I think I love you bro

I mean, no homo.

There are some slight English errors, but they don't really matter that much.

You're like that one counterpart to me I always wished I had.

Your writing style is incredibly, and I mean /incredibly/ similar to my own, yet it utilizes a much more descriptive usage of words.

I always forget to note the setting or something in relation to a character, but you note a lot of it.

I am heavy with my English skills and am a very good romantic / clop / grimdark writer.

You're good at the rest.  If we collaborated, shit would hit the fan faster than you could say

"this stinks"

>>985913985913

Thanks!

Yeah, I'm kinda new to the writing fan-fiction thing, and still learning a bit of my language and narrative skills, since I'm still in school and all. It also doesn't help that I'm juggling a 2nd person romance with an omniscient action fic, but anyway.

Yeah! I'd love to collab with you sometime, and hell, maybe we can create the best Pony romantic fic ever made.

and this is why Octavia IS my 3rd favourite pony!

MOAR OCTAVIA MOAR OCTAVIA I NEEDS MORE

Cool story bro

Gonna track.

I do love me some Octavia romance fic's!

This is so goddamned hilarious! It's so fucking informal

FAV'ED!!!!

yay a new sexy cute octavia story

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I like OC so far, he has a panic attack, no 2 panic attacks in the first chapter. I think that this will be a good story.

Great story, definitely liked your style of writing. It's a change from that excessive-descriptive writing style everyone else tries for.

Also, this story made me like second person a bit more. I'd liked it in the past, but this seemed to tie together my opinion.

10/10, op. You could easily write more, maybe a closure of events...

god damn this is freaking great. we need more of these stories in fimfiction. try to make this as good as "Two's company, three's a crowd" and as long.

>>989747989747

Image: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia_O_O.png

wow, being banned in your first two days is not fun.

bucking hilarious, awkward and priceless all at once

My mind, exploded twice Very good

The end part of this chapter was absolutely hilarious.

“Just because I’m most known and professionalized in classical, symphonic, and orchestral music doesn’t mean it’s the only music I listen to.”

WHAT? NO! NONONONO!....Buck, I had the same idea for an Octavia fic myself. Damnit, I should have wrote it earlier.

Anyway, good story. More! Nuff said.

shiiiiitt just got seriously real

Well... there goes the happy ending

>>986341986341

hottahothottahottathot

DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM smooth dude real fuckin smooth

the only way to make this worse is to... nevermind.

>>10012021001202

>>10017421001742

"Look," she puts your face to your cheek, "You don't have to worry about any of this, okay?"

Why Octavia?! HOW IS THAT EVEN POSSIBLE?!

Awesome story! Keep it up, and have a moustache!

>>10122051012205 ... shit how did I miss that?!

>>10122051012205 thank you though!

GAH! So many mistakes I can't fix anymore!

So... Is this the end or will there be more?

I hope for the latter

ha.

"fucking finally."

I HAS VE CONCUSSION!

Good, good...

Lovely, just lovely. Can't wait for the future chapters. ;D

BUD DA BAAAAAA

*life realizing revalation*!!!!!!!

"can we flip again?"

well that was for nothing

>>10163441016344

Okay, I fricking love this story. MOAR. Oh wait, there already is. xD

>>986341986341 Where the hell did you get that picture!?! :O

"Your heart drops harder than a nuclear bomb."

New bass drop joke!

Well, back on topic, this is a lovely story, and Octavia just seems so cute. Onto Chapter 4!

1) Victoria Samantha Scratch. What an awesome name.

2) This guy is turned on by lesbians? Join the club, sir.

3) So glad there's another chapter to read so I don't get cliffhanger-ed. Yet.

Fucking finally.

But now we have a fucking cliffhanger.

BUT it will be worth it.

>>10241801024180 oh i won't tell

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you need to work for info

This story was... something else i tell you, different indeed. Something struck me as odd at parts of the story, hard to explain but it wasn't what it could've been, and when i read that he said "that's awesome" about their "experiment" i did this so hard: Anyway, i'll thumbs up, but i wasn't excited. i did however LOVE the life lesson about second chances. VERY inspiring that part.

wait wait wait..... i was reading this story a few weeks back and now that iv finally found the time to read more HALF THE STORY IS MISSING!!!!

somepony correct me if im wrong but i could have sworn there was atleast 3 more chapters to this

idk if im right or if im just going a little insane

this has got me all tripped out

FARRRCK!!

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Wow! I was hoping for someone to make a really good story Octavia! I lovedeverything about this story :D with the acception of a few mistakes its amazing!

>>985913985913

Well I love him, and there certainly is a bit of homo is there!

>>985943985943

*just noticed this now*

God damn.  I am terrible at this.