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Whit breaking your own logic in the second part and all the extra random pretty much low level crazy randomness there it got a bit out of interest in reading. The first part really gave adrenaline.
You did it again. Hoof up and fav. You really can bring a good laugh and action. It was after you rescued Pinkie that you lost a good bit o my interest. But as I expect. It was intended. Your name is Troll after all.
You did not give much description, but what you wrote was enught for my fantasy to get a picture of it.
As I said before. Hoof up and fav. If you want to break my sanity here, you need to go much deeper.
Troll starts to write something serious?
Just before comment it was... Something else. Like... Normal fanfic? ![]()
Then it rolls back to usual Troll. You make me smile every time ![]()
"I gallop over and break her face with my chair."
That's how I read it the first time lol.
shit hit the fan when you woke up?
No hit the fan the moment you started to write this thing.
You sir are an inspiration.
That was actually a coherent story, and a heartbreaking one at that.
"You're an asshole." ![]()
That was the best line. That one, the one I just quoted. I also enjoy growing jetpacks.
To be honest, when I saw the title, I was expecting Sweetiepoo. Would that character be allowed on this site? ![]()
It took me a little while to realize it was a crackfic. I must be getting rusty.
I don't even...
oh well. Mustaches anyway ![]()
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