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Out of curiousity, how accurate is Pinkie's assessment where she breaks the fourth wall there with her comment about harem stories?
Nicely written, I like the inclusion of Surprise. Can't wait to see the origin story!
Love it
...My attention rise word by word.
And I'm BUKING scary to Pinkamena
2421092 Annnnd deleted.
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Awww...
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Is there a reason he considers himself a friend of pinkie? Pretty much his first experience with her was getting taken to a basement and torchered. I'm pretty sure that's a friendship breaker. Now he knows that the real pinkie is a psychotic monster and not the creation. So...ya, not friends anymore I should think.
Pinkamena scares me
I swear you people just don't like letting me sleep.
oh shit dusk cant get a quiet moment at all and also didnt trixie break her jaw last chapter?
and since when is this a mature rated story?
so confused yet so entertained
There's always two halves to the coin, heads and tails. I've learned that in life that we're always on one side of the coin, we're either heads or tails. I realize now that Pinkie isn't on heads or tails, but that little edge on the middle constantly swaying back and forth. I believe that Dusk will be the one to decide which side she lands on, whether he realizes it or not.
Poor Pinkie....No worrieds Pinkie. Some of us out here love you, even even we'll never reach you.
I keep wanting to like this story, but every time Dusk gets hit in the balls I want to slap the author. Hitting someone in the groin IS NOT FUNNY!
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No we don't. And if you had worn armor then you could have kept adventuring after taking an arrow to the knee as it fled from Chuck Norris.
2421097 What just happened?
Simple, he made an Inception joke. Those spread like wildfire.2421235
Did Pinkamena just bump your story up to a Mature rating? I could have sworn it was Teen beforehand. Bad Pinkamena! Bad bad bad!
- "I just don't know what went wrong... wait, yes I do!"
2421184>>2421258 Seriously guys, read the blog posts. They tell you these kinds of things.
For some reason I like Surprise!Pinkie better than Normal!Pinkie. I don't know what it is.
Also, shouldn't Dusk be unable to feel pain in the Dream World? Pain doesn't exist there.
2421275 Okay kids, do you what the trope of the day is? It's called Your Mind Makes It Real! You're convinced that you're in pain, so you feel pain for real! Isn't that wonderful, kids?
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Yeah, but that only works in Nightmare in Elm street. You would think Dusk is smart enough to counter that. Though he does seem to get hit in the balls a lot. Hopefully that won't have long term consequences when he wants kids. Of course there is already a fic where Twilight/Dusk has kids with everypony.
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Yes it is. It's funny as hell. Where the heck did your sense of humor get too?
Pinkamena is not funny any more, I vote that she gets Harmonized until she's friendly
eagerly awaiting next chapter.
Original design... I don't know the story behind that, but I feel it's a REALLY big fan conspiracy I should know about as of now..
Sorry, but this story is getting boring for me. I feel that the overall feel of it has been getting a bit dry.
Moving on to other stories. Later. Hope you can make your future chapters a bit more juicy for the others.
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2421314 I'd know I had a hand going up my arse once in a dream. ;_; it hurt.
The 4th wall is pinkie's thing dont worry about breaking it, hell i'll help her adiction!
My guess is that pinky breaking the fourth wall is from the readers perspective, she's her own Anon. While she has insight into the story from our perspective she doesn't have access to the authors mind. Well technically she does but I fell that she only knows what should happen from the readers point of view, and she can guess fairly accurately.
oh yeah "Let's call Luna she is the princess of the night thus it is her duty to come into our dream" bright Idea spike inviting an other crazy dream diver with interest in duskshine
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You win this round... but there will be others...
okay dusk lets review something about psycology here, pinkeimena is a beta personality, meaning in truth she is in more danger if pinkie has a break then pinkie is because if the alpha personality ever goes into a full scale break and then reboot the beta personality is forced into a stasis like dormancy. tell pinkey the truth if pinkiemena tries anything reminder her in reality you have a magical panic button that can have the royal batallions at your location instantly.
