The entire series of FiM as a harem comedy, centering around a Rule 63 Twilight Sparkle
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FAQ Time!
Dusk/someone else/everyone is OOC.
Yes, and I’m sorry for that. If Dusk was to come to his senses and pick a girlfriend, it would defeat the purpose of the harem genre and bring the story screeching to a halt, unless Dusk started cheating. (And not only would that would be more OOC, it would probably lead to a School Days ending.)
As for Rarity being a clingy slut, that’s actually not only the way I interpret her, it’s also fanservice. Go crazy.
Also, their OOC-ness leads to the episode playing out differently, not only making the story unique in its own way and expanding my creativity, but also keeps you guys guessing on how it will play out. If I played it safe, the story wouldn’t be interesting.
Dusk is a pussy-ass bitch that lets too many things slide.
Yes, he could use some assertiveness lessons, and much of his character is built up more around the things that happen around him and much less than Dusk alone. I think that comes with being butt
monkeypony, no?Sheesh, that was long! Time to add some lulz to reward you for reading all this:
One muffin to rule them all,
One muffin to herd them,
One Ditzy to scarf them all,
And in the darkness Derp them.
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To each their own.
Nice job there, friend!
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If the characters weren't acting a bit OOC, we would basically just be reading the episodes, so I say "Go nuts!"
I dunno... this is kinda reminding me of Love Hina and watching Ben Stiller Romance/Comedies... both I hate with a passion...
In this chapter Pinkamena was amaxing dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilight_crazy.png
I love Applejacks reasoning behind adding the booger.
To be honest though I thought that Derpy was sensing the muffin was defiled, and planned to destroy it to maintain the purity of all that was muffin. Possibly by flying into the sky as it exploded.
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Her eating the baked bad reminds me of Super Filly Adventure with the ending.
You must keep Gilda in Ponyville, she must not be allowed to leave!!
1086622 BLASPHAMY!
Many lulz were had
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I'm not saying that I don't like this fic (I love it)... just those 2 things I dislike very much (and I hope this fic stays away from those kinds of storylines)
Pinkamena is starting to grow on me...
Good chapter only one problem
You reference that sick guy luka mgnota , the killer from Montreal , who sent body parts of a Chines guy all over Canada
Lol pinky knows everything
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School Days ending. DO IT. Just kidding, but idea...
1086710 And that's the Blasphamy of it all. I must confess to being a massive Ken Akamtsu fanboy.
Then again, I can easily see how his works can rub the wrong way.
Gilda got puked on...
There will be blood
Wait, somethings missing. Dusk wasn't harrased again!
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"Hey Pinkie, didn't think I'd see you here at the beach today...and what are you building?"
"A Nice Boat! Don't you think so, Dusky-Wusky?"
Where's Dusk!? No Dusk?
This is some EXCELLENT CRACK. I need more. More chapters. = More CRACK.
I am the Muffin Queen bow before me. Something tell's me Gilda is going to be upset. Anyone else think Pinkies plan is going to back fire on her?
Nice chapter and you got Gilda puked all over.
Hey Pinkie! Read this!:
Gilda should stay in Ponyville and develop a crush on Dusk!
Anyway,
This fanfic is so awesome! Can't wait to see the Gala chapter and the Canterlot wedding chapter
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The only thing I can think of to make this more Crack like is "Suddenly Vegeta!" I hope some one gets the reference.
1086581 I don't give a shit that there OOC. As a matter of fact, that's makes the story even more hilarious.
It begins...
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For the story's aweosmeness have this:
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a big stash of m&m's enlightenedredneck.com/wp-content/uploads/2009/05/mms-image.jpg
and a brohoof /) (optional)
1086581 YAY! Thanks for the reward! :3
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Damn... Pinakmena, the pony I fear the most, is slowly becoming Pinkamena is best pony in this fic... We like what we see! Go more nuts!
Pretty good, but I think you may need a proof-reader. Two mistakes I found were writing Daimound instead of Diamond and langue instead of language. Still, I really like this story.
1086997 that made my day.
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Love Hina! Ahh god no!! Why did I read the comments on a harem fic?! Love Hina in my head again!!!
... make the pain stop.
Anyhow, Ben Stiller Romance/Comedies fill you with hate? Who is Ben Stiller? Let me look him up.
