• Member Since 30th Jul, 2012
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Silver Tiara


Hello. I write bad clopfics.

Comments ( 18 )

I enjoyed it. It's definitely fetishy, and you're gonna get a ton of dislikes due to the content, but functionally it's okay. My biggest complaint are the occasional giant paragraphs, but I'm guilty of those as well.

Yeah, I don't like giant paragraphs, but couldn't decide on how to chop them up so I left them in. Derp! :derpytongue2: Thanks for the comment! =)

Dat Ending... *foams*

Hmmm..... kinky.:pinkiecrazy:

Author, I-

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*reads*

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Thank you! :ajsmug:

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I hope it wasn't just your mouth than foamed... :heart:

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Thank you! I hope you enjoyed it! :pinkiehappy:

"Wanna here my cutie mark story?"
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That was really, really good. I, being a very fetishy person myself, was able to enjoy it on another level, but over all I think it's an excelantly written story. It's main highs, for me at least, is how god damn hopless the stallion is, and the amount of questions it leaves me with :twilightangry2:.

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Thank you so much for your comment! I'm glad I was able to serve your needs. :heart: I am also glad that you thought I wrote a great story in addition to the *ahem* additional benefits it conveyed.

It was such a good story...even though I felt sad about the stallion losing his manhood. But it is such a good story.:twilightsmile::pinkiehappy::derpytongue2:

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But that's my favorite part! Well, his too, even after he lost it...
Thank you for your compliments! :pinkiehappy:

you're welcome?????? i guess?????:applejackunsure::ajbemused::derpyderp2::derpytongue2:

What is wrong with you????

Um... Wow... That took a dark turn..!
3/5 stars...

Dear god... My penis is hurt. :raritydespair:

But that ending was hilarious! Mind-fucking hilarious! :pinkiecrazy:

Great job on the story. :moustache:

I think a gore tag is only necessary if the gore is described. It's only implied what happened when they put him under.

and YAYs for the SilverTiara OTP and "this is my fetish" BDSM slave/master relationship fan service! even if Diamond was pretty over the top cruel.

I think you could have left out the death threat and had Diamond convince him to agree to the arrangement. Would have been more in character with Season's 1-4 DT.

Diamond's cruelty was always with a purpose. her vendetta against the CMC, her insecurities and desire to the be the best according to what her mother wanted, and her desire to win a competition or succeed as an editor.

This Diamond was pretty much a serial killer without having actually killed anyone. She has that mentality.

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