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MetalBrony20


Hi, names MetalBrony20, I started writing normal stories, got bored, then decided to write WG/Fat fiction instead. Support me if you want with a coffee - https://ko-fi.com/metalmadness9090238

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Manehatten MediTech, a huge research lab and medical centre designed to better the lives of everyone, sometimes in the most unusual of ways. Lapis Lake, a mare down on her luck will find herself at the spearhead of a new project as she volunteers for a revolutionary test designed to help those individuals of excess girth.

This story contains-
Fat- From chubby to immobile blobs.
Weight gain.
Gas- Belching.
Messy eating.
Poor attempts at rhyming.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 9 )

if only a drug like that existed, I like where this is going

Is it bad whenever I heard the details of the suit, my mind immediately went to Vegeta's suit from DBZ/S?

Liking this so far.

One thing to keep in mind: when a new character begins speaking it is proper grammar to start a new paragraph. It also helps the reader keep the speakers separate more easily.

Really love your stories.
Do you take story comissions?

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Thank you very much, I really appreciate the fact you took time to read my fan fics!
Sorry, but I don't take commissions. Mainly because I go in and out of writing phases and I don't have a paypal account set up. You could PM me a suggestion if you want, but not promises if it gets done.

Great story (in more than one way :raritywink:)! Hope the future brings more like that.
The OCs at the end seem familiar, did I recognize WG enthusiasts Magna-Save, Winterlight and Lupin Quill?

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Yep, you got them right! Thanks for the support!

Nice story.
Kinda remind me Sleipnir Colony by Archy.
The inventions had to start somehow.

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