One bright, springtime day, Rarity is appalled and perplexed to see her friends having a party at Sugar Cube Corner without her. She retires, in tears, to her home, only to be saved from her grief by Rainbow Dash, who states that they had, in fact, given her an invitation.
Why wasn't the invitation in Rarity's mailbox? The friends set out on a mission to reveal the mastermind behind all this, expecting some silly foal; the real discovery, however, turns out to be much more sinister. Fighting confusion about their feelings for each other and their other friends, Rarity and Rainbow Dash must find a way to remedy the situation, for the sake of their friendship and the safety of all of Equestria.
Chapters (5)
Pretty good so far. I was just thinking that Rarity and Rainbow don't get enough interaction time in the show. Looking forward to more!
I wasn't particularly interested in reading a Rarity x Rainbow Dash, but I decided it was worth a shot. I must say, the way you write is absolutely beautiful. I hope to see the same quality in future updates.
*tracks*
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Thanks~ I'm actually writing up the next chapter right now. So you probably won't have to wait too long.
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Thank you so much! ; w; I've been feeling a little down about my style lately, so I really appreciate that you like it~
Deprived, not depraved. This seemed a bit short, but I look forward to future chapters.
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Ah! Thank you! I didn't catch that when I was reading over it. (:
Interesting concept, but a tad bit wordy - nothing blatantly wrong, it's just that your prose could use a little trimming.
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Well, I guess we'll just see how it goes! Thank you for the feedback~ I'll try doing a little more editing next time. (:
Some people say too short, others too long-winded...
Well, I'll be one of the ones with the opposite opinion. I liked the "wordiness" of your story. You do a great job of describing what's going on and creating the environment of the story.
I agree that no trimming need take place.
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I probably wouldn't have changed my style anyway. :P It's hard to switch styles around in the middle of a story. (:
Oh? Thank you!
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Good. xD Thanks~
Pinkie may be
, but you can always count on her in an actual disaster! 
After some mumbling about wordiness in a previous chapter, I went back through this one and pretended to be an editor. What would I leave out, what would I rewrite?
Answer: nothing, and hardly anything at all.
Which I suppose disqualifies me as an editor, but it makes me a happier reader.
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I know, right? I was kind of counting on that. :P
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Thank you so much~! I love it when other people edit and stuff, it makes me feel better about my writing. x3
No not Fluttershy!!!
Can't wait to see more.
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Haha~! I've had a lot of people feel bad about Fluttershy. xD But I wanted somepony that Rainbow Dash would want to help immediately, and Fluttershy worked nicely. :P
I finally read through this a few more times and fixed bunch of mistakes... "Only the princesses have horns and tails"... Geez, I don't pay any attention when I write.
Sorry for the short chapters... I could probably combine a few of them, but I'm not going to bother at this point.
The story itself is pretty suspenseful.
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I guess it is kind of suspenseful... :D Not exactly what I was going for, but it works!
Thanks so much for the continued support~ It means a lot!
I should have checked the date of the last updated chapter before reading this...