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    Darth Link 22's Stories (6)

    • About Last Night
      A night of drinking turns into weeks of...interesting antics.

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    • Post Nuptials
      The wedding might be over, but emotions are still running high for many that were involved.
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    • Families
      Spike and Scootaloo are acting strange, and Twilight and Rainbow Dash are going to find out why.
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    • Honeymoon
      A quick peek at Shining Armor and Cadence after their wedding.
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    • Wedding Bell Blues
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    By noon Ponyville was usually busy, but there were some areas which remained free of traffic. Scootaloo had chosen one of the areas to practice flying.

    While not yet adept at flying, she was an excellent climber, so it wasn’t hard to reach one of the upper branches. She looked to the ground and told herself that the grass was soft enough to provide a decent landing before spreading her wings and leaping off.

    She flapped with all her might, but she hardly moved forward at all. She actually fell, quite quickly in fact. She let out a yelp as she realized what was happening, and began to brace herself for impact.

    As it turned out, the impact came from a cyan-colored blur that caught her just before she hit the ground.

    “Geez, kid, what were you thinking?” Rainbow Dash snapped. She looked angry, though not deeply so.

    “I… I was just trying to fly,” the filly answered sadly, looking away from her idol.

    “Without an adult around? Without anypony to teach you?”

    “I-I’m sorry! It’s just that my parents are so busy, and…”

    “And I offered to teach you,” she reminded, putting her back on the branch. “You should have come and gotten me. Now, you’ll never fly like that.”

    “But I’m flapping my wings as fast as I can…”

    “And that’s the problem, first off,” Rainbow Dash said sternly. “Now spread your wings out.”

    Scootaloo obeyed, still looking a little nervous.

    “Now, listen to my voice. I want you to move your wings to the rhythm. Up, down, up, down…”

    Once again, the instructions were obeyed, and soon Scootaloo was moving her wings at the speed one would have during normal flight.

    “Up, down, up, down…”

    “How much longer do I have to keep doing this?” she asked. Her voice had some of its usual spunk again, but she was still more timid than usual.

    “You have to crawl before you can run, squirt. Getting that rhythm down is part of it. Now listen, in addition to flapping, you also have to remember tilting. You need to tilt your wings in relation to airflow. Too low, there’s not enough lift. Too high, there’s drag.”

    “How will I know the airflow?”

    “You learn to feel it, and that comes with practice. Okay, I think you’re ready for a quick try.” With that, Rainbow Dash flew about five feet away, and then lowered herself another foot. “Alright, fly to me.”

    Scootaloo looked at the ground again, then gulped.

    The elder mare gave a sympathetic smile. “I’ll catch you, don’t worry. Come on, it’s even safer than before I got here. You weren’t afraid then.”

    Feeling reassured, the filly leapt of the branch. She kept the flaps in a better rhythm, and tried to tilt her wings where she felt air. She moved erratically, but managed to make it to Rainbow Dash.

    “That was very good,” she said, giving her student a smile.

    “But… I barely stayed up! And I was falling before the end…”

    “Scoots, rule number one on anything: you have to be bad before you can be good,” she said gently, setting her back on the ground. “Now, let’s go again. This time, don’t tense up so much. There’s nothing to be afraid of.”


    “Well, Twilight, the solution to your problem is simple,” Aloe assured.

    By this point the three guests had been lifted out of the tub and onto three massage tables. Lotus had begun kneading Applejack’s back, getting moans of pleasure from the earth pony, while Roxie began working on Twilight.

    “What do you have in mind?”

    “Well, dearie, you’re a very logical pony, aren’t you? We have a very simple solution to your problem. Tell me, what frightens you the most? What do you worry about most?”

    It didn’t take long for her to answer. “Disappointing Princess Celestia, letting my friends down, something happening to Spike…”

    “Very good. Now tell me, when was the last time you were worried about upsetting the Princess, what happened?”

    Twilight paused. The citizens of Ponyville were very vague on what happened during the Smartypants incident. They only knew of the riot that broke out in the park, and not what caused it.

    “Well, I ended up making things worse trying to fix something that the Princess turned out not to really care about in the first place.”

