Fifteen years after the Cutie Mark Crusaders earned their cutie marks, Scootaloo, now a Wonderbolt, realizes she hasn't contacted her friends in years, despite the fact that she promised to. Desperate to see them again, she sends Sweetie Belle and Apple Bloom a letter telling them to meet her at the old clubhouse. Once there, the three reflect on times long gone. Inspired by http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_TpHqacFvBk
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If anyone reads this story, please know that I didn't spend a lot of time on it, so I'd be happy if you'd point out any mistakes. Please don't judge me solely on this story, as this was something I just threw together in one afternoon after hearing ElectroKaplosion's amazing song. Thanks for reading! ![]()
This story was amazing i listen to the song as i read it and now i'm crying so lovely so perfect
(I mean this face as the story was so good i cried)
Pretty good so far! Got a comment on the CMC Conclusion saying that it inspired a fan fic ^^ The only thing you should change/explain is when Sweetie Belle's being interviewed she says she's married to someone named Flame, but then she's also apparently married to Featherweight. ANYWAY I'm enjoying your interpretation of the song, it's really interesting seeing how people interpret my lyrics! Also Three Little Dreamers i c wut u did thar :P
Awesome! Really great job on this and I'm honored that my work inspired you to write it! I just absolutely love seeing an interpretation of my lyrics be put into writing, it helps me see what people think after listening to this song and it's really interesting! Keep up the good work! ![]()
Thanks for commenting! I fixed that error now. On the first draft I wrote I was going to have Sweetie Belle marry someone named Flame, but then afterwards I changed my mind and made her married to Featherweight. I thought I fixed all the times I mentioned Flame's name, but I guess not. Also, I just wanted to say thank you for making such amazing music. You're one of my favorite brony musicians, and I know this may sound cliche, but I'm really honored that you would read my fanfiction. So once again I say thank you. ![]()
At first I thought this would be the generic CMC reunion story, but it was quite different than what I expected. It brought a lot more meaning to the whole situation and it actually made me tear up at the end. Reading the comments and finding out that your only twelve only made me appreciate the story more. You have great talent for writing and you should continue to expand on it. I feel happy knowing that there are writers and stories like this around. Thanks for the awesome story.
Good story, it made me
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but parst of it still don't make sense!![]()
Awww just had an idea to do something like this, based on the same song to be honest
Ah well good inspiration is good.







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