Not bad! Couple of spelling issues, and some of your tenses got mixed up, but the story is quite good, so long as you elaborate in later chapters.

Thank you and don't worry I'll add more chapters...might take me a bit though

Terribly sorry but it will take chapter 3 even longer now since it got deleted bby accident

Terribly sorry but Fluttershy will no longer be a main character for this story...this story is focused mostly on Luna and Brad (OC character). Celestia appears often because being Luna's sister, she has some significance to the story. If I do create more stories...I'll try to put Fluttershy as one of the main characters.

UPDATE: Since this story had completely left my mind and was forgotten for so long...it is now Cancelled. I may be remaking this story, changing alot of things to it. So...maybe a new version of this story will come out....or maybe not....I don't know yet