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Henry Hatsworth 7536

Joined November 2011
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    Henry Hatsworth's Stories (7)

    • Bloody Hell
      Two dudes end up in Equestria somehow and proceed to snark their way through things.

      3,799 words · 478 views · 24 likes · 3 dislikes
    • Unboxing a Fluttershy unit
      Well, my Fluttershy unit came in the mail today, let's open 'er up and see what we've got.
      843 words · 1,327 views · 9 likes · 2 dislikes
    • Destroying the fourth wall
      An OC pony realises his reality and decides to abuse it for all it's worth.
      3,676 words · 963 views · 9 likes · 6 dislikes
    • Diary of Chaos
      What if everyone got used to Discord?
      1,001 words · 246 views · 3 likes · 2 dislikes
    • A Dream With Sharp Teeth
      7,887 words · 1,383 views · 10 likes · 16 dislikes
    • Overrated
      1,051 words · 189 views · 4 likes · 17 dislikes
    • A Dream With Sharp Teeth: The New Nightmare
      3,504 words · 698 views · 1 likes · 2 dislikes

    Two men, while attempting to fix their telly, end up making such a massive balls-up of it that they are transported to equestria. They're just as confused about it as you are. New characters will be added as the story progresses. Rated teen for constant swearing.

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    Okay, here comes the explanation

    If this story does suck, and it probably will, I must ask that you take it at face value. A confusing, not very funny attempt at writing a fanfiction that only happened because I decided to watch the pilot again after an hour long Lee Evans and Zero Punctuation binge. This is very much a stream of consciousness fic that I've made no attempt to edit or even put any thought into. With that said, enjoy(though you probably won't).

    First Published
    9th Sep 2012
    Last Modified
    11th Nov 2012

    Comments ( 22 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 36w, 15h ago · · ·
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    Ok, that was bucking hilarious. Well played, sir. :moustache:

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 36w, 15h ago · · ·
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    That was bloody amazing. You have captured the spirit of the British man in this. Loved all the obscure "your only going to get this if you are British" references.

    And Lee Evans is best comedian.

    Liked and faved.

    #3 · Chapter 1 · 36w, 15h ago · · ·
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    That was glorious. You need some help with editing, since the spelling and grammar are a little off in places and there are some miscellaneous typos, but in general, well done!

    The best thing about this is that it could go anywhere. You could write an entire intermission about the logic and process to explain how the buck the toothpaste got in there.

    #4 · Chapter 1 · 36w, 14h ago · · ·
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    I hope to see more :twilightsmile: There is something very appealing about the placing of the hapless everyman into Equestria, and letting hilarity ensue. The movement away from bland yank 'comedy' and towards a bit of good old British behaviour is the cherry on top! No offense to my friends state-side, but a change is nice. :derpytongue2:

    #6 · Chapter 1 · 36w, 8h ago · · ·
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    Punch Trixie.

    Dont act like you dont want to :ajsmug:

    #7 · Chapter 1 · 36w, 3h ago · · ·
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    i approaced this with enough acohol. the acohol says its good!:ajsmug::pinkiehappy::pinkiecrazy:

    #8 · Chapter 1 · 36w, 1h ago · · ·
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    Oh good god, my sides hurt from laughing.

    Well done sir. I will now be tracking this story.

    Also, for your brilliant story so far, have a moustache. :moustache:

    #9 · Chapter 1 · 36w, 1h ago · · ·
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    #10 · Chapter 1 · 36w, 56m ago · · ·
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    moar:pinkiehappy:

    wat
    #11 · Chapter 2 · 35w, 6d ago · · ·
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    #12 · Chapter 2 · 35w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1254019 Do you mean that in a good way or a bad way?

    wat
    #13 · Chapter 2 · 35w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1254022

    In a good way, of course.

    #14 · Chapter 2 · 35w, 6d ago · · ·
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    #15 · Chapter 2 · 35w, 5d ago · · ·
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    This just keeps getting more ridiculous...

    Carry on. :moustache:

    #16 · Chapter 2 · 35w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Bloddy amazing!

    ...

    ...

    Needs more paragraphs. As in chop these ones up.

    #17 · Chapter 2 · 35w, 5d ago · · ·
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    my inferior mind cannot comprehend the awesomeness before me

    #18 · Chapter 2 · 35w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Referring to Equestria as "quadruple-bypass land" is masterful descriptive writing. :rainbowlaugh:

    You must continue, vaguely familiar British caricature! You must!

    #19 · Chapter 3 · 34w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I think these small chapters might become the norm for the rest of the story. It just lets me write however much I can be arsed to, throw it out and call that a day.

    Also, Geoff.

    #20 · Chapter 3 · 34w, 5d ago · · ·
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    I want some Geoff

    #21 · Chapter 4 · 34w, 2h ago · · ·
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    The English saw the dining table and saw the opportunity to play Wiff-Waff with The King's bollocks

    That had to be repeated.

    #22 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Moist.

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