• Member Since 3rd Nov, 2011
  • offline last seen Jan 12th, 2014

Henry Hatsworth


T

Two men, while attempting to fix their telly, end up making such a massive balls-up of it that they are transported to equestria. They're just as confused about it as you are. New characters will be added as the story progresses. Rated teen for constant swearing.

------------------------------------------------

Okay, here comes the explanation

If this story does suck, and it probably will, I must ask that you take it at face value. A confusing, not very funny attempt at writing a fanfiction that only happened because I decided to watch the pilot again after an hour long Lee Evans and Zero Punctuation binge. This is very much a stream of consciousness fic that I've made no attempt to edit or even put any thought into. With that said, enjoy(though you probably won't).

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 24 )

Ok, that was bucking hilarious. Well played, sir. :moustache:

That was bloody amazing. You have captured the spirit of the British man in this. Loved all the obscure "your only going to get this if you are British" references.

And Lee Evans is best comedian.

Liked and faved.

That was glorious. You need some help with editing, since the spelling and grammar are a little off in places and there are some miscellaneous typos, but in general, well done!

The best thing about this is that it could go anywhere. You could write an entire intermission about the logic and process to explain how the buck the toothpaste got in there.

I hope to see more :twilightsmile: There is something very appealing about the placing of the hapless everyman into Equestria, and letting hilarity ensue. The movement away from bland yank 'comedy' and towards a bit of good old British behaviour is the cherry on top! No offense to my friends state-side, but a change is nice. :derpytongue2:

Punch Trixie.
Dont act like you dont want to :ajsmug:

i approaced this with enough acohol. the acohol says its good!:ajsmug::pinkiehappy::pinkiecrazy:

Oh good god, my sides hurt from laughing.
Well done sir. I will now be tracking this story.

Also, for your brilliant story so far, have a moustache. :moustache:

Bloddy amazing!

...

...

Needs more paragraphs. As in chop these ones up.

my inferior mind cannot comprehend the awesomeness before me

Referring to Equestria as "quadruple-bypass land" is masterful descriptive writing. :rainbowlaugh:

You must continue, vaguely familiar British caricature! You must!

I think these small chapters might become the norm for the rest of the story. It just lets me write however much I can be arsed to, throw it out and call that a day.

Also, Geoff.

The English saw the dining table and saw the opportunity to play Wiff-Waff with The King's bollocks

That had to be repeated.

I... I don't even...

You know what? I give up! This story desn't make sense and it's awesome because of that!

Have a 'stache:moustache:

Login or register to comment