. However, this one seems a little too deep for anyone who doesn't already know EVE, but we both know how impossible it is to really explain! :ajsmug:

    #2 · Chapter 2 · 41w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1005644 Trying to strive a balance between the two is actually really difficult :fluttershysad:

    I did not think it would be too hard at first and i tired to make it simple, but the problem is *EVE is not simple* :raritydespair:

    Still, thanks for the fav etc, I will start work on the other chapters and try and make them easier to understand and get a grip of the story.

    Just an FYI: I'm Caldari myself, but I currently reside in Provi. :yay:

    #3 · Chapter 2 · 41w, 2d ago · · ·
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    I like were this is going :D

    #4 · Chapter 2 · 40w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I love this so far :twilightsmile:

    #5 · Chapter 2 · 37w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Well gona start by saying I know nothing about ponies BUT I do know about EVE :P

    Good work Hawk, You got Dust514? If not why not! :P

    Cya in corp chat buddy :P

    Jay

    #6 · Chapter 3 · 32w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Please help me get better by pointing out any mistake and such. Leave comments so I know what to improve on. Thanks guys! :ajsmug:

    #7 · Chapter 3 · 31w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I like where the story is going but there are lots of grammatical mistakes in there. Do you need a pre-reader?

    #8 · Chapter 3 · 31w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1408328 Not at the moment, due to the fact I do not have much time for writting as these are side projects at the moment. I shall keep your offer in mind and get back to you when i have more time. (Damn college work :twilightangry2:)

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