Guardian Jayhawk
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This story made me make more confused faces than anything else I've ever read.
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That's actually good. I like that effect.
Next couple chapters have a lot of explaining, as well as some backstories.
Just for the river styx insta fav
Needs more chapters. And yes i have seen the blog and your response. but i am hooked on this now. You write excellently and keep the story held together amazingly well.
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Alright, fine.
I'll whip out chapter 4 for now. It's sitting in a quarter-done Goggle Doc anyways.
Expect it done sometime tomorrow or the day after.
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thank you sir. Hope your new ideas are as good as these are. Im watching you...
And shit has just got real
Mother of god. This I need more of bro
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Chapter 6 is a current WIP. It's get a bit calmer, but you'll like where it starts going.
IRA: So much win.
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'Omigosh! I have a fan!"
And thus my mind just got out of my skull and exploded in front of me. Also good for him telling off Princess stick up her ass.
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"Princess stick up her ass"
I'm dying.
Literaly, I can't breathe through laughter
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I have those rare moments of comedic genius. By the way im done on the doc. If you want you can add your guy in now or the next chapter
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Sweet.
Double document writing? Challenge accepted.
ITS A TRAP.
The following image describes the fight scene perfectly.
images4.fanpop.com/image/photos/20500000/ninja-guitar-awesomeness-XD-breakdancing-fun-size-ninja-dorks-20581269-600-450.jpg
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I can't see that image for some reason, unfortunately.
Try linking it through Imgur or something
1229472 Le fix:
planetcalypsoforum.com/gallery/files/3/8/5/1/6/ninjas-with-guitars.jpg
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Wow.
Y'know...in a technical sense, that was kinda what I was going for.
Mother of god bro. He just destroyed haimon
Soul why do you trust a pony that was trying to kill you and spoke only to buy time?
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That's quite a good question
I never really mentioned Soulless Reaper being smart anyways
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true my friend true.
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You know what would be extremely badass? Jay managing to merge Ira with Iustit... THE ULTIMATE FORM!
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Actually, that's a legit thing.
By using using both Iustit's and Ira's forms at the same time, Jay enters a state of "True Harmony" where he can use both of their abilities as well as dual wielding their swords.
When he transforms he often shows off how loud he can be in a very cliche way
And all I transhorm into is a drunk singing dwarf
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Well I have to say this seems very interesting, though i found a few spelling/grammar errors here and there. The story it'self is something i have not read before and could end up being pretty awesome. I found that your Hades seemed alot like the Hades from the Disney movie "Hercules" which i thought was pretty cool.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Rainbow_dealwithit.png All in all Awesome concept and i shall be reading more.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Colgate_beam.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Colgate_beam.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png
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Thanks for the feedback man. I'll have to keep an eye on my writing; I tend to miss my grammar errors when typing fast.
And yes, Hades is from the Disney movie lol
Nice chapter man. Keep going cause this story is great.
And to think that that isnt even his final form.
SOON OF A BITCH SON OF A BITCH SON OF A BITCH!!!!!!!!!!
Bitches be jelly of Ira's chainsaw.
And the insane vibes coming off of him.
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I'm not sure what's going on...
...so I'm just gonna act like nothing happened and continue eating my submarine sandwich.
Ira's too much of a badass motherfucker to just keep under control. Sure, Jay is the host... But COME ON! Plus he's a demon. And slightly evil.
....
I like evil....
Let the epicness begin!
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I could totally say something relevant to what you just said that would make you be all like "whoa, dude....."
But I don't wanna ruin anything about Jay's background, or the story.
Still badass
Devil May cry reference eh?