    “So, the next time you start worrying about what’s going to happen, try thinking about…”

    “I’ve tried that,” Twilight said bluntly.

    Aloe blinked. “You what?”

    “I already do that. I still end up worrying about it. She’s the ruler of Equestria, after all. I have high standards to work up to.”

    “Well, what do you think would happen if you let her down?”

    “A lecture at worst,” she admitted. “It’s easy to see that now, but when I’m panicking, I don’t exactly think straight.”

    “Well, try taking deep breaths…”

    “I took a hundred of them last time.”

    “…You’re going to be a tough nut to crack.”


    “Alright, that’s enough,” Rainbow Dash said. She carried the now visibly tired Scootaloo up to a cloud to rest. “We can take a break now.”

    “Finally!” the filly panted. “We must have done that a hundred times.”

    “Repetition is the mother of learning, kid,” the elder mare explained. “I do all my flight tricks a million times, Twilight reads all her books a million times, Rarity studies every sewing technique a million times, it’s why we’re the best at what we do.”

    “I guess,” she said, rubbing her wings.

    “Scoots, I’ve got to ask, why didn’t you take me up on my offer for lessons back at the wedding?”

    Scootaloo blushed, rubbing the back of her head. “I… I was embarrassed. I mean, I’m so clumsy...”

    Clumsy?” Rainbow Dash asked incredulously. “Kid, I’ve seen you do tricks on that scooter of yours that would make some ponies jealous. Where’d you get the idea you were clumsy?”

    The filly blushed, suddenly finding the cloud they were resting on interesting. “…Silver Spoon and Diamond Tiara,” she said at last, looking up at her teacher. Her face was scrunched in confusion. “Two fillies in my class,” Scootaloo clarified.

    Rainbow Dash nodded in understanding. “Don’t let ponies like that get you down. There were these three idiots in my school who used to call me ‘Rainbow Crash’. Look at me now.”

    Scootaloo gave a weak smile. “Thanks, I feel better,” she said.

    There was silence for a moment as the two pegasi enjoyed the view. Finally, the younger one spoke. “Why did they call you ‘Rainbow Crash’ anyway? You’re the greatest flyer I’ve ever seen!”

    The cyan pegasus’s expression was half smile at the compliment, half scowl at the question. “In one of the obstacle course runs, I choked and made a crash landing. They never let me forget it.”

    “Did you ever fight back? I always want to give Diamond Tiara a good smack, but Miss Cheerilee says that’s wrong.”

    “I did, but only once.”

    ”Nice landing, Rainbow Crash,” Hoops laughed at the young filly on the cafeteria floor.

    Rainbow Dash stood up, hay fries and cupcake frosting in her mane, and glared at the colt that had caused her to trip. “Hey, that’s no fair!”

    “Life’s not fair when you’re a loser, Crash!” he laughed again before trotting off. Grumbling, Rainbow Dash stood, trying to block out the snickers coming from around the room. Grudgingly, she sat at the end of a table, looking at her tray of now ruined food.

    “Um, excuse me,” a quiet voice said. The filly looked up and saw a butter-yellow pegasus sitting down next to her.

    “What do you want?” she snapped.

    “Um, I saw you don’t have anything to eat now,” she said slowly. “You can have mine, if you like.”

    Rainbow Dash blinked, caught off guard that a pony was actually treating her kindly. “Kid, that’s your food. I couldn’t take it…”

    “Oh, I’m not really hungry anyway. You can have as much as you want.”

    The cyan filly thought for a moment, then smiled. “Why don’t we share it?” She picked up the fork on her tray and used it to get a few hay fries from her new friend’s meal. For a few minutes the pair ate, introduced herself, and made small conversation. This however, promptly ended when Hoops came up to them again.

    “Well, lookie here. Rainbow Crash and Klutzershy. It’s a match made in Celestia's Paradise!”

    “Get lost, Hoops!”

    “Um, please go away…”

    “Oh yeah? Who’s going to make me!” he sneered, pushing Fluttershy off her seat. She landed with a pained squeak, then began whimpering.

    “Hey, leave her alone!” Rainbow Dash demanded, hopping out of her seat. “Don’t pick on her like that!”

