Not sure if celestia would choose that way to exit the world. Thats my only criticism otherwise it seemed good to me

This was done very well. Really sad, but that's what you were going for, so it's good. Well done, sir.

I would think royalty would just take poison and go to sleep or something else less messy. Besides that its a touching story.

that's all i have to say

trash.

.......... How does she die if she's IMORTAL? ( which means nothing can kill her)

>>978005978005

No, 'immortal' means unable to die of old age. 'Invincible' means you can't be hurt or die.

Maybe it's my interpretation of the word.

manly tears.

Tears. This was beautiful.

A bit rushed but sill sad, WHY?

>>978005978005 Immortality means that you do not age once you get into adulthood. Invincibility is immortality and the inability to die.

That... that... that last line...

Could she really die? If she's immortal she could have taken poison like doctorwhooves said. Not sure it would kill her, but still could a regular knife kill her? Like speedy said, it's the inability to die. Andere als die gute fic!

" “I love you, Twilight Sparkle.” "

Killed the story for me

>>984298984298

Sorry to hear that. My writing quality is bad, I know.

>>986105986105 That has nothing to do with the writing quality. Its just the choice of words, the quality is fine.

*Read compassionately from the beginning to before the letters*

This seems like a good way to point out life.

*Reads letters*

...Wait what?

*Continues reading before that last few words*

Wait...

*Reads last sentence*

*Heart skips a beat*

HOW CAN SHE DO THIS!?

>>978005978005 Immortal doesn't mean bulletproof.

-John Carter

Good story by the way. It's very interesting to read what people feel goes through the mind of an ageless being, watching all whither and grow back countless times, seeing cycles repeat over and over. Twilight was is something special

>>11762881176288

Thanks!

Right in the feels