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Away from the glory of Canterlot, a changeling meets a pony.
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Cover image from and inspired by the comic 'Heart Nom' by merrypaws.
http://merrypaws.deviantart.com/art/MLP-Heart-Nom-311709771

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Comments ( 39 )

A bit of respite from my Mass Effect fic. I'm still working on that, don't worry!

This story makes me happy and warm inside. :twilightsmile: Also we need more emoticons, maybe a few changeling ones :eeyup:.

This was beautiful...:twilightsmile:

Awwwwww, that was nice.:twilightsmile:

Though now that you've had them take the first step...I want to see the other 5,279,999 steps. :rainbowwild:

997438 this gave me a happy feel
we need more

It is a really nice short story. I really like the two and they could be a cute couple

Could this be the start of a fantastic comic/fanfiction collaboration? I hope so!

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That's what the changeling in the comic is called.

It's in the description of the comic.

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Love to continue, but after this point I have no idea how to write a couple.

No experience, you know?

1008749 I understand, romance isn't your strong side in writing:twilightsmile:

1008749 Well my favorite kind of couple to read about/watch are the super awkward ones...so awkwardly writing about a couple should make for good results in that category right?:pinkiehappy:...what do you mean that's not how it works?:rainbowhuh:

Changeling and pony? No disguise? WANT! Upthumb, watch and all my feels. :heart:

I would love to see more of this if possible.

bahaha that was awesome

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Sorry, no ideas in me yet.

1224479

Thanks!

Dawwwwwww

This is a pretty good ChangelingxPony romance story!

This was beautiful...:raritystarry:
5/5 :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:
Make a sequel. Plueeeez...

Just to let you know, if you visit my profile, you'll see that this story has made my top 15 fanfictions list. Be proud.

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:yay:

Thanks for the support!

Good luck with your own fics, too!

Hehe, this is pretty good. :twilightsmile:

1701604 now all we need is either you or the artist of that comic to continue the story with them. these two actually make a pretty good couple.
But thats just me. :3

would mack for an interesting story, instead of a short fic

Very touching and you stayed true to the comic. At the same time you were able to incorporate exposition to create a setting and develop the characters in a truly unique and well-rounded fashion. Result: EXCELLENT! :pinkiehappy: Have a like and fav.

997438 i need to get my brain cleaned, i have a dirty mind (Mass Erect) I SHALL NERVER LOOK AT MASS EFFECT AGAIN

This was SO adorable. Short but well written :heart:

This needs a continuation. I'm a sucker for stories about couples overcoming prejudice. And it seems plausible that the first changeling-pony couple would get pretty well-known. I can see Cotton Candy and Greg standing up for their love in the face of Princess Celestia to the amazement of the Mane Six (adorning Elements should the need arise). Seriously, I'm imagining it right now!

Aw, I love these kinda stories! :pinkiehappy:

I love this! It'd be cool to see a sequel.

Any chance of you getting bored one day a creating a sequel?

Greg swore.

He is just so...PEEVED right now!

Bright and sunny, everything had been planned to perfection - even the weather - for the wedding.

Ponies manipulation of the weather is viewed as weakness by other races.

Changelings were a hardy race.

Good thing, or Shining would have exterminated them.

He swore again.

Flying feather!

Greg swore mentally for what must have been the fifth time ever since his escape.

What the hay?

Greg smiled. Cotton's kindness was an unexpected bonus, but the sweets themselves wouldn't do more than pass through his digestive tract unchanged. "Thanks. For the offer, I mean. But, they won't do me any good."

That's silly. He has an organic body, he should have some use for organic food.

Still, admitting that he was a complete alien was a huge risk - ponies weren't known for being the most accepting of the other sentient races.

Very true.

That honor went to the griffons, surprisingly enough.

Goblins, even more so.

"Why didn't you change when you came it?"

Came in.

We've always been told that your race is a race of monsters.

Celestia is so prejudice.

This town isn't really the most progressive - we've always been steeped in tradition and hard work. Earth pony values."

Earth ponies and pegasi used to be other others, unicorns did not. When all tribes come together unicorns values tend to win in the end.

However, the source closed off quickly.

Why though? She's giving it away and it;s not like she has a limited volume.

I thought her name was cotton patch

Amazing Story i get to know via Youtube. Magnificent Work :twilightsmile:

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