    “Oh, and what are you going to do about it, Rainbow Crash?”

    At that point, Rainbow Dash showed Hoops exactly what she was going to do about it. Namely, putting a hoof to his face. The colt staggered back, and just as he was registering his bloody nose, she leapt onto him, punching every part of him.

    “It took three teachers to pull me off of him. I got detention for a month,” she finished, a smile of fond remembrance on her face.

    “What? But Hoops was picking on Fluttershy! Shouldn’t he have got in trouble?”

    “He did, but it was only a week’s detention. Besides, I don’t regret that day one bit. That’s when I met Fluttershy, and the next time she was picked on, I couldn’t fight, so I raced. I discovered my cutie mark, and I knew a good way to keep Hoops quiet. Now look, I’m a contender for the Wonderbolts, and he’s still working an entry-level position at the weather factory.”

    “How?”

    “I let my actions speak for themselves. Every time that blowhard made fun of me, I did the flying drills better than him, I did the obstacle course better than him, I did everything better than him. He could call me names all he wanted, but I still knew I was better than him.”

    Scootaloo was confused. “But… I see you threatening to beat up anyone that makes you mad!”

    Rainbow Dash shook her head. “No, I threaten to beat up anypony that’s putting Equestria in danger. That’s something else entirely. School bullies? Not worth the effort. They never are.”

    Scootaloo nodded. She looked away a bit before speaking again. “How long did it take you to fly?”

    “Only a few days, I was a natural,” the elder mare bragged. She immediately regretted it when she was Scootaloo’s head drop a bit. “But don’t think that means there’s anything wrong with being a late bloomer. You know Spitfire was about your age before she got off the ground.”

    “Really?” the filly asked, tilting her head.

    “Yeah, she had a slow start. Now she’s the best of the best. Don’t let setbacks discourage you, kid. They’re temporary.”

    “Did you have any setbacks?”

    “I had to drop out of Flight School with only six months left to go. My…” she paused for a minute. “My mother died that year. I had to quit and get a job to support myself. I’d probably be in the Wonderbolts now if that hadn’t happened.”

    Now Scootaloo felt uncomfortable. “I’m sorry, I didn’t mean to make you bring that up…”

    Rainbow Dash ruffled her mane affectionately. “Don’t worry about it, kid,” she assured. “The point is, I’m still getting in the Wonderbolts because I didn’t let something like that get me down.”

    The filly nodded, now smiling once again. She was forgetting her nervousness that Rainbow Dash would think less of her for bad flying. She was forgetting her parents being too busy to spend time with her. For a while, everything seemed peaceful.

    “Hey, kid, have you ever read Daring Do?”


    “Take several deep breaths…”

    “Tried it.”

    “Count backwards from ten…”

    “Tried it.”

    “Breath into a paper bag…”

    “Tried it three times.”

    The Spa Ponies had a rare look of exasperation on their faces. Twilight had tried nearly every technique they could suggest already, and it was beginning to seem that the trip was a waste of time.

    “Look, I appreciate you trying,” Twilight assured. “I was really hoping you would have something that I haven’t tried. But ever since… ever since a certain incident, I’ve been trying them all. Don’t feel bad.”

    By now, Twilight, Rarity, and Applejack were ready to leave. Rarity left the bits on the counter as her friends tried to assure them.

    Aloe shook her head. “I’m still sorry we couldn’t help you, Twilight. If I come up with anything else, I’ll let you know.”

    The lavender unicorn nodded. “I’ll keep that in mind. Thanks anyway.”

    With that, the three friends walked out, feeling slightly dejected.

    “Sorry, Twi,” Applejack sighed. “I guess we just wasted your time.”

    Twilight shook her head. “Believe me, you didn’t. I actually feel better than I have in days. Ever since I found out my brother was getting married, I’ve been kind of tense, and with everything that happened afterward… well, I just feel better.”

    “But you’re still worried about Spike, I take it?” Rarity asked.

    “Yeah… I’m sorry, but I think I better head home and try to talk to him again.”

    “Yes, I need to get started on that order for Fancypants anyway,” Rarity said dismissively. “We can try again some other time. Good-bye, darlings!”

