Looking forward to the next chapters! Great story so far and made me cry a little, good job.

This story is going good so far. I like it. Just one thing about it. Make the text more... separated. It's not easy to read a friggen block.

I hate crap like this, good stories like these are never really recognized. But to you fine sir, keep going, the is story is amazing.

Gettin good man, keep going!

Chapter four felt a bit tacked on I'm afraid, but the characters you create are unique, I like that.

Everyone knows this guy everyone hate especially yourself....seems like the new stallion of his exmarefriend xD

The story made me really sad. Especially when his aunt died...and then his marefriend

it is also good written. Cant wait till new chapter are published :)

Wow i hope some good lucky goes blitzs way soon or i won't be able to hold the manly tears back anymore

let me guess...he is going to live in Ponyville and works for AJ?

This chapter was so far my favorite, Magicka fot what he deserved.

Nice.

very interesting Chapter :)

>>988845988845 Short Too By That Matter

Damn he got hit really that hard...his life is really bad...

Your story is going really great so far, enjoying it quite alot. Keep it up! They both loved the same reality TV show, "Found." was a funny addition, I see what you did there. Looking forward to future chapters.

Whoa.

Im running out of things to say, keep going

this is a good thing to him now and i enjoyed reading this chapter.

Hadn't been able to read your stuff for awhile but I look forward to future chapters.

Holy crap, an update!  Good that your internet is back!  I look forward to more!

Whoa! your alive? Your internet was down? Well, thats sort of the same thing

Well, good to see you at it again.

Good to see your back!

... I give it a 9.5 out of 10

Just wondering, is this story still alive?  Are you keeping us in suspense?