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Murdered, then kidnapped. Resurrected, then hunted. Befriended, then betrayed.

This place is treacherous. Trust no one. Believe nothing. Rid yourself of all morals and kill anyone who stands in your way. Do whatever it takes to survive. After all... a children's computer game is no place for mercy.

A big thanks to the stupendous, incomparable and otherwise masterful Arby Works for the artwork, and to the wondrous, fantastical and irreplaceable Sabre for his editing assistance.

First Published
7th Aug 2012
Last Modified
18th Aug 2012

FIRST.

I can only say that this is an incredible story, and you readers are in for an amazing treat.

Computer God - Black Sabbath

A dark ponified version of ReBoot? I'm sold.

Interest aquired, reading later.

My interest.

This story has grabbed it, beaten it with a hammer, raped it violently, and then stroked it lovingly, telling it it would all be O.K.

I was a little confused when the human distopia lasted more than one chapter, but Deborah is easily recognizable as Ditzy and that convinced me to stick with it. And I'm glad I did! Its great, so keep writing it, and stuff. :derpytongue2:

WHY ONLY 3 CHAPTERS,

I NEED MOAR, MOAR I TELL YOU :flutterrage:

Well this has the possibility to go quite far! I most certainly liked it quite a lot and want to see where this goes! Although I personally refer to her as Derpy, but whatever. :derpytongue2: Hope you keep the creativity up! Have a great day!

From the medieval age to beyond our modern in who-da-fuq knows.

I would have written a maretrix joke, but I don't know any.

Besides... I don't really know where this story is going or how it is going to get there.

Groovy I say.

Pretty good man. You managed to combine the human and pony universes together, mention Ditzy Doo in your story, and still make it entertaining. Excellent. :raritywink:

Oh god, this is really good. I want more chapters!

>>1043964 *hasn't read the story yet* WHAT?! :pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp: This is a crossover with ReBoot? Yes, this is going on my reading list!!!

EDIT: I revise my earlier assessment. This isn't quite ReBoot, as much as it also combines elements of the Otherland series. Still, the premise has me hooked and the writing style is pretty solid. I look forward to seeing where this goes.

Oh my god....MUST KEEP UPDATED :pinkiecrazy:

I don't know what this is, but I like it!

I... Hmm, I am looking forward to where this is going, seems interesting... :twilightsmile:

Very good.  I like government conspiracies.  Also, congrats on making it to EQD.

>>1120474 Whoa.

Go ahead, comment. The best thing about being me... there's so many of me.

Not really...  I just have time.

Chapter 1: oh man, not another humanized pony story...

Chapter 2: still not seeing any ponies. Was this a bad link?

Chapter 3: dammit! Why can I only favorite this once? Upvote!! Fav! Watch!

Gah! This is why I wait till I have a few chapters done before I publish. *sigh*:pinkiesad2:

I am intregued. I salute you on you're idea's so far. Keep going. you've already made it onto EQD.

The first part was merely confusing at first, as I could not follow who's supposed to be talking or to whom. But the smooth progression from every time frame really got me hooked. All I can say is...Tracking!

Uhmm, which one is the first one?...

*insert LOST violin stinger here*

This looks promising. I'll be watching this. :pinkiesmile:

Far too much talking going on. It would be alright if any of what they were saying was interesting, but it's not. Get to the good stuff already -.-

Okay, so the beginning chapter was pointless, but the second and third chapters redeemed this. At least, up until Deborah was "uploaded". Not sure how I feel about her being "you know who" yet, but maybe it'll grow on me. I'll follow just to see where this goes.

I don't think I need to say it with all this positive comments, but I'm going to anyway.:duck:

This story is awesome. And it's only after 3 chapters. Keep the good stuff going.:twilightoops:

Tracking, has promise but I can also see a lot of pitfall traps.

>>1127101

Agreed. Let's see how this goes.

I'm not really into human stories, but this one caught my eye. :derpytongue2:Its very good so far. Keep it ups!!!:pinkiehappy:

This be getting intense!!!:pinkiegasp: write MOAR!!!!

And they were never heard from again.

Doesn't FiMfiction.net have a requirement for it being pony-related in the first chapter? I had a feeling Deborah was related to Derpy (I refuse to use Ditzy Doo, Derpy is more adorable-sounding), but it's not until the third chapter that it's actually clear what the relation is.

Hopefully, this is either updated again, or marked as complete, as the ending as it is fits. There's always room for more, though. :pinkiehappy:

Doesn't FiMfiction.net have a requirement for it being pony-related in the first chapter? I had a feeling Deborah was related to Derpy (I refuse to use Ditzy Doo, Derpy is more adorable-sounding), but it's not until the third chapter that it's actually clear what the relation is.

Hopefully, this is either updated again, or marked as complete, as the ending as it is fits. There's always room for more, though. :pinkiehappy:

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