Interesting story.  Too bad it says completed.  I would have like to have seen a little more.  Maybe they try to fix things with time travel or it turns out to be a prophetic dream that twilight and friends must stop.  However I did enjoy it, so thanks for the job well done.

>>970712970712

I was thinking about that, actually. I'm not sure if I wanted to continue it, or if it would drag on as anything other than a one-shot. I'll get a few more reviews from friends and people like you before I make any big decisions though.

Maybe they have to try and find new subjects from the other lands.

Hell breaks loose. Luna panics. Celestia is pissed.

That's even less actual content than "My little Dashy" and yet I could not stop reading.

How did you do that? Are you a wizard?

I wonder if "dark" would be more appropriate than "Tragedy".

>>971086971086

Image: http://i.imgur.com/3io5G.jpg

>>971086971086

Just kidding. Actually, I'm uncertain. I didn't think it would even get this many views, much less favorites, so I'm pretty stoked about that. It makes me happy to see that people are enjoying my story. I'll be sure to write more in the future, and I MIGHT even continue this one. I'm uncertain as of yet, but ideas are presenting themselves.

I rather liked it, but I would suggest not italicizing so much of your story.  Anyways, thanks for the interesting read!

>>972048972048

Well I would suggest making... your... text... less green! HA!

Just kidding. Fixed it now, is it a smooth transition?

>>972163972163 Well, it's certainly less of a strain on the eyes. There was just so much of it, lol. And yes, with the break and set-up line before it, it transitions fairly well, IMHO.

Pretty interesting read there!

Is this all, though? It kinda feels like a prologue; like this is the set up for a grand story of retribution and recovery, sorting out the failed gate of Tartarus before starting over from ashes...

Maybe that's just me though   Good story anyway!

>>976950976950

I let a few people read it before posting, and you're the third one here who has suggested continuing it. I'm seriously considering it, honestly. I've had a few ideas floating throughout my head that I've been considering. I'll probably end up writing another chapter or two.

>>977072977072

Excellent!

Can't wait to see the path you take this!

>>970712970712

I've changed it now. Uncertain if it notifies you guys or anything that aren't "watching" me, but I know that comments work.

You and several others (including friends) have convinced me to write more of this story. And being that writing is damningly fun and that I already had several ideas in my head, I couldn't resist.

Dear Goddess the emotion

>>980949980949

If you fav a story you get a new "unread" notification. You're new to this site, are you?

As you mentioned Discord: I wonder why the princesses don't release him, even if it's just to have someone to talk to.

After all, sitting around and watching ash fall from the sky is about as boring as it gets, and they might even ask him to Chaos-Magic it all back to before that little mishap.

>>982274982274

I am relatively new in how all the mechanics of being an author work, yes. Lol.

Fuck. I don't know. Tell me if I'm doing things wrong, please. It feels like I threw this together, yet I know it's better than some fanfics I've read. The uncertainty is great with this one.

I think Discord was a little too serious when he came back to life, I would expect him to crack a joke or something of that sort. Maybe you could read over that part again and brighten him up?

>>10546131054613

Hm. I don't think so. He did make fun of them several times and tried to make the situation all about himself, which is how he would normally act, I imagine. My only issue with him is how quickly I had him convert to the princesses' side. Not sure if I handled that correctly or not.

I don't see him converted? I see him sticking along for the ride. He is still the spirit of chaos so that works out ok.

So this is your response to Keep Calm and Flutter On. Interesting.

>>19685101968510

It's actually not; This story has been a work in progress for months now, since I sort of stopped back in August. It's running smoothly once more now, but this has nothing to do with the new episode on Saturday.

Also, spoilers aren't cool.

That's life. Sometimes we get things even if we don't deserve them.

But faster updates would be nice indeed.