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After visiting the spa, Fluttershy and Rarity drop in to say hi to Twilight. Unfortunately, they end up startling her in the midst of her studies, and a spell is accidentally cast. The end result? Fluttershy and Rarity switch bodies, and Twilight has no idea how to fix it - yet.

For the two friends, learning how to handle their new bodies will be challenging enough. But what about the lives and responsibilities attached to them? Things only become more complicated when the Cutie Mark Crusaders get involved...

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This was actually one of my first MLP fan fic ideas, oddly enough. After about half a dozen stories, I'm finally getting around to it. Woohoo! :yay:

I hope you enjoyed the first chapter! Please let me know what you thought about it. Feedback is greatly appreciated. :pinkiehappy:

One thing I think I need to point out, though... :trixieshiftright:

From here on out, "Fluttershy" is Fluttershy's mind and voice is Rarity's body. "Rarity" is Rarity's mind and voice in Fluttershy's body. So when I say that "Fluttershy" does or says something, it's Fluttershy... but in Rarity's body. Does that make sense? Oh I hope it makes sense. Hopefully nobody (other than maybe Twilight :twilightoops:) will be driven insane by this story...

Once again, thanks for reading. Please be awesome and leave me some feedback, be it in the form of a like, a favorite, or a comment. Do any of those things, and you'll be awesome. Don't you want to be awesome? Awesome. :moustache:

AWESOME! AWESOME! :pinkiehappy:

Have a 'stache.:moustache: I needed a good laugh, thanks!:pinkiehappy:

great fic tracking

Oh this looks like it could be funny :rainbowlaugh:

the idea is very funny and there's so much that can go wrong with bodyswaps :yay: (as seen in movies, comics, books and what else u can imagin)..
i'm curious about how they are going to handle their new forms.. dont let us hanging for the next chapter too long

NEEDMORE!

I'll have to read this too.

You write a lot of stories dude. This should be your theme song.

Oh, a body swap! A classic idea....... applied to ponies........
The Angry Brony approves :moustache:

Spike, he snapped like a twig:moustache:

:moustache:

Why are these chapters so shooortt? :raritydespair:

Liking it so far.

967248

I'm more worried about that hamster. I hope he had decent life insurance.

967631 liking it? yes, but Hamster?:rainbowhuh:

967661

The metaphorical hamster that represents Spike's mind working. His mind is a hamster wheel, I assumed it was a hamster running on it.

inb4 it's Utah the Velociraptor making a cameo or something of that nature.

Hooray! Lots of happy readers! Glad y'all are liking the story! :Thanks for all the likes, favs, follows, and watches! :pinkiehappy:


966226 Yeeeeah, pretty much. :yay:

967430 Well that's a complain I've never gotten before. :rainbowlaugh:

967678 "inb4 it's Utah the Velociraptor making a cameo or something of that nature."

"The spell she was currently focused upon was a transfiguration spell. She'd been practicing it for hours. At it's basest form, it could turn one item or substance into another form or material. A book into a plant. Lead into gold. A goldfish into a velociraptor."

:trollestia::trollestia::trollestia:

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Exactly what I meant. First he pops into existence via goldfish, then runs around Spike's brain.

I can just predict the ending. Twilight performs the spell again, but now they're all dinosaurs. Shenanigans.

Spike's panic missed somepony saying: "Well, he took it well."

This is a good start, but the chapters are far too short and not (only) in terms of word-count. A chapter ought to be a self-contained story unto itself in many respects.

These two chapters are almost, but not quite one real chapter. They'd certainly be much better reposted as one, and it's something to think about in future.

HAHAHA, the scene with spike was epic :pinkiecrazy:, this may be quite the learning experience for Rarity and Fluttershy :yay::raritywink:

this is incredibly well written, i did not find a single issue in grammar. you must have had a good pre reader... :pinkiehappy:

and i like the concept, most body swap stories become confusing after the swap, as the author oftentimes does not delegate who is who. :facehoof:
you however, did not make that same fatal mistake. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

following! :raritystarry:

my god, the body swap category revived and redeemed itself! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

hmmm, very interesting, i shall read on!

I feel like Spike was dreaming about Rarity, and that is why he freaked out so much :moustache:

Nice chapter!:pinkiehappy: With the part about the inside-out-and-exploding, did you get that from a movie? :twilightsmile:

I was eating toast and i read spikes reaction, now my computer screen has toast on it

Whats up its been since July, wheres the next chapter?:pinkiegasp:

Keep going! This is so well-written! I crave MOAR!

Dang it, I hate when I read an incomplete story that catches my interest and I reach the end only to find out the last update was two years ago.

Well, one can still hope for a continuation.

What a cool story! I look forward to the next chapter thereof!

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