Lovely story from start to finish, throughout the whole read all I could think of was the fourth wall being broken! Good work on the story and hope to see future works from yourself. Poor Spike though.

Okay, now 2/6 of the elements have discovered the wall...

Rename thisstory mindfuck.

Because you just fucked with my mind, a lot.

She knows!

Now we'll have to kill her

I am pleased

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My mind is blown.

Meta exposition is meta.

Very nicely done.

I'm horrified.  Errata everywhere: their/there, Twilights/Twilight's, Pinkies/Pinkie's, loose/lose, "Stepping towards the unicorn."(frag), "Gripping the handle of the door and slowly creaking it open he lightly stepped into the building."(false run-on), "Whether it being a certain event that's supposed to happen stresses her out or not delivering a lesson to her mentor on time."(false conditional), "...qwirky and can borderline insane.", etc.

However, what's wrong with the writing doesn't concern me much.  These kinds of things happen when trying to convert an idea into a story.  What horrifies me is what's right with the writing:  complex sentence structures, appropriate use of semicolons, the use (and correct spelling) of words like minuscule, comatose, theoretically, etc.

It's like this was transcribed by someone who only cares about the big picture.

Someone with a massive understanding of everything going on, but who isn't concerned about the day-to-day.

Someone vibrant.

Someone bouncy.

Someone... pink.

a̎ͩͥͨn̰̻̅͂͐d̙͒ͣ̅͗̄̑̉͞ ̩̫̻̱̥͊ͧ̎̒̈́̍͞n̜̝̹ͭͯ̂ͪ̎͒o̞͖̰̒͂ͬ̑̌ͤw̦̱̮̍̓͊ͤ͋ͨ͗ ͕͖͈͎̻̻ͦ͌͂͌͗ͧ͜I̵̼̙͇̞̮̪̲͐ͦ̆̉͆͗ ̬͙̤̼c̮̠̖͓̮̖̐̋ͪ͗́̌̕a̽͆̾ͥͦ͏̙ń̦̯͖̠̯̟̯̒͂'̥͖͓̙͍̆̄̾͒́̅͘ť̥̹̐̄̈̆ͧ̔ ̴̹̮̙̭̭ͭ̑s̻̀̃̈̊̽͠t̮̯̖̟͕͖͖͒ͯ̏ò͗̒̿̒ͬ̈́҉̣̥̩p̵̌ ̮̦̣͓̂͆̍͞s̝̤ͤͩ̿͛͌͌͒ȅ̔̉̿͛̚͢e͓̮̺͖͋́̿̌͐̓͋i͔̻͓̲̠̪̾̎̚ṇ̗ͯ͒͐ǧ̠̠̠͂ͩ̔̓̃͜ ̜͍̜͢ģ͎̝̝͖ͭͯͧ͑̋͗ͅr̮ĕ͖͇͓̳̙͐͋ͨ́e͈͔͆͜ń͗̏̈ͮ̒̂͏̰̫̮͎̱ ̳̘̌s̷̫̭̬͍̍ͧ́̎͐ẘ̚i̩̻̦̝͚͇̣ͣ͗͗ͨ̈̚r̛̘̦l̞̖͚̥͙͙ͮ͋̃y̼̩̼̠̍ ͦ̌̉ͣͯ̚̚ĕ͇͘y̩̦̿͂̈̋̋ͣ̓e͍̲̻͇̮̳ͅs̛͇̗̬̰̱̍̑͐̏ͯ̒

>>957515957515 Yay

Thanks mate, it would suffer from grammical errors indeed, only a few nights of work on it.

Sounds good, ill do-over with some things  later, thanks.

-Stealth1139

Dum dum duuum!

This was reasonably funny and meta.

Just in case Pinkie comes around with a pitch for another story: Don't you dare not take it.

need more

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Great read, totally captured my headcannon Pinkie Pie!

Mind = Blown

So Pinkie knows shes a animated cartoon character?

The fourth wall breaking stories don't really accomplish anything if everyone whose mind is blown rememers nothing at the end. It would be like all the ponies forgetting whatever lesson they learned at the end of every episode. Or any other story in existence where, "It was all a dream. The end."

goood... This story pleases me greatly...

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I liked this

Funny! I wouldn't make it headcanon, but this is a great story. However, you might want to edit it. There are a lot of there/their/they're mistakes, which are kind of distracting.

Mr. Writer: "I have taught you well my young apprentice."

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My mind is blown.

Who is truer? That which you are or those who define what you are?

Thankyou everyone for reading, hoping for a feature but this is great anyway.

Thanks for all the favorites, the corrections, love for it, everything.

If Pinkie was here, she would

"Hey, Mr. Writer! I am still here."

Uhhh... Pinkie now isn't the best time.

"Ohhh ok then. Hi everybody!"

Well thanks again and I'll write some more stuff when I get around to it.

-Stealth1139

Loved the story

Forth wall why u keep breaking