Oh, Clear Sky. You're such a silly pony.

This is cracking me up so far, I'm tracking this one.

Dat plot.

is he related to screw-ball by anychance? screw loose maybe?

>>11937441193744

The name is a reference to an empty head. Clear Sky.

Gullible bastard.

I'll track this.

.....What.

This sounds so glorious i have to read it.

what is this i dont even...

>>11940181194018

Exactly.

>>11940221194022 well i have no idea where this is going to go. have fun confusing the buck out of me.

>>11940291194029

Well, what confuses you, child?

>>11940371194037 the amount of randomness. this needs the [random] tag.

>>11940581194058

How is it random, per say?

He's is kind of adorably stupid.

"She left with some purple-suited stallion; she didn't look to happy, though," the bartender added.

"She left with some purple-suited stallion; she didn't look too happy, though," the bartender added.

>>11941041194104

That was the idea while writing his character. Thank you for seeing my point. You shall receive a mustache.

>>11941101194110

Oh no. The grammar nazis have found me. Initiating escape sequence!

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>>11941141194114 Gahbahhamaanasaaa

Sorry, hyperventilated a bit there.

>>11941501194150

I have no idea what you are implying. Whatever it is, however, I'm sure it has much logic and reasoning behind it.

>>11942511194251 or lack thereof

>>11942961194296

Good to see you as a happy brony once again, Flash.

>>11941291194129 You're welcome.

>>11943011194301

Ooooooh, my. This cracked me up. Well done! I'm definitely

Tracking this.

Ohhh, this story looks promising. Really promising. You did a great job establishing both characters' personalities in this first chapter. The added humor in there makes it ALL the better. "A shower of bits rained upon her from her drooling spectators, covering her stage in the funds of the aroused." That had to be one of the funniest sentences I've read in a while, I don't know why.

Limes. I have a feeling this fruit will make more appearances in this story, damn it. And it's funny as hell, my friend. Adds a really nice touch to this story. But at least you didn't say mangos, right?

All in all, great and funny start to the story. Favorited so I can read more of what you'll post for it. Looking forward to it.

>>11942511194251 I was unbearably excited for my new mustache (moustache?)

>>11946851194685

Always appreciated, Mr. Davis!

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>>11946951194695

Ah! Now sense has been made. Thank you for clarifying.

The sense has been doubled!

Huh, I thought I put this on my read list....I guess I didn't.  READ LIST.

>>11947211194721

This comment pleases Pnkie Pi.

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is oc high or something? he quite an idiot.

>>12052081205208

That's what he's supposed to be like. Remember the early Spongebob? He had a childlike sort of naiveness about him, unlike the current one who is just a complete moron. Think of him as, like Bookworm put it, adorably stupid.

>>12063991206399 I love the early Spongebob episodes from like 1999 to 2008. I watch Spongebob sometimes because it lets me park my brain after a hard day's work. Adorably stupid characters in a cartoon are good cures for long days, haha.

Ignorance Shield strikes again!

150 Proof Applejack Daniel's. You are a scream. I really enjoyed this Chapter 2. Definitely on the adventurous side. Definitely can't go wrong with a little Comedy and Adventure. Looking forward to future chapters, my boy.

Ooooooooh, my. Sky's liver must be wrought out of lead and iron.

Just a side note, why doesn't this have more views? I'm absolutely loving it!

Oh Sky, you so silleh

This story's awesome. Though you gotta wonder how all these ponies seem to know this purple sutied stallion...Unless ponynapping isn't very common in Equestria.

It's a trap! They're all in on this! Sky, watch out! Take this flare! *gives flare*

>>13037721303772

IKR? lol

Wait! It's too dangerous to go alone! Here, take this. (Sky receives bulletproof vest, gun, and ammunition.)

I've got one word for you, just one.

YES.

~Syn3rgy

This was a good chapter.

"All of this did not deter him, however, from fluttering through the alleyways with a bright smile on his face. Gosh! I finally have a marefriend, he thought. This is the best day ever!"

...

omfg

...

Clear Sky = most depressing lack of relationship knowledge...

