Lol This is going to be good. Time to fav it.

yay

OMG! I love Pink-Burn shipping! this is awesome!

EDIT:  Wow, faved!

oooo, dis gon b gud

Nice! Continue, please!

Lol Humor all around. And do I sense a SoarinDash in the future.

Oh boy, here we go!

*grabs a Bud Light*

Aww poor Pinkie and poor Breaburn :o

>>982876982876

I don't think I'll ever get around to writing something about them getting together for this story, but I'm sure I'll write about them eventually.

This is great! Can't wait to see what happens with it.

>>983413983413

^This!

I'm ready to read about BraePie being shipped like FedEX

>>982876982876

Ooh, I hope so too!

>>983270983270

Awwwww................

They need a story of their own, you're right...

GREAT STORY!! Fave'd and tracking!

Yay Pinkburn! :soarin:

WHERE THE BUCK IS CHAPTER THREE!?

Umm...I don't mean to be pushy, but um...will chapter three be out soon?

>>10643041064304

I've been a little preoccupied with another story, but I'll write a little more of this tonight and try to get it out sometime this weekend.

>>10643241064324

Okey Dokey Lokey!

There aren't enough of these fics on here. Most of the ones I have seen were fem slash or slash. A darn shame really. With so many characters to pair one would think people would branch out a bit.

I apologize for any lack of updates. I am working on this (very veeeeery slowly), but it's honestly hard to try and work on this story when my other one is simply more fun to write. I could update it more often with shorter chapters, but people complain about that so I won't.

...and now we have conflict.

Good to see this update, I'm not a big fan shipping, but I have a soft spot for the unlikely ones. Pinkie getting pissed and yelling at the Cakes seems a bit out of character, but what the hell? it's fanfiction. Feels like I'm hoping against fate for a happy ending, but let's see how it goes.

>>11412401141240

It's updated mostly by request. This was more of an idea I had that I decided I wouldn't really continue. I don't think it seems too out of character; ponies are judging her by thinking she's flirting when she's just trying to be a good friend.

>>11412471141247

It wasn't so much that she got mad, it just felt like she was getting "YOU BROKE A PINKIE PROMISE!" mad that felt weird. I'm not going judge though because it's fanfiction in the end... hell, it's Pinkie Pie fanfiction on top of that.

I hope you get around to finishing this eventually. It's rare to see a shipfic that doesn't end with sunshine and rainbows.

>>11412471141247

Wait a second... if this pairing works out... does that mean that Surprise is Beaburn's kid? Is he! TELL ME! I want to know the pairings in "A Day with Day"!

>>11448021144802

These stories are not connected. I never even meant to continue this story; people asked me to. There will be a sequel to the other story, but that doesn't necessarily mean I'll reveal the fathers.

>>11448241144824

Damn you! I like knowing pairings... But... if that is the case then I guess I have to live with it.

Still love "A Day with Dad", though I can see why this works better as a one shot as apposed to a full story. But hey! I won't complain getting more of this story either. Though I might still yell about pairings... but I am just strange like that.

One of my top fav ships! There isn't really a lot of these.

I think I love you now, well at least your style of writing.

Poor Pinkie...

Kind of understandable Pinkie, hate to see people jump to conclusions as well... wait if they think she and Breaburn are dating if she is just showing him around town... oh dear her reputation isn't as good as she thinks.

Oh by the way does this tie into your Soarin'/Rainbow story?

>>12864201286420

No, none of my current stories are connected.

>>12867451286745

Well crap, guess it's back to guess who is the father of Surprise then

This has been featured, right? If not, it totally deserves it!! Can't wait for more!

The Pony Pokey: The most romantic dance ever conceived.

But seriously, I really like this story. Pinkie Pie seems wierdly furious at the idea of going on a date, and I'm wondering if there's more to it than she's simply a hardcore friendzoner

All in all, awesome job on one of the most underrated (in my opinion) pairings, and I can't wait for more!

When shall this be next updated. And why isn't the a luna HUZZUAH icon

>>15093521509352

Probably never. I hadn't really intended on continuing this story. If I do, it won't happen until the sequel and prequel for my other one are done.

I know you just updated with another story, but I was simply wondering when this story was going to receive some attention?

I have enjoyed everything you've put out so far, by the way.

I saw that Soarin'Dash you put there. XD Great job with this.

Whoa. Pinkie getting that much ticked off is wayyy out of character. Braeburn seems a bit more timid than he seemed in the show. Better be careful with that.

Dude you got to continue this story.

more please.

so this is going to be a pinkieburn story love it