I'm surprised that you upped the rating on this story.
What, you honestly didn't see THAT coming?
After how long this story has been out, yeah.
...I'm stuck with the two of you aren't I?
Yeppers!
Well, if that's the case, I'm going to need to be drunk to maintain any semblance of sanity. Break out the vodka!
This...this...also this...i can´t tell you how much i loved this chapter.
SURPRISE PICTURE!!!
The whole PInkamena realm!
That must look really adorable. And scary once you realizes what a psycho she really is.^^;
Interesting and lolz. XD
Good to know that Duskcorn got a big hint. :D
Oh-uh, this can´t be good.
I think i need to change pants.....
Hm, could this be why she´s a child in her dream? Something from her past? A horrible secret?
The classic one.
Dun-dun-dun-DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN~
That part actually made me wonder too in the chapters ago. Rarity got dumped and took it better than expected and Shy and Dusk are working out better than expected too. It all pointed to a DuskxShy ending and not a harem one (which would include Luna too, after all she got Dusk´s first kiss) which kinda didn´t seem to follow what many expected at beginning of the harem route. Then again, i always expected you to be able to handle that matter well and yu brought it up here in a funny way which shows that you´re aware of it and not simply forgot it/tossed it aside.
I´ll await the ending of this fic with Twilight nerdiness~ (meaning i´ll jump around in a square screaming yesyesyesYES! when the last chapter loads up )
*starts to eat blueberry sweet popcorn*
DIs gunna be guuuud!
*gulps down entire popcorn basket in one go plus the plastic basket*
This just got thousand times better and the new chapter hasn´t even begun yet! Awesome!
Wow, just wow.
I can´t believe how much your tone changed from the beginnings and the mid of your fic to now.
Its like reading this of a whole new persepctive while it still maintains parts of its old quirky ways but underlines them with serious topics and interesting cause informative dialogue.
After this chapter i really really REALLY wanna see Dusk giving Pinkamena a big, loving hug in her dream world.
I just want to see that.
Cause i think she really needs one. She needs somepony to be there for her and i think that somepony should be Dusk. Cause that would also show a growth in Dusk´s character as till now he was kinda like a MOB chara, beaten around by everyone and just going with the flow, even with Shy he didn´t do much. All he did was working and worrying for himself and his luck, just like the girls, he wasn´t any better than them. His responses to Pinkamena showed that very clearly that he didn´t cared about hurting Pinkie much than "feeling sorry" and even that felt half-hearted.
And that was sad.
But i don´t only wanna see that to make Pinkamena feel good and give Dusk a chara growth which makes him "worthy" of so much attention of the mares despite being good-looking, super magical and Celestia´s personal student: To be a good pony. As in morally good. Not a playball, not a selfish prick, not a noble white knight in whtie armor, just a good pony who tries to make everypony happy and do everything right and struggle with the decisions. Not just go all "Yo, Rare. I don´t like ya, sorry, no hard feelings,m'kay?" and same with Pinkie.
I want to see it cause i can imagine PInkie´s reaction already when she notices that PInkamena suddenly is a bit more fond of "that scumbag Dusk" than usual. Like:
"Awww, isn´t my Dusk-Wusky the cutest stallion ever? He even gave me a kiss on the cheek! Its working, Pinkamena! We´ll come together one day!"
"Pff, he´s just a wuss, that´s all."
"Say, what did he do when he entered your realm on his own? He said he had to tell you something, what was it?"
*remembers Dusks Hug and him telling her that everything will be fine and that one day they will meet in the real world. Without her hitting his balls hopefully and she blushes at the memory which Pinkie feels* "..."
"Hm?"
"Not your business!"
"Wait, why do i feel like blushing all of the su-GASP! YOU!!!"
"Oh, horseshoes, here we go..."