    The remaining two waved her goodbye as she trotted off.

    “Hey, Twi? You remember that apple pie Spike liked so much? Maybe a few slices of that will get him talking.”

    “That’s a great idea!” Twilight said. “Do you have any made?”

    “Granny should be pullin’ some out’a the oven right now. Why don’t ‘cha pop on by and get one?”


    Picking up her pith helmet, Daring Do dusted it off and placed it on her head before giving the cliff one final look. Grinning that a good deal of Ahuizotl’s cats had just tumbled over it, she couldn’t help but mutter one final line.

    “Next time, try taking the stairs.”

    “This is so cool!” Scootaloo squealed, squirming with excitement. Something told Rainbow Dash it was only the fact that the filly was in her embrace that she didn’t start jumping around in excitement.

    “I know, isn’t it? Twilight got me hooked on those books while I was in the hospital. I can’t get enough of them.”

    “Are these all in Twilight’s library? Do you think she’d let me borrow them?”

    “That’s what libraries are for, squirt!” Rainbow Dash answered, sitting up. The day had worn on into afternoon, and the heat was beginning to cool a little. “Why don’t we get back to flying? Your wings should be rested enough to get back to work.”

    “Can we just read one more chapter?” Scootaloo begged.

    “I’ve already read you six chapters, kid. You can read anytime, but learning to fly is something special. We need to get back to it. You were doing great, don’t stop now.”

    “I guess you’re right…”


    Applejack and Twilight walked up the dirt path towards the Apple Family home. The lavender mare stifled another yawn, earning a look from her companion.

    “Uh, Twi… are you sure you’re okay?”

    “Of course. Why wouldn’t I be?”

    “Twi… is there anythin’ you’re not tellin’ us? About why you didn’t sleep last night?”

    “There isn’t,” Twilight answered, a little too quickly.

    “I’m not buyin’ that,” she answered flatly. “I think your keepin’ somethin’ from us. You never told us you’ve been tryin’ all them remedies.”

    “I didn’t want you to worry,” Twilight snapped. She immediately regretted it and sighed. “Look, this whole thing with Spike is stressing me out. Let’s handle one crisis at a time, okay?”

    By this point, they were nearly at the front door, so the cowpony merely nodded. “Just… just don’t be afraid to let me know if somethin’s botherin’ you, alright?”

    “Don’t worry, I won’t,” she assured, though to Applejack it sounded hollow.

    Before the earth pony could dwell on it anymore, a large explosion caused both of them to jump three feet in the air. They managed to land on their hooves, but were so stunned they couldn’t react for a few seconds.

    “What in tarnation?” Applejack uttered. In a flash, she opened the farmhouse door and charged inside, Twilight close behind her.

    They both ran to the kitchen. They immediately stopped dead, their eyes widening and irises shrinking.

    The entire kitchen was covered with apple and baker’s dough. And in the center were two ponies covered in the same: Granny Smith, who looked like she was having a heart attack, and Apple Bloom, giving a sheepish smile.

    “Uh… hey sis…”

    “Apple Bloom, what happened?”

    “I… we were just makin’ some pie… Granny said I could help. I’m sorry.”

    “You kiddin’?” Granny Smith lit up. “My ticker hasn’t beat so fast since the cider makin’ competition! I feel great!”

    Every other mare present breathed a sigh of relief. “Well, I’ll get a mop and we can start cleaning up,” Twilight offered.

    “No, Twi,” Applejack interrupted. “You’ve got Spike to worry about. You go on home, we can handle it.”

    “Well, if you’re sure…”

    “Positive. I’m sure between us and Big Mac we can handle this.”

    “He was out workin’ the fields,” Granny Smith explained. “He should be in soon.”

    “Heck, he probably heard the explosion from way out there,” Applejack laughed.

    “Um, do you mind if I used your bathroom before I left?” Twilight asked.

    “Sure Twi, it’s right upstairs.”

    “Thanks,” the unicorn answered, hurrying to the stairs at a noticeably quick pace.

    Applejack turned back to her family, who were scraping the dough off of themselves, making at least some progress at getting themselves clean. “You two go on out the back and we’ll hose you off. Then we’ll start worryin’ ‘bout the kitchen.”

