The entire series of FiM as a harem comedy, centering around a Rule 63 Twilight Sparkle
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Yay update
Edit: Ninja comment
Yes I do have to agree that a audio recording would be odd.
While I kind of enjoyed this chapter, the repetitive spam of periods was annoying. I think he should just hook up with all of them, at least we'll have some dialogue then.
awkward, yet productive.
dat convo....
After the thirtieth ellipse my left eye burst. Is that normal?
Best Picnic ever!
Oh my god... Despite the size of the chapter, so little got accomplished! That said... THIS TOOK YOU A WEEK TO MAKE? WTF man?!?!?! Still, I'll be looking out for the next chapter. Keep goin and stay golden^^
P.S. Do you even lift?
2173282 SHHH, YOU'LL RUIN THE JOKE.
That's allot of "..."
It reminds me of the Ninja family reunion.
Talk about an overly long gag. <_<
2173275 Fun fact: Did you know I created the first two chapters in one day each?
How many pages of "..." were there?
AWKWARD!
Anywhore yay update. this made me laugh lollerskates all around
"..."
"..."
Wow that's a lot of wiry quietness
That's some compelling stuff right there mate
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You say that like that;s not my intention...
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That was so poetically romantic I almost puked. This was by far the most gushiest love scene I've read. It was like listening to Big Mac and Cheerlie talking to each other when they were on that love poison for a few hours.
2173306...Damn! Can't delete the comment!
The whole no dialogue was really annoying.
By far, that was the most interesting Conversation I've ever heard Fluttershy have. Dear god, that changed my views on life. Wonderful writing.
Holy. Shit! Best. Picnic. Ever!
................Oh, wait, no it isn't.
But a great chapter as usual.
in Morse code, all that would be "s"
I've had conversations like that.
You know I looked, and no not one of those has four dots....I feel betrayed!
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Anywhoof, I must admit, the overwhelming plot advancement that happened in this chapter (with all irony possible) had me in stitches by about half-way through the chapter. I'll be honest, that's quite the achievement. I don't normally laugh at Overly-Long Gags, but somehow, you found a way to make me do it. Kudos to you, good sir!
OH MY GOD! That was the most epic thing ever! My favorite part was when Dusk Shine defeated Cthulhu with an onion ring.
Can you imagine the audio reading for this?
Yes the reader says and now we have a really long silence .
Still good chapter.
that argument
sadly I don't have my "Awkward silence-english" dicctionary at the moment >_>
Greatest. Date. Ever.
And suddenly i want the other mares to know about the date so that it gets some spices. Else we will have countless "..." incoming. Pleassssssse don´t use that cheat again. It was okay, but leave it as a one-time thingie. Now Angel warrior, bring that guy more often!
Though you know, given how scientific Dusk/Twi is, he wouldn´t go on a date with only Shy but also the other 6 to compares the date data. And it just so happens that every week has seven days for seven mares to be dated. ;)
Hope you´ll give it a thought cause the dates with those mares can a) be very funny and b) very surprising, for example to develope AJ´s chara further while at the same time increases Dusk´opinion of her and so making it just harder to decide who to take as a girlfriend.^^
I can't believe they didn't take into account "...", that really would have changed everything.
No words. only LoL's
That was the most intelligent, witty, romantic, heart-breaking, and inspiring single conversation I have ever heard.
Angel has the best logic for this situation. obviously fierce combat is necessary!
Shakepearian Angel Bunny for the win
-lets see the scores
Fluttershy- asked on a date(2x)
RD-had sex(while both drugged)
Trix-lives with him
Pinkie/Pinkamena-I forgot how far they went, but it was creepy
AJ & Rarity- no farther than a kiss
You misspelled "...". You put a '.' In the wrong spot. the '.' was supposed to be in front of the other '.' making it ' "..." '. You understand?
great chapter as is tradition
on another note......
i miss luna yes the nightmare night ep would prove suficientyeeees...........
You have no idea. This will be so funny to listen to Doom Pie read this chapter.
Ever heard of The Little Package? The name of that fanfic's protagonist is Dusk Shine. In that story, he's the alicorn son of Luna sent to live with Twilight.
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You magnificent bastard....
Found the four dots, by the way
Riveting dialogue. Curse you for making me scroll through that.
Over 9000 times better love story than Twilight.
That Author's note could be dangerous, some people might actually try to find it.
Hm.
Alright, where is it?
You know that there is someone doing an Audio of this story on Youtube, right?