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Twilicorn


I'm a lazy writer who loves what I do, but is too lazy to write half the time. If you have an idea for a story, shoot it at me though. I just might take it♥

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Pinkie Pie, a rambunctious, loud, party animal.
Fluttershy, a quiet, peace-loving animal lover.

Two polar-opposites. Two best friends. Two lovers.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 13 )

I really enjoyed reading this, and can't wait for more from you. You've got my full support. :pinkiehappy:

Awwww

That was so sweet.

Thumbs up and a favorite!

Nice start, but I can't help but notice... Fluttershy wants some Apple pie and later finishes up a brownie... might want to fix that if contest rules allow.

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:twilightblush: I-I... don't know what you're talking about! You must be thinking of... something else! That's it!
:unsuresweetie: That sounded bad even to me. I'll go fix it.

Good so far! The word "seductive" was used a bit too much for my liking (they've been dating, what, a week?), but its sweet, and the characters are done very well.

Consider yourself followed.

This ship is very romantic, shame there's barely any known stallions in Ponyville, would be nice to see a shit for them too.
But still very nice story! Look forwards to reading more! :pinkiesmile:

1014558 Yeah agree :scootangel:

:yay: <<< This is literally what I did when I got to the end of this chapter! Good work!

:pinkiehappy::heart::yay: It's getting good so far.

Nice story. I'm usauly into PinkieDash but I decided to go with a FlutterPie fic for a change. I made a good choices =D:pinkiehappy:

I really love this! As you might guess from my username, PinkieShy is my favorite pairing. This story is really good! My only suggestion would be to maybe put thoughts in italics... it's a little hard to differentiate between the thoughts and the dialogue. But anyway, as I said, I love this so far, and I will now read more! :pinkiesmile::heart::yay:

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!
Sorry for the outburst, but... so... CUUUUTE! I'm smiling so much right now. This chapter is extra-adorable.
I love the way the kiss was written. I could really feel the importance of the moment.
:heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart:

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