    At that point, Big Macintosh burst into the house, making it to the kitchen in record time. “What the hay happened?”

    “Just a little mess. Go get the mop and stuff while I hose these two off.”

    As the eldest child obeyed, the youngest fumed. “Can’t we get Twilight to use her magic to clean us off?”

    “Now Apple Bloom, Twi’s got things to do…”

    “Twilight’s here?” Big Macintosh yelled, stopping in place and widening his eyes.

    Applejack arched an eyebrow. “Uh, yeah… she’s upstairs, usin’ the…”

    You let her upstairs?” he cried in alarm.

    His sister’s eyes widened in realization. “Oh my… sorry, I forgot.”

    No!” he cried, barreling out of the kitchen and to the stairs. In a flash he had climbed the entire flight, and in another he was in front of his bedroom door. With great strength he knocked it in. He was just quick enough to see a purple tail with a pink stripe exit through the window.

    No!” he cried again, running to the window. Looking out, he saw Twilight recover from the fall and race out of Sweet Apple Acres, clutching a familiar prize in her teeth.

    SMARTYPANTS!”

    Comments ( 142 )

    #1 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Good grief, that ending.... :rainbowlaugh:

    Gotta say, I'm getting really worried about Scootaloo..... There's something seriously wrong with her parents. :twilightoops:

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    #3 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    excellent chapter! love the bit with big mac at the end!:eeyup: keep the awsome coming!

    #4 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Ah-ha! Twilight has stolen back her beloved doll.

    After her Big Mac, the game is a-hoof! Tally ho!

    :rainbowlaugh:

    Seriously, that was hilarious. Good job.

    #5 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    XD

    #6 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    ...:twilightsheepish:

    #7 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Shit just got real.

    #8 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    She Stole Smarty-..wait... THe doll was hers in the first place...wasn't it? Is it still stealing if she went into his room to get it?

    gah, I don't know.  I shall be waiting for the next chapter....

    #9 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    SMARTY PANTS!

    #10 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    WHY did this not appear in my updated story list? ...oh wait, it just updated... must be too early.

    #11 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Brilliant chapter; the characterization is spot-on as always. You've even got their speech patterns down cold.

    I also admire how you haven't gone over-the-top with Scootaloo's parents: a neglectful, but not abusive father, and a mother who treats her like an infant (and vaguely appears to be a drunk).

    #12 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Last few lines= pure brilliance:rainbowlaugh:

    #13 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHA

    SMARTYPANTS!!!!!!!

    :eeyup::eeyup::eeyup::eeyup::eeyup::eeyup::eeyup::eeyup::eeyup::eeyup:

    #14 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Macky, you got some 'splainin to do...

    #15 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Ending:

    What?:rainbowhuh:

    #16 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    What is it with you authors and updating the only stories that can actually distract me from important stuff?

    Oh, well. SMARTYPANTS!!!!! :eeyup::twilightangry2:

    #17 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1171257 Watch lesson Zero. It will all come together.

    #18 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    :eeyup: SMARTYPANTS!!

    I died. :rainbowlaugh:

    #19 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Next time on Families...

    Scootaloo is abducted by aliens on the way to the library, and Rainbow Dash must nuke their home planet to Save The World!

    Pinkie Pie comes out of her sugar coma, with a small bit of amnesia, telling her worst enemy her deep dark secrets, thinking she is her friend...

    The epic confrontation between Big Macintosh and Twilight Sparkle. Will Smartypants' life be changed forever?

    And finally...

    Using the deep dark secrets she learned from Pinkie and paying aliens to abduct Scootaloo, Gilda confronts Rainbow for the ultimate revenge. A race to the death.

    ALL OF THIS NEXT TIME, ON FAMILES!

    #20 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    :twilightangry2:  Mine bitch.

    #21 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Give back the doll Twilight, if you know what's good for you.

    #22 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

    #23 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1171165 Well when you consider one's a dead-beet and the other is an alcoholic that is constantly projecting her own shortcomings on her daughter... yeah there is definitely something wrong with them.

