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    BABScon?

    I know I post before every con, but I'm really always hoping that someone I know is going to a convention. Is anyone heading out to San Fran next weekend for BABScon? Come on guys, make my dreams come true <3!

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    Who's going to Everfree?

    I took all y'alls advice: I'm writing words. Even some sentences, sometimes.

    But that's separate from this. I know this is far as HELL in advance, but who's going to Everfree next year? I'm getting a bunch of my buddies together for a road trip all the way from southern California to Washington, including this guy here. He's wicked cool and we were on panels at EQLA, so we're bros.

    I WANT TO MEET ALL Y'ALL. Writing stuff is cool, but the most fun I ever had in the fandom was at conventions.

    So who gonna be der?

    Yar?

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Murdered, then kidnapped. Resurrected, then hunted. Befriended, then betrayed.

This place is treacherous. Trust no one. Believe nothing. Rid yourself of all morals and kill anyone who stands in your way. Do whatever it takes to survive. After all... a children's computer game is no place for mercy.

A big thanks to the stupendous, incomparable and otherwise masterful Arby Works for the artwork, and to the wondrous, fantastical and irreplaceable Sabre for his editing assistance.

First Published
7th Aug 2012
Last Modified
18th Aug 2012
#1 · 115w, 3d ago · · · "Only Following Orders" ·

FIRST.

I can only say that this is an incredible story, and you readers are in for an amazing treat.

#2 · 115w, 3d ago · · · "Only Following Orders" ·

Computer God - Black Sabbath

A dark ponified version of ReBoot? I'm sold.

#3 · 115w, 3d ago · · · "Only Following Orders" ·

Interest aquired, reading later.

#4 · 115w, 3d ago · · · "Only Following Orders" ·

My interest.

This story has grabbed it, beaten it with a hammer, raped it violently, and then stroked it lovingly, telling it it would all be O.K.

#5 · 115w, 3d ago · · · "Only Following Orders" ·

>>1044000

This made me :rainbowlaugh: so hard.

#6 · 115w, 3d ago · · · "Only Following Orders" ·

I was a little confused when the human distopia lasted more than one chapter, but Deborah is easily recognizable as Ditzy and that convinced me to stick with it. And I'm glad I did! Its great, so keep writing it, and stuff. :derpytongue2:

#7 · 115w, 3d ago · · · "Only Following Orders" ·

WHY ONLY 3 CHAPTERS,

I NEED MOAR, MOAR I TELL YOU :flutterrage:

#8 · 115w, 3d ago · · · "Only Following Orders" ·

Well this has the possibility to go quite far! I most certainly liked it quite a lot and want to see where this goes! Although I personally refer to her as Derpy, but whatever. :derpytongue2: Hope you keep the creativity up! Have a great day!

#9 · 115w, 3d ago · · · "Free of Disabilities" ·

From the medieval age to beyond our modern in who-da-fuq knows.

#10 · 115w, 3d ago · · · "Only Following Orders" ·

I would have written a maretrix joke, but I don't know any.

Besides... I don't really know where this story is going or how it is going to get there.

Groovy I say.

#11 · 115w, 3d ago · · · "Only Following Orders" ·

Pretty good man. You managed to combine the human and pony universes together, mention Ditzy Doo in your story, and still make it entertaining. Excellent. :raritywink:

#12 · 113w, 6d ago · · · "Only Following Orders" ·

Oh god, this is really good. I want more chapters!

#13 · 113w, 4d ago · · · "Only Following Orders" ·

>>1043964 *hasn't read the story yet* WHAT?! :pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp: This is a crossover with ReBoot? Yes, this is going on my reading list!!!

EDIT: I revise my earlier assessment. This isn't quite ReBoot, as much as it also combines elements of the Otherland series. Still, the premise has me hooked and the writing style is pretty solid. I look forward to seeing where this goes.

#14 · 113w, 4d ago · · · "Only Following Orders" ·

Oh my god....MUST KEEP UPDATED :pinkiecrazy:

#15 · 113w, 4d ago · · · "Only Following Orders" ·

I don't know what this is, but I like it!

