The entire series of FiM as a harem comedy, centering around a Rule 63 Twilight Sparkle
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All those references
Heeey it's the discworld...
Now Dusk sorta reminds me of Rincewind...
I require a Luna with a bunny suit pic now
Wow.
everything is pink you made an error with the colors ^^
Edit: ahh Terry Pratchett and the good old Al A...i forgot the name of the god dam turtle!!! (and siriusly we all want to know wich gender it has)
This is mind-blowing headcanon right here...
That and Pinkamena was hilarious when she did a 180 from feeling warm inside
So... why is Dusk trying to make friends with a murdering, puppy-drowning cannibal? Seriously, shove her down in a tub of water and let Surprise take over completely.
... No, I'm not kidding, drown the little *censored*. She killed a puppy as a child, she's evil. There's no making friends with her. Kill that *censored* with a *censored* up her *censored* until her *censored* are *censored*, and then do more things to that *censored* that will have be *censored*.
- "You REALLY like puppies, don't you?"
2443283 Pony or human version?
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2443295 Refresh it.
2443328 yaaaaaaaaa wurk it guuuurl
Elephants? I thought it was turtles all the way down!
Anyway, great chapter, great concepts, great fic! Writing style reminds me a bit of Douglas Adams which is great!
So, in tl;dr: I love this story
I really liked the premise of your story, Twilight as a boy in the middle of a harem anime.
I don't like all the fanon jokes being woven into it and it honestly feels like you've ran out of ideas.
It's a space turtle, in space!
...well, then. I look forward to see how this all goes through, especially the Clover and Platinum issue.
Carry on, my good author!
Color tag's broken. Ya forgot a / up top.
2443357 Refresh it.
Fascinating, but since Surprise was created from Dusk's mind, that technically makes her his daughter...
Her crush on him just got a lot creepier...
Next time: SONIC RAINBOOM!!!!
MY GAWD
2443362 *taps ctrl+F5* Nope. Maybe takes time for your edits to go through the servers.
Dat Yol For Shul!
Not enough references
2443368 No way, Surprise ain't Dusky's daughter.
Spike totally is.
Pinkamena X Dusk Shine! This is the new ship!
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Spike is Dusk's daughter?!
What a twist!
Wow. You have the ability to take a ridiculous idea someone must've been on crack to come up with and make it work. I feel bad for Pinkamena now (I just signed my death warrant, didn't I?). Lastly, this has to be the only story I've seen that lists tropes in the author's notes that I've read.
2443481 The authorities found his body three days later, his mouth sewn shut and his eyes still wide with terror.
SHOUTOUT TO DISK WORLD!!! A flat, disk like world, on the back of elephants, which reside on the shell of a giant flying space turtle... nice to see someone's read the books. Great job, keep goin and stay golden^^
P.S. When I saw the enfantes teribles, I couldn't help but think of 'Las Enfantes Terribles', throw in the fact pinkie is one of three children... and you have a MGS connection that's yet to be made...
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Wow. This was totally epic!
And when I saw that picture of Discworld as what Equestira looks like from space, I shouted 'YES!" repeatedly in paroxysms of joy. I'd link a video for that, but the current system I'm on at the moment makes that difficult.
And the Surprise/Pinkamena=Pinkie origin story was very well done, and actually made me quite sad. Just one question...does this mean Pinkie's gonna stop whacking Dusk in the nuts now? That running gag is starting to lose its appeal. Try the horn instead. Just as sensitive, and less mature in aspect.
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You know you've been reading way too much clop when the pony version gets your gears running and the human version is like "Meh".
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Ignoring the fact that Spike is now a girl, in what way is Surprise not Dusk's daughter? He created her and in a sense, raised her into what she is by defining her personality, and his magic projected her into filly Pinkamena's body, so yeah, his daughter.
And sort of Pinkamena's, too...
Weird...
There are a bunch of spelling errors and formatting errors in the first half of the chapter, one of the most noticeable being:
There are some other ones too that I was too lazy to chase after. Anyway, I can't say I'm the biggest fan of the Pinkamena arc, but it's still a good chapter.
That trutle and elephant world thing is based on how the Hindu see their world as it stands.
Scientists see the world round, England back in the day saw it as flat, and Hindu saw as the world flat, on top of an elephant, and all standing on top of a trutle.
And that's how the world was made.
So, let me get this straight, Pinkie is actually Dusk's Imaginary friend come to life. She body jacked Pinkamena who is in fact Psycho Pie(a fact that I will be Ignoring). And Equestria is the Discworld(AWESOME).
take all my Smiles
2443328 Pony version looks cuter (and not in a sexual way) than the human version. Also, is Pinkamena going to fall for Dusk? Because that would be really funny. Psycho love for Dusk.
Nice chapter! Loved how Pinkamena was depicted not as a one dimensional psychotic but as a troubled being who didn't ask for this. Also, was the "Dusk creating Surprise" thing a reference to Petriculture, or is it the fandom's headcanon now?
Take the Harem route and Get Surprise out of Pinkamema! Pinkamena is WAY better free!!!
2443317On a censored sandwich?
2443506 Grimdark jokes aside, I think this comment>>2443593 summarizes my reasons for going this way quite nicely.
Well... we all know what's going to happen when PP gets 'Discorded' at Season 2, I shall be looking forward to it
While we are at, I can't wait for your version of "Party for one" episode. It'll be quite entertaining.
What was with the Tropes at the end?
2443680 Don'tcha know? The trope page can't keep up with the rate I produce chapters, so I'm giving them pointers!
Heh. I like Petriculture too.
Waiiit a minute....
Pinkie is Surprise, who was an imaginary friend, and therefore a part, of Dusk...
Would that mean Dusk is kinda two of the elements?
Pinkamena best watch herself. The Great A'Tuin sees all.
Also, love the idea of Pinkamena as a love intrest. She could leave a pig heart on his pillow. 'Cause that's psycho love.
that image of the world.......my new background, also, loved the chapter
2443700 What makes you think their going to look here?
Will Pinkamena become a better pony and stop being in the word's of Pinkie a meany meany pants?
Oh God DAMNIT! I fucked it up!
*Pulls out notepad and begins scribbling*
Now I have to go back and rewrite some shit. Damnit how could I have missed it. I mean I knew it was flat but the turtle?! How could I have missed the TURTLE!? And I guess the elephants as well......shiet this changes everything now!
2443255 Except he doesn't know when to run away, which is basically ALL THE TIME.