    #24 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1171179 Seems like about the right reaction :rainbowlaugh:

    #25 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    we need to know more about Scootaloo's parents; i foresee a Rainbow Dash approach...

    also, that ending.....:

    [youtube=http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=0urb6lU-FkI]

    #26 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1171317 A very good point. :twilightsmile: But it's not just that, something else just doesn't feel right about them besides the obvious.... :twilightoops:

    #27 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Best line in history; poor Big Mac. :rainbowlaugh:

    And another aww-dorable chapter. Scoots is slowly making progress!

    #28 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:lollol

    #29 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1171179

    Sums up my reaction :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

    I... Can't breath... :rainbowlaugh:

    ~Rosalynn~:yay:

    #30 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Laughing my ass off at the last bit, possible TwiMac? or at least a hilarious Twi vs Mac for Smartypants either way its gonna be good :pinkiehappy:

    #31 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Run Twilight! Run and lock the doors!

    #32 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    :fluttercry: Oh poor Big Mac, I hope he can get over it.

    #33 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    oh dear god that ending made me laugh :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

    #34 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Dis is gunna b gud

    #35 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    RD is dead wrong about bullies.

    If they try to harm you, you'd BETTER hit them. If you don't, they regard you as fair game-- and the longer you hold back from fighting back, the harder it'll be to teach them that you're NOT fair game. That's cruel and that's mean and that's hard and that's not what teacher says and it's still reality.

    #36 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Please say your going to continue with the Twilight/Big Mac plot

    :twilightangry2::eeyup:

    #37 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    i get it all now. twilight hypnotized spike to behave that way so her friends would be worried. she knew that the ever- sociable AJ would invite her over to her house, giving her the clear opportunity to get back the doll. everything else is irrelevant.

    :pinkiecrazy:

    #38 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    B-B-B-Busted!!! Big time for Big Mac!!!

    #39 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Great chapter, cant wait for the next one

    noticed this, i think your missing a sentence, like AJ asking if GS is alright or something.

    “Apple Bloom, what happened?”

    “I… we were just makin’ some pie… Granny said I could help. I’m sorry.”

    “You kiddin’?” Granny Smith lit up. “My ticker hasn’t beat so fast since the cider makin’ competition! I feel great!”

    #40 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1171165

    I agree with you completely... Poor scoots!

    And gosh.... SMARTYPANTS!!! And why can't Twilight use her magical unicorn powers to clean stuff up?

    #41 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    HAHA! the ending is great! :rainbowlaugh:

    #42 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1171491 Considering all that going on right now, I'd hope not to be honest. :twilightoops:

    That, and that pairing's kinda been done to death. :rainbowlaugh:

    #43 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

    Only reaction there can be to that ending!

    :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

    #44 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Well done and wonderful :twilightsmile: can't wait for spike to take a hit from the ol' clue-by-four* :pinkiehappy:

    *cluebyfour is a registered trademark of somepony I have never met or talked to, nor can i remember what his name was...oops

    :pinkiecrazy:

    #45 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1171317

    Huh... I didn't interpret either of them that way, myself. Actually, they came across frighteningly like the parents of one of my friend's wife...

    He's a self-centered workaholic that can't help but take his family for granted... they are just another part of his background life. While she is a poisonous, manipulative *ahem* who regrets growing up and now desperately tries live out vicariously through her daughter...

    Neither of them have any real business having responsibility for a child. But by the same token, I doubt either of them have the capability of looking beyond themselves to the point of being able to realize that something is wrong. In short... that's likely just the way they are, and they aren't doing it deliberately.

    Doesn't make it any better, of course.

    And, since they have each only been in a single scene so far (and not together at that), I could be way off base. we'll need to actually see more of them to determine their true nature. But that's what they seem like to me, so far.

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    Perfect! Absolutely PERFECT!

    No wonder Twilight's always so stressed out, Big Mac has held Smartypants hostage all this time.:rainbowlaugh:

    Considering all the 'other' lifestyles Scoots is given in stories, I'm actually not worried for her. She has great friends who are looking out for her, including the one and only Rainbow Dash, and if something really is wrong with her parents(we've seen very little of them so far and initial reactions could be inaccurate), it should be rather simple(I use this term loosely and in a relative form) to help her.