Pfft, lols. Its sort of like Forrest Gump where the character has below average intelligence and totally oblivious to his surroundings, yet can do feats beyoind what anyone can expects. If anything else, it's kind of like a weird cartoon that is somehow very appealing. Well played good sir, you have my complete attention to your fanfic

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Keep up the good work man. Best regards

Heh heh... Awesome! :P

Sky is great... just greate...

>>13143881314388

Great enough for a fav, like and watch? lol

>>13153001315300

Sure! And you DO have a very ...unique... interesting... Username! :D

>>13194051319405

I can tell you the entire story behind it if you wish.

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>>13194391319439

Sure!

>>13194521319452

It all started when I first got my PS3 about 3 years ago. The first game I purchased was "Red Dead Redemption", basically a wild west version of GTA developed by Rockstar Games (the creators of GTA). For selecting my PSN name, I wanted it to sound Native American (which I am not) while also sounding as strange and random as possible. The first things that popped into my head was dancing and bagels. I put them together and got DancesWithBaglez. I didn't realize at the time that I had spelled bagels wrong, but I have not chosen to change it. Now, I use that name for everything: Fimfiction, Youtube, Minecraft, etc.

>>13194841319484

heh heh heh.... bagels... well, it's a cool username! Coolio! "Strange and Random as Possible" yes.... YES. I LIKE ZE RANDOMNESS!!!

What is this I don't even... Okay right feedback, please give me a moment to pick my brain up off the floor... Well Trixie as a stripper... in Ponyville strikes me as an odd choice. The character of Clear Sky comes across as... well you are never supposed to go full on Derp and you have. His complete lack of anything resembling sense is endearing however, and I do wonder if Trixie has been Pony-napped by Slick Back. That had better be the purple suited pony's name or I shall be disappointed. On to chapter 2!

Wow... well the Hell's Pegasi was a trip... if Sky has become their newest member I would expect they would send him with an escort, maybe search for him, but an offer of help is interesting, I sense Chekhov's gun. Well done. A couple minor points. Thoughts can be depicted in italics vs quotes, it tends to make things less confusing when you have internal monologue separated like that. Also, Indenting isn't necessary, as a matter of fact it tends to read easier when you do not.

I get the feeling this story is going to be an awful lot of "I'm sorry Mario, but our Princess is in another castle."

>>13537161353716

How the hay did you read my mind?!

>>13537561353756

Is this going to be a problem?

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>>13553411355341 Oh no, just pointing out a pattern. I find it amusing.

"Sleep soundly, Clear Sky. You'll need it to face Slick Mane."

And the plot thickens!!!! How closely related are Slick, Sky, and Harley?

"Okay. I have no idea what you're saying, but please don't burn me! I don't even taste that good; believe me, I've tried."

WTF did I just read!?

Lol, the whole tribe scene reminded me of pirates of the Caribbean...

~Syn3rgy

>>14034581403458

Glad you liked it! Too bad theirs only one chapter left.

>>14034791403479

already, this is gonna feel rush if you ask me, wondering what Trixie is gonna say when Sky show up to rescue her.

"Plot convenience, my friend. Plot convenience."

Best line in fanfiction history.

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What a conclusion. A little fast, but I actually didn't mind it. What's more, look at your likes to dislike ratio! That's awesome :)

Good job on another completed story, DWB.

~Syn3rgy

A Pimp named Slick Mane.

All of my what.

>>14794601479460

Problem?

>>14795861479586

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Reminds me of the bar scene in Pee Wee's Big Adventure.

>>15682511568251

I remember that...

Also, nice work man, loved it, all of it...

All of it...

Every single last piece of the dialogue and scripting were enjoyable

due to the fact that my rubber ducks hypothesis was a Bon-Bon, and

my indigo traffic light went 'ding' and told me about the multi-verse, sending

me onto the chocolate rain express, which was full of soviet children...

I rest my case

Love Ed

This story is really good so far. Keep it up man

Clear Sky reminds me of Don Quixote. Or an Aspie. Regardless, I like him.

Tracking!

>>20679672067967

Thank you very much good person.

Needs clop.

>>21510162151016

Don't worry. You'll have your wish in good time...