“I need you, the reader, to imagine us, for we don't really exist if you don't.”
After losing to Tank the tortoise in the competition for best pet, Boeing the falcon finds himself dejected, violent and lonely until he meets a rock - and it begins to have a conversation with him.
As featured on EqD: http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/12/story-party-rock.html
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i read this on .... equestria daily...? before. it was good. kinda weird, (really weird), but well written.
if only there was a Discord emoticon or, a Tom emoticon...
Here take 5 stars. I don't see anything to critique about.
Creative and funny.
197435 alright lets ask for one then
Wow. That was...touching... enlightening.
It makes me happy that I'm not a rock.
Only one thing: What was this gift that Tom had in mind?
Well, that was a great read. Funny, touching, genuinely impacting. Definitely worth 5 stars.
197414
You certainly did! I'm planning a migration from FF.net to Fimfic, which is why this shows up here only now.
197758
The gift was a device for the original ending:
[Boeing says "Give me the gift anyway"]
[Big flash, Boeing falls unconsious]
[Boeing wakes up in a pegasus body]
[Tom's voice: Congratulations, Boeing - you're the new Rainbow Dash]
Of course, that flung all that buildup out of the window, so I scrapped it and went for the good one instead.
>>the rest of you awesome peeps
Thanks for your kind words! =) the email load was a pleasant surprise to wake up to.
So that sequel, your making it right?
198220
When - if - inspiration strikes. ;)
199591
*Notices the Raptor of Inspiration behind him*
Clever Girl...
Th... I...
.-. wat
Oh, Casca. Casca, Casca, Casca.
Why, that was rather touching.
Casca you mad bastard,,,
Such a touching story, very well written.
Full review here, but in brief: an interesting novelty, but it feels a tad too long and I'm not personally a fan of extra-fandom memes being used so blatantly.