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Trish Hankins


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Due to the many times they have saved both Ponyville and Equestria, the Mane 6 is getting a weekend vacation, all expenses payed, from the town. When something attacks the town, it's up to the minor characters to save the townsfolk and themselves.

THERE IS A SEQUEL HERE: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/50052/The-Zeppos

Originally this was written as a script for the Summer Funimation Screenwriting Contest, and I'm working on rewriting in as a fanfic. The change is style requires a change in mindset, so please give feedback to help me with the process.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 17 )

A bit of a long exposition, but I still like it. Faved, and tracked.

A sleep army. Been awhile since I heard of this. I'll wait to see what happens next.

I guess I was wrong.:ajbemused:
Look like this monkey king plans to enslave the entire town of Ponyville. I didn't think Trixie would be powerful enough to cast a spell of this magnitude. I can hardly wait for the next part.

Thank you for the confidence boost! Writing processor, away!

I guess we know what Vinyl device did. But seriously, the way this chapter ended. Damn cliffhanger!!:flutterrage:
Can we please have the next chapter?:fluttercry:

I shall work on it today, thank you.:pinkiehappy:

"Derpy Hooves: The Element of Suspiciously Specific Denial.":rainbowlaugh::pinkiehappy:

"That," Vinyl said, "is my bass cannon."

Or, as one side character in an episode of 'Doctor Who' put it: "Pure, penetrating sound! It kills!" Given that it could kill Daleks, I'm not convinced that there will be much left of his primateness over than jellified protein stew.

@BenRG Hahahahahahahaha:pinkiecrazy:

Looks like the monkey king was made to see the light.:pinkiehappy: Next!

The Zeppos?:rainbowderp:
Anyway, this was a very good series. I'm glad other ponies got to save the day. I will keep an eye out for this sequel.

>> Frankie
The title of the sequel is a reference to an episode of Buffy. Glad you enjoyed it!1176812

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