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One little colt's talent turns into a huge fetish addiction! Witness Featherweight as he uses his camera skills to admire the wondrous physiques and features of the fillies and mares of Ponyville.
Rated TEEN for suggestive descriptions and many perverted imaginations from a little colt.
Man, I really made him a pervert? Yes, yes I did. Enjoy!
(She's not listed, but Berry Punch makes a main appearance too.)
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well... you certainly did an excellent job of making featherweight creepy...
Dude that was waaaay to funny.
Seriously. It is 1 am Here right now, everyone is sleeping and I'm looking for some good stuff.
Then your story caught my attention. I read trough it and at the time when Twist had her photoshot with FW,
I lost it completely. I had to run over to my bed and slam my head into my pillow, in order to muffle my squeals and my laughters.
Keep up the work on this I'm litteraly dying from laughter here.
Oh and btw. WE DEMAND MORE!!!
Love your kind of humor.
Bronydragon
playah playah
Dat picture.
I can relate to his nervousness. :derpyderp:
This made my day.
totally honest... I can't wait for the next chapters...
Eh. I didn't find it all that funny. The writing had quite a few awkwardly-worded sentences, as well. You succeeded in making an innocent character a complete creep. It was a little funny, but... eh. Mostly just creepy
and not the good kind of creepy like Cupcakes 
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Wow, you really enjoyed my Twist scene. I have to admit that I did spend quite some time on that scene to make sure that it came out really good, and it seems that I was successful
; glad you enjoyed it.
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There's three chapters; the first two fairly long chapters, and the third is like a short conclusion to end it all.
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Is this to Featherweight's liking?
Wow this is creepy. I felt dirty just reading it.
*removes sunglasses* MOTHER OF GOD....
...
You just made this
sexy. You must be some kind of sorcerer. Though I suppose it's the nerdy ones who can be the most, ah, creative. 
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Probably.
I'm looking forward to his photoshoot with Cheerilee. Trying to figure out how he'd convince one of the older mares without them catching on...
Just goes to show you, the bookish type are the kinkiest.
Hmmm how's 'bout Featherweight tries making a mini-spy drone or something or just do high fly by shots in the sky (wow that rhymes) while being stealthy-like or just with a more powerful camera or something to do so from far away on the ground?
I'm not a photo person so I have no real clue how photography works other than buy a camera, point then shoot.
Love the story anyway.
"Wanna make a sonic rainboom with me… if you know what I mean?”
I crunched a hard popcorn kernel at that line. It almost sounded like... innocence being shattered
I must confess, good author, that I am indubitably intrigued and request continuation of this cunning tale.
Dayum… he's almost as bad as me
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It does continue, but it will end soon... well, for us anyway.
He's really perverted, but still not as much as Aoisora19s
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Nooooooo!!!
Go on with the story for a long time. We want more of Featherperv, taking sexy photos of the mares of PV.
Maybe he'll be able to trick some side characters like Trixie or Gilda into a sexy photo shoot.
Or even... Do I dare to think about it? Yes I dare! ...a sexy pohoto shoot with the princesses?!
The awesomeness of this would be doubled!!!
Bronydragon
1030974 other than the fact that he's a pervert loving that Featherwieght gets a fic also gotta love berry punch and her cheezy lines cutie patootie
classic is his next target Fluttershy? also you should make a clop chapter with feather weight and berry punch
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However, I originally wasn't going to do anymore
; that and I still have other ideas I wish to try.
How I plan to end this story still stands, and you'll be amused of how I end it.
because that was all I came up with for this story
If I do decide to change my mind you'll be noted; but know that it will be a while before I decide to do so.
I think I need a shower to clean off the filth. Its a like a car wreck, I can't look away.
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We're giving you ideas here. 
Use them. 
Oh, come on.
Bronydragon
All this sexual tension...
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I'l think about it.
No promises though.
However... later on I am planning a one-shot clop-fic (my first one) dealing with Featherweight
and... some filly. Do note that it will not have anything to do with this present FeatherPerv.
Wow. Just one word. Wow.
Update?
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1032346
Will it end with him getting caught? I also loved how his pervertedness increases with each chapter.
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No it won't, but the end should be funny to a lot.
Short conclusion chapter will be posted tomorrow!
Wow... I'm not sure what's creepier.... Featherweight, or how into it Twist was.
For some reason, I'm looking forward to just how wierd, awkward and creepy things get from here on out.
NO! it Cannot END! Please don't let it end !
You say wondering often and I think you mean wandering. Sorry if I'm mistaken.
And I second Duple's sentiment. Moar pwease.
featherweight needs to get laid
Beautiful write again soon
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So this story actually is ending?
Dammit.
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Yeah, it is because that was all the ideas I had for this. I know others wanted me to continue and even gave me ideas, but I just want to end it for now. However, in the future, if if I get anymore ideas for this, I might do a few short one-shot side stories based on this Featherweight.
I even have an idea in my head right now; but for now, I'm ending it... sorry.
This is so creepy that it is funny....mor so funny that it is creepy, but either way it was a very enjoyable read. You had me laughing out loud at more than one occasion.
The picture at the end was also pure genius.
Do you plan on writing more perverted schoolcolt, because if you are, i will be looking forward to it
sequel
I implore you, sir, for continuation! This is such a fun idea. I kept having these moments of "Ohh boy. How's he gonna word his way out this time??" And I never thought about Roid Rage being Featherweight's brother, but it makes sense. (though I think his name might be Snowflake)
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Did you guys see my last comment here?
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didn't mean to sound rude or anything; I was just pointing it out.
Sorry,
1087229 ah, i see it now, i guess the problem was me loading up the story, forgetting about it and then reading it later without reloading the comments first, silly me
Funny.
1087229
Begging your pardon, there were only three comments when I has read this. Now that I'm not still giddy from laughter, I can see why you'd end it here.It was a marvelous read.
1087229
I did and I'm asking you something.
Why, just why?
We were giving you so many ideas and you're still not doing more?
I'm heartbroken.
Bronydragon
I like how erotic you make this without being pornographic. That is something I really need to try my hand at; I usually excel at the hardcore smut, but I promised myself I would not write clopfics (as tempting as Chrysalis makes it).