*15 minutes later *
How does that guy keep on getting work? Nothing really stands out about him. My loss then.
I have confidence that the author will continue to write a story that is entertaining and smart (in a dumb way).
Oh my God! This fic is so fucked up, but I love it!! Have a few mustaches!
Epicness. This story is quite easily one of the more hilarious ones on the site.
1086581 Nothing Is OOC its alternate universe so anything is as you want it to be! And i love it so much. =D
OOCness is welcome, just as long as you stick to their basic features (Dash being competitive, Rarity being best pony, etc) then you'll be fine. Usually I don't like insistent breaking of the fourth wall by Pinkie in fics, but this is just hilarious. Taking it too far in the best way possible.
Some missing/additional letters in places. Not sure if it's intentional (as part of her accent) but you keep having AJ say sugercube, (actually after a second look you said "back at Sugercube Corner", too). If I remember I'll read back through it and find where slip-ups have been made specifically. I'd do it now if I weren't on my iPod.
1087565 Speaking of which, could you tell me the difference between my 4th wall breaking and poorly executed 4th wall breaking? I can't tell the difference. Like, what are they doing wrong that I'm doing right?
1086773 You really should get that checked out; I think I have some Pinkamena remover around here somewhere.
*reads warnings on label*
You're not that attached to having skin right?
Anyway, I really enjoy this story's take on Pinkamena. I can definitely say that this is one of the best versions of her that I've read.
Lolz and a good time were had. Kudos.
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You're being utterly blatant about it in the funniest way possible. I was laughing so hard during Pinkie's conversation with Pinkamena. I've never seen that happen in a story and the way it was delivered, summed up by this, was priceless:
[Th-the author wouldn’t do that!] denied Pinkamena. [He doesn’t have the balls!]
“Check the comments box,” Pinkie said with dread. “The readers want him to. Besides, already he wrote you into the story, didn’t he? What’s stopping him? Where does it end? Gilda? Trixie? Chrysalis? Molestia? Blueblood? An OC Mary Sue? Replacing Big Mac in Hearts and Hooves Day? Or even (Faust forbid!), DIAMOUND TIARA??” Inside her mental prison, Pinkamena eyes widened in horror as her pupils became pinpricks.
Instead of abusing the powers to be some kind of overpowered seer, she's just terribly goofy and ends up messing with ponies heads all the time. And also painting mental pictures of terrible, terrible things, that can happen as a result of an authors madness. The fact that no one understands or believes her also helps keep it funny. (for me at least)
Pinkamena’s smile sure was a talkative one.
love it
by the way...what "OOC" means?
If you want it to stay in the harem genre, you could open up for polygamy (somewhat 5-9 to 1 gender ratio!) later into the story.
How about a near-shotgunwedding due to a misunderstanding with granny smith, then later in the story make AJ activly discover her feelings and let her join the love-race (i know... Cliche, but still)
1086957 make Gilda bi...? Would that work in this story?
1087766 out of character
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Go Akamatsu! (Love Negima, why did it end!?!)
It's like a nuclear meltdown in your mouth!
So when this fic ends. Think of ALL the ALTERNATE ENDINGS we could have. Think of the possibilities. Anyway I giggled throughout the story. Best wishes!
1087616 what Genjen said pretty much. You're not so much breaking the fourth wall as making it your bitch. You're not only saying she does it, you're making it entirely and totally obvious that she is doing it, and you're making it hilarious (see: Genjen's quote), rather than just relying on the fact that she's doing it at all being funny.
That being said, you can have too much of a good thing. It's something best used in moderation, as overuse of it makes her character boring and repetitive. With your writing, though, I really don't see this fic getting boring or repetitive at all. Pinkamena's character in this is sensational; that she was both shocked by something Pinkie said and agreed with her, and actually seemed to be a reasonable mind to a degree, is much better than the usual constantly-super-sadistic, all knowing inherently evil character you sometimes get.
OOC is inevitable in this sort of thing. Just be careful.
Spelling mistakes!!
Spelling mistakes everywhere!!
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Wow, I didn't know people worried about this stuff in an Alt-reality fanfic.
Also, as a watcher of harem genre anime I know that the fabric of reality would fold in on itself if the male character picked a girl or acted assertive before the end of the serious. Or god forbid end up as the god of the infinite multiverse *cough*Tenchi Masaki*cough*
Also pink on white is really eye straining.