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Bass Kick 73112

Joined June 2012
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    Bass Kick's Stories (7)


    An experimental bio-mechanical mare is trapped the hooves of a dark enterprise, and she now finds herself lost in darkness. With no prior thought or history, and actually no prior existence, she must find a path out of the living nightmare of the Cypony project.

    First Published
    26th Jul 2012
    Last Modified
    26th Jul 2012

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    #2 · Chapter 2 · 42w, 2d ago · · ·
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    YO! Saw your comment on Steel Soul and decided to have a look at this. And I like it!

    One typo, though: "She peered out through it, looking at what way beyond the metal cover." I think that's supposed to be"She peered out through it, looking at what lay beyond the metal cover."

    Cheers.

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