The entire series of FiM as a harem comedy, centering around a Rule 63 Twilight Sparkle
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My fellow bronies, I have an confession to make: The fast-paced mood of the story that makes everything feel like a trollfic is actally... my writing style. Deal with it.
Speaking of trolling, you may find that is OOC. I justify this by it being hilarious OOC-ness.
Just finished the first chapter, and about thirty seconds after I check the box that says email me updates, I get an email... First chapter was good, although a little too self aware... for my taste, anyways. Looking forward to this chapter.
1010831 ALSO, WILL THERE BE CLOP LATER!?
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Wut?
...What. The. Buck. You're introducing Pinkamena far earlier than she should be. Is her infatuation with Dusk REALLY that bad?
Whatever. You could have at least finished the episode.
Glad to see this continue, and also suddenly Pinkamena whut?
This fic is the best thing ever seriously, it's bucking hilarious
Oh... well... nice knowing you Dusk...
...Dat ending.
Well, that's an... interesting divergence from the canon.
Shame, I was enjoying your take on events from the show.
After being almost killed with laughter with your first chapter, I found this one at least a few times less lulzy, maybe because it's a few times shorter.
Y U NO WRITE WHOLE EPISODE SPOOF
Anyway, you kinda cheated by using lying Applejack. Her poker face is my Achilles heel.
1010851>>1010855>>1010856 And now, a message from Pinkamena:
What? Were you expecting a chapter where me and the girls try to fawn over Dusk with zany antics? Sorry people, that's not my style. We're taking a detour from that, just so me and pretty-boy can have a little... talk.
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ha this is like a parody...oh
I... can't help feeling this chapter was lacking a lot of the punch of the first.
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,,,well, did not expect that
It's a lot more uh, grim than the show itself. Not that that's a bad thing, it's just peculiar as most fics emulate the feel the actual show gives, with cartoon nonsense and convenient attitudes. This is a lot more grown up, which in itself is captivating. Looking forward to more
out of nowhere
Oh shit. He is so bucked.
BA-HAHAHAHAHAHAHA
I love it, keep it up!
“Pinkie’s gone, Dusk,” she said stoically. “Call me Pinkamena.”
OH SH*T
I am LOVING THIS! This isn't a troll fic, it's a piece of gold!
P.S. Why do i get the feeling that in the end, he'll end up screwing himself? (twidusk as they call it?)
Turn off AC/DC?
DO NOT BLASPHEME!!!!
*reads story, finds Pinkamena, stops reading*
Well Dusk is fucked on so many levels now...lets hold a funeral for him while we still can.
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Ah crap, things took a turn for the worse for poor ol' Dusk. I did NOT see this coming. Not sure how things will go from here, it does add a variety to the cast list by having an "off the rocker" type in the mix now.
Also, I liked the touch of Dash's flash back saying my nerd would call out., very funny stuff.
If Dusk's already coaxed Pinkamena out of hiding, I can't wait to see Flutterrage make her appearance.
Dusk Shine, you're going to LOVE ME!
This isn't as funny as the first chapter, but it's still pretty funny.
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oh dear it seems she has gone of the deep end. this could be problematic
A wild PINKAMENA has appeared!
DUSK used CRY LIKE A LITTLE BITCH!
...It's not very effective.
AUTHOR used CLIFFHANGER!
It's super effective!
...wait, what?
1010831 Big mac is OOC?
how can you say something like that after going Pinkamena on us?
1010831
"The fast-paced mood of the story that makes everything feel like a trollfic is actually... my writing style."
You say that like it's a bad thing. Those of us with no discernible style can only watch from without, and marvel.
Well, this was disappointing. The first chapter really got me wanting for more of this to continue, but how this chapter "ended"... It just didn't meet the standard the first chapter set. This was far shorter, and it could have had a little more added to it before you dropped it like a sack of batteries.
Is it only me that prefer him to take Luna as his date? She's the one who kissed him.
Too funny!
A little unexpected for pinkie pie as well, but seeing your mind being set of making everything hilarious, I can't wait to see what happens.
Well, Dusk is dead. Nice knowing him.
FUAAAAAARKK
this kind of sounds like a nightmare
I have a feeling you greatly dislike Pinkie. Just sayin.
But I'm sure you hate Dusk more, seeing all the kinds of hell you put him through for everyones sadistic enjoyment.
Why didn`t you make a whole chapter...?
Also, damn... Flutterrage is going to make an appearance too? Also... Rarity... I fear for his survival.
Dusk, RUN!
He's tied down.
Oh...Dusk, TELEPORT!
Didn't you just read the chapter? Kinda impossible.
Right...Dusk, PRAY!
Is he supposed to pray to Celestia or Luna?
Dusk. Is. Doomed.
It was nice knowing about him, but no one survives Pinkanema...
well dusk we will miss you buddy
Well that was an interesting turn. Was hoping for a full episode though. Dusk needs to get away from these mares and go find some bro's.
1010831 Your writing style seems fine to me. Have you received many comments stating otherwise?
this one was quite short :/
OooOOoo, creepy! I can't wait to see the next chapter!
This is so perfect for clop. It's almost a shame it isn't.
Almost.
the shit storm cometh
1011095 BOTH
1010901 Holy shit bro, that's creepy, but then hilarious.