Hilarious story this is!

I just knew that Twi had something to do with this.

Pretty good, I enjoyed it, although you like to use italics a lot. Some minor errors, but hey, stuff.

thumbs up for you.

I saw this on...Fanfiction, was it? Loved it there, loved it here!

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That's just the way Pinkie is. She puts emphasis on almost every third word she says.

Because she's so excited, see?

Thumbs up!

That was very well done. I must admit I did not see that coming.javascript:smilie('');

Haha! Good use of the story, following the plot mountain! It'd be awesome if Twilight had nothing to do with it, and the ghost was a creature from another dimension, sent to destroy Pinkie Pie and Rainbow Dash! That could be an awesome sequel to this story, but hey. This is your story, that was just a suggestion.

Somehow, I knew it would end like that. Great build-up, though. You could have doubled it's length and it still would have been great.

>>965196965196Yeah I remember seeing it there as well, nice to see it finally made it's way here though.

Aw. Now Pinkie's going to die after Ponygeist 3...

/shot But great lil' story. You sir/ma'am deserve ten moustache Spikes.

Oh you Twilight, scaring everypony like that

Good story dude, I enjoyed it--keep up the good work

hahah Twilight the Troll, excellent! This was exactly thee kinda of laugh I needed today. Thanks robot.

Everyone's gonna KILL Twi when they find out it was her! oh man, you GOTTA do a sequel when everypony find out about the magic thing!

lol that was a good read XD

and i so wana see what happens afterwards

The Next Day

"Come on guys.  Let me out.  Please?  I promise not to do any more pranks like that ever again.  Pinkie Promise even.  Look, it's cold in here.  Guys? Are you out there?  Anypony?  Oh, come on!  At least throw a book in here or something."

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Yeah this was a fun one to write - it has over 14,000 views on Deviantart, and it got about a thousand  in less than a day.

I still have no idea what I did right.