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Rainbow Dash has been financially struggling, and a certain grey, bowtie-wearing mare gives her an idea.

(Written in 30 minutes with no prompts. I literally wrote whatever my mind thought of. Not to be taken too seriously. This was basically my attempt at writing something quickly.)

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I'm so sorry...

Especially for that whole reference at the end.

I had a lot of fun dashing to write this, but meh on the end result. I have this personal rule of publishing anything I make, else my inner critic would never let anything by.

Pretty good for 30 minutes, I guess. Formatting could use a little bit of work, mainly just for dialogue placement. And I think you could add more character tags.

985582 Mhm one sec, fixing. I know what you are talking about.

985633 Don't worry

I found the story entertaining, though the end confused me. I didn't get the reference. :derpytongue2:

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