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Chuck-daddy's Stories (14)

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The Picnic
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The Picnic by Chuck-daddy

Comedy Slice of Life

Lyra just wants to have a picnic with her best friend. Unfortunately for her, Pinkie Pie has a way of messing these things up.

Note: requested by Mcyav.

First Published
25th Jul 2012

Last Modified
25th Jul 2012

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#1 · 42w, 6d ago ·

I AM THE FRIST person to like, comment and favourite this. This was short and sweet just like muffins, but aside from that, I found this fairly funny. You win the 74th annual random comment thingie-ma-bob...yeah I'm gonna go now

Lockstep

#2 · 42w, 6d ago ·

:applejackunsure:

I'll just...lower my hand now.

Mcyav

#3 · 42w, 6d ago ·

It was quite good! For someone who claims not to write comedy it's quite a feat. My main complaint is that it fell into your normal trap of not enough writing! You need to write more, detail more and and the meaty filling to the delicious pastry that you keep serving us with these fics! (That's a pretty good one isn't it? I'm impressed with it.)

Chuck-daddy

#4 · 42w, 6d ago ·

>>971510971510 Well, I only live to satisfy you. I realize it was pretty short. Nice metaphor, also.

Mcyav

#5 · 42w, 6d ago ·

>>971549971549 Thankyou! And write more! More I say! :pinkiecrazy:

Wertyla

#6 · 42w, 6d ago ·

Haha! This is so funny! Logic like Pinkie's is why shipping exists. Can't we leave ponies at "just friends"? :heart:

Chuck-daddy

#7 · 42w, 6d ago ·

>>972832972832 I'm glad you liked it. :yay: This was my first attempt at writing comedy, so I'm glad someone thought it was funny.

Wertyla

#8 · 42w, 6d ago ·

>>973097973097

Well, you did well because I tend to write comedy in whenever I write a story! :rainbowlaugh: "Rumors, Lies and Cupcakes" started out as a story I was going to tag "Normal", then I was typing it and it just got funnier and funnier. What can I say? I like comedy!

Q Illespont

#9 · 42w, 6d ago ·

As much as I like shipping these two ... this was a good read. Although I now have the line 'No ... Lyra straight' in my mind as she walks away from Bart and the Waco Kid..

Sakkin Hak