You have caught my interest in the title, good sir. Will update after reading.

UPDATE -

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Well played.

DOUBLE UPDATE - Hey, all of you that are thumbing down, how about you help the author out with what you thought was wrong, or just say you don't like it instead of just thumbing it down and then leaving.

This was hilarious!

Bah, seriously don't know where I went wrong with the story.

>>992082992082>>992019992019 Either way, thank you both very much, it is very appreciated.

>>992331992331 It is certainly a pleasure, and on behalf of all the NEIGH sayers I say that you actually did very well. Don't let them get you down.

Wow, you actually took that completely ridiculous suggestion and turned it into a good story! Funny stuff, if unexpectedly dark

"Somewhere in pony heaven, an angel facehoof's"

also, I think it would be more correct if its "facehoofs"  cuase if Im right, "  's  " means its owned and that, to me, doesnt make sense.

This fits in so well with my view of Trxie. "Everypony is wrong but me!" She is so wrapped up in herself

that nothing else registers.

Well can't say this story isn't accurate.

>>993247993247 Yeah, took me a little longer then I thought, been busy lately. Anyway, its good to see you again!

Fantastic story, dude! I loved it.

" Somewhere in pony heaven, an angel facehoof's. "

Fantastic line!

Looking back, I really dislike this story. The ending was rushed and not thought out, the character (the only oc throughout the story) wasn't well done, and I failed at emulating the feeling I was trying to go for. I was practicing description and trying to go into comedy, though that didn't work out so well. Over all it is a poor story. 5/10 at the very most.

I do like one thing about this story, however, and it's that it shows me how much I have learned about writing since I have posted it. I no longer just blindly push through a story without having any idea where it is going, and I have a general idea of what each character is suppose to do and represent. I would have deleted this story months ago, but I think it is a good reminder about the lessons I learned while writing it. I hope that I continue to improve as I write, and that anyone reading this will give my writings a second chance.

Posted 2/7/13, half a year after story post.