#16 · 113w, 4d ago · · · "Only Following Orders" ·

I... Hmm, I am looking forward to where this is going, seems interesting... :twilightsmile:

#17 · 113w, 4d ago · · · "Only Following Orders" ·

Very good.  I like government conspiracies.  Also, congrats on making it to EQD.

#18 · 113w, 4d ago · · · "Only Following Orders" ·

>>1044664 I know kung fu.

#19 · 113w, 4d ago · · · "Only Following Orders" ·

>>1120474 Whoa.

Go ahead, comment. The best thing about being me... there's so many of me.

Not really...  I just have time.

#20 · 113w, 4d ago · · · "Only Following Orders" ·

Chapter 1: oh man, not another humanized pony story...

Chapter 2: still not seeing any ponies. Was this a bad link?

Chapter 3: dammit! Why can I only favorite this once? Upvote!! Fav! Watch!

Gah! This is why I wait till I have a few chapters done before I publish. *sigh*:pinkiesad2:

#21 · 113w, 4d ago · · · "Only Following Orders" ·

I am intregued. I salute you on you're idea's so far. Keep going. you've already made it onto EQD.

#22 · 113w, 4d ago · · · "Free of Disabilities" ·

The first part was merely confusing at first, as I could not follow who's supposed to be talking or to whom. But the smooth progression from every time frame really got me hooked. All I can say is...Tracking!

#23 · 113w, 4d ago · · · "Only Following Orders" ·

Uhmm, which one is the first one?...

#24 · 113w, 4d ago · · · "Only Following Orders" ·

*insert LOST violin stinger here*

This looks promising. I'll be watching this. :pinkiesmile:

#25 · 113w, 4d ago · · · "Free of Disabilities" ·

Far too much talking going on. It would be alright if any of what they were saying was interesting, but it's not. Get to the good stuff already -.-

#26 · 113w, 4d ago · · · "Only Following Orders" ·

Okay, so the beginning chapter was pointless, but the second and third chapters redeemed this. At least, up until Deborah was "uploaded". Not sure how I feel about her being "you know who" yet, but maybe it'll grow on me. I'll follow just to see where this goes.

#27 · 113w, 4d ago · · · "Only Following Orders" ·

I don't think I need to say it with all this positive comments, but I'm going to anyway.:duck:

This story is awesome. And it's only after 3 chapters. Keep the good stuff going.:twilightoops:

#28 · 113w, 3d ago · · · "Only Following Orders" ·

Tracking, has promise but I can also see a lot of pitfall traps.

#29 · 113w, 3d ago · · · "Only Following Orders" ·

>>1127101

Agreed. Let's see how this goes.

#31 · 110w, 5d ago · · · "Relocation" ·

I'm not really into human stories, but this one caught my eye. :derpytongue2:Its very good so far. Keep it ups!!!:pinkiehappy:

#32 · 110w, 5d ago · · · "Only Following Orders" ·

This be getting intense!!!:pinkiegasp: write MOAR!!!!

#33 · 103w, 1d ago · · · "Only Following Orders" ·

And they were never heard from again.

#34 · 99w, 1d ago · · · "Only Following Orders" ·

Doesn't FiMfiction.net have a requirement for it being pony-related in the first chapter? I had a feeling Deborah was related to Derpy (I refuse to use Ditzy Doo, Derpy is more adorable-sounding), but it's not until the third chapter that it's actually clear what the relation is.

Hopefully, this is either updated again, or marked as complete, as the ending as it is fits. There's always room for more, though. :pinkiehappy:

#35 · 99w, 1d ago · · · "Only Following Orders" ·

Doesn't FiMfiction.net have a requirement for it being pony-related in the first chapter? I had a feeling Deborah was related to Derpy (I refuse to use Ditzy Doo, Derpy is more adorable-sounding), but it's not until the third chapter that it's actually clear what the relation is.

Hopefully, this is either updated again, or marked as complete, as the ending as it is fits. There's always room for more, though. :pinkiehappy:

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