"YOU! I- i can´t believe you! How dare you did something with Dusk behind my back! I thought we were on the same side! How could youuuu?!"
"Uhm, Pinkie... you know, we´re the same pony just divided into two halfs?"
"Oh. Oh, that´s right."
"Thank you. And i tell you i feel nothing for this sorry excuse of a stallion. Nothing!"
"Wait, so am i jealous of myself or should i be double happy for myself? But what if he starts to like you more than me or what if you develope deep feelings for him and wants to feel them for real and not over me as your little safety net against reality and-"
"I TELL I DON`T LOVE THAT GUY!"
"Aha! You said guy, not an insult! You liiiiiiiiikeee him Pinkamena~"
"I hate you so much."
"Then you hate yourself silly."
As for Luna, this gonna be really interesting. I can´t wait how she´ll go into all this mess espically since Dusk has to dump her as well. So he might rethink the whole dumping matter given hes talking to a princess who could send him to the moon. Either she or her big sister. XD
I´m still routing for harem route and i know with Duskcorn it will become a reality, but we gotta wait a coupel seasons for that to happen, ne?
Tl;dr:
I loved this chapter. You´re awesome. Harem-route go!
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Never read harem mangas then. Cause most of them got worse stuff than getting hit in the balls. Meme is actually tame compared to some stuff i´ve read and seen in the harem world.^^;
It's Luna time! Yay!
Funny thing is Surprise came first Pinkie Pie came next lol
2421453 Yo, what anime is that?
Oh man... S8it just got real! Can't wait till the next one, keep goin and stay golden^^
P.S. F*CK THOSE PEOPLE WHO THINK THIS STORY'S GETTING BORING! THIS IS SOME HIGH QUALITY SH*T RIGHT HERE!!!!
So since Pinkie KNOWS that it's a Harem Story, she doesn't mind sharing. That's good to know, at least.
2421594 Wow, that sounds like a really compelling character arc. My feels get stronger just by reading that dialogue.
...But I'm not going to do that. Not a chance in the world. This isn't me protecting my spoilers, this me telling you that's not gonna happen. Don't turn this into another "Dash's baby from having sex one time."
Trust me, Pinkamena will get tons of character development, just not in that direction.
2421659 Angel Beats
SOMEBODY BETTER BE DYING!
*change to a hospitak bed*
"im *cough cough* DYING!*HACK*"
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Thats good too for me as long as there will be developement.
Come on, you know you what Dashie to be pregnant and create drama when the egg shows up with Dusk being all "Pegasi really comes from eggs???" with Dash´s reply "And you´re the father." with the retort "And i´m the father?!". You know you want to, deeeep inside your mind there´s a part which wants to see it happen. Give in to the power of preggo Dashie, give in, give in and turn to the dark side, we got blueberry chocolate cookies~
i dont like pinkemina,and just because it was in cupcakes how it has suddenly become fannon. this pinkie pie doesnt make sense inb4 "pinkie pie doesnt make sense" she is just the charactor that tries her hardest to make people happy, not some crazed lunatic hannable like character. long story short, just because she was sad for an episode or two doesnt mean that she has two personalities. she is just better at conveying those emotions through body language. short story shorter (reread the first 4 words of this post)
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Really? Can you link to it? I'd kind of like to see what Dash would be like as a mom.
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I'll PM you a link. Not usually good form to link another person's story in the comment section. Plus it's a mature fic.
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In the story's defense, it is set up as a parody of the anime harem genre. Each girl has to fit one of the character archetypes found in those shows/manga. The psycho-girl is one and Pinkie just happens to be the easiest match.
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You got that right
lol, and no words to describe what i just read. If there was to be a word then I surely don't have them.
I saw in my email that this was updated. Imagine my confusion when I couldnt see it in my favorite box anymore... imagine my surprise when I saw that the story was actually updated to MATURE... Just imagine it... or don't, it went a little something like this;