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After seeing how much Scootaloo wants to fly, Rainbow Dash decides to take her for a flight.
The trip takes Rainbow Dash into heavy thoughts as to why she always hung around Scootaloo.

Dash realises how much regret can destroy someones life, and how a past crime can weigh heavily on her chest.

Authors note: This story has multiple endings. Thanks for Arbarano and Slashawar for helping me edit this story.
And thanks to Midnight Rain from deviant art for the cover picture.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 43 )

I love the details makes it sound so real :heart:

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Thank you, I'm really glad you folks enjoyed it. :twilightsmile:

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AHHHHHHH! MY HEART!:raritycry: WHY THE SADS??:raritydespair:

That was a really nice story. though, I would like to know what caused scootaloo to fall...

Downright depressing to bittersweet.
Personally I woulda done it the other way round but still nicely done.

958093 Indeed, no offense to Lauren Faust who by the way is a great writer but she was wrong when she said Rainbow Dash wouldn't make a good sister for Scootaloo, that is one thing that the fandom has done better than Lauren Faust ever could. :heart:

I want to ask what some colt did to Rainbow Dash that has her so upset but I have a feeling I'm going to find out. :unsuresweetie:

So Scootaloo is Dashie's SISTER?! :pinkiegasp: What a plot twist! :fluttercry:

So Scootaloo is Dashie's DAUGHTER?! :pinkiegasp: What a plot twist! :fluttercry:

958884 Me too both endings don't explain to us what caused the accident all we know is that Scootaloo suddenly fell out of the sky for no reason and in one ending Rainbow Dash wasn't in time to save her and ended up damaging her right wing so she can't fly anymore while in this ending Rainbow Dash pulled off a double rainboom and died while Scootaloo was knocked unconscious and would have died too if Applejack hadn't gotten her to the hospital. Still great story. :fluttercry: :pinkiesad2: :raritydespair:

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So many tears. Good story

Oh my god... Wait, does that ending mean that she was just kinda adopted with RD, or turns out they were actually family all along.

::raritydespair: made me cry....Excellent story other than previously mentioned plot holes.

Did Scoots die while flying with Rainbow?

my god :rainbowderp: that was one of the most....... :rarity cry: heart wrenching fan fix i have ever read. bravo good sir/madam....... bravo :fluttercry:

968352 Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. :twilightsmile:

962191 I'm a little confused, is this a positive oh my god or a negative? :rainbowderp:

967174 I'm really glad you liked it. :twilightsmile::twilightsmile:

this was very good brought up a lot of feels in my heart far more fitting of an ending than the original i aplaude you :pinkiehappy:

No people listen. Rainbow dash got rape by a colt scootaloo was her daughter. But she never told scootaloo.:applecry:

I liked 2nd ending best.:fluttercry: you should write a 100% happy ending:raritystarry:

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I'm glad you liked the story. :twilightsmile: I might write a happy ending, lord knows when and if I do.


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Thank you, thank you very much. I'm happy you like it. :twilightsmile:

:applecry::fluttercry::fluttershbad::fluttershyouch::fluttershysad::pinkiesad2::raritycry::raritydespair::rainbowkiss::scootangel: my hearts is in pieces right know beautiful!!! bravo

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Thank you, really glad you liked it. :twilightsmile:

Wow! People love torturing Rainbow Dash and Scootaloo, don't they? I have a really hard time finding a story where those two have a happy ending! :rainbowhuh:

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Well... I am working on something that hopefully will quench that thirst of yours. :twilightsmile:

this kinda reminds me of one of my stories where scootaloo's dad is dash's brother. i might make a happies ending but still :applecry:

wait what...i....what...i just...mhm....WHAT?! :pinkiegasp:

how dare you, i want to strangle you right now :applecry::fluttercry: good story i still hate you for making it though :raritycry: why does every scoot dash fic i find be about one of them dying why cant they just have a happy ending for once D: but yea great story

1865282 Haha, I can handle the hate. :raritywink:
And people still read this story? I was sure this was buried deep into the archives by now, never to be seen again.

Thanks for the fave, I'm glad you enjoyed my work, even if it made you hate me. :derpytongue2:

Cheers!

wtf happened you cant skip the tragedy in a tragedy fic :pinkiesad2:

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"The warmth under my wings". There's your happy ending.

Interesting way to see Scootaloo and Dash, I would really never think about them in that way. Sad and heartbreaking but beautiful.
Thumbs up and thank you !

I'm glad that I found this story. I haven't had a good cry in a while, so this certainly did the trick.

Bravo sir!

Yay alternate ending :fluttercry: so many feels

quite an interesting, if I say so myself

MY HEART!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :ajsleepy::applecry::fluttercry::fluttershysad::pinkiesad2::raritycry::raritydespair::unsuresweetie:

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