    #47 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Oh come on Big Mac you didn't REALLY think Twilight woud just let you keep her old doll did you? :rainbowlaugh:

    Well it looks like Twilight is a pony who is always stressed, maybe she needs to drink more tea instead of whatever it is that she drinks. :twilightoops:

    And it looks like Scootaloo is finally learning to fly no thanks to her parents who obviously just weren't ready have a child but had one anyway because they just couldn't resist some 'passion'. :scootangel:

    #48 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Ha!  Has Twilight been waiting for such an opportunity ever since Gabby Gums outed Smarty Pants' latest owner?

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    “Um, excuse me,” a quiet voice said. The filly looked up and saw a butter-yellow pegasus sitting down next to her.

    “What do you want?” she snapped.

    “Um, I saw you don’t have anything to eat now,” she said slowly. “You can have mine, if you like.”

    D'AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW  so there's how they met each other :yay::rainbowkiss: that was adorable

    but mostly the whole chapter was, i really love the friendship that is been building between Dash and Scoots, i very adorable i hope in season 3 we see something like that.

    About the last part..... LOL GREAT FINAL :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

    #50 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Yay Scoots! I love this update. Oh, what am I saying, this story is brilliant, all the updates are love.

    I can only see one way to improve this one... it needs just a little :pinkiehappy:. I really want to see what's going on with that pony.

    And Big Mac/Smarty Pants was brilliant. Loved it.

    #51 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    “Scoots, rule number one on anything: you have to be bad before you can be good,”

    Dude, I love that line. Honestly, I can relate to that a whole lot. I really really sucked at writing long ago and it took a long time for me to get as far as I am. Granted, I still got more to do before I'm at the level of the writers I admire (Including you), but I'm willing to write a million stories just to get it all right in the end.

    Also, loved the ending so much.

    Keep up the good work.

    #52 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Well, that was really unexpected. Don't know in what sense, though.

    And it's just me, or is there anyone else that feels like we are being hammered in the head with the "Twilight is stressed/worried about Spike" thing? We know that is happening, and I understand when it have to be said for every character that doesn't know, but somehow I feel like it's being repeated too much. In the story overall, I mean.

    The Scoot&RD scenes are going nicely anyway, and would like to see again about Spike.

    #53 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    they're never gonna let him live it down are they? :trixieshiftright:

    #54 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1171283 Oh my Luna that made me laugh like a madstallion.

    #55 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    “SMARTYPANTS!”

    :rainbowlaugh:

    #56 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Okay, that last bit is wrong.:ajbemused:

    #57 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    What a great way to lighten the mood :twilightsmile: Great chapter overal

    #58 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    The fact that Big Mac's voice is rather similar to that of Darth Vader only makes the "No!" so much funnier.

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    Hilarious ending! And wow does Twi have issues, at this point she probably needs to speak with an actual therapist of some sort.

    Dash introduces Scoots to Daring Do, and the cycle continues.

    #61 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    I'm just gonna repeat what everyone else said. Dat ending :rainbowlaugh::twilightsmile:

    #62 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Don't just stand there Mac, after her!!!

    Twilight: :twilightangry2: Smartypants is MINE Macintosh!

    ...and then there was one less Apple :ajsleepy: :applecry:

    #63 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Well played, sir. Well played. :moustache:

    #64 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    That ending is so hilarious!:rainbowlaugh:

    #65 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Yeeeup :eeyup: thats a good chapter alright. Keep up the awesome work.

    #66 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Twilight totally ganked her doll back. Nice:rainbowlaugh:. Anyway, please tell me at some point Scootaloos parents are bitch slapped by Rainbow. Or at least something to make them feel as dumb as they are.

    #67 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    This was all well and good, a nice character development story, and then you suddenly veered into "Way-out-of-character cheap gag" territory. I have unfollowed the story.:twilightangry2:

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    >>1171465  It varies depending on the situation.  RD's response is fairly decent for the type of passive-aggressive bullying she was describing.  In those situations, the bully is actively fishing for a violent reaction, mainly because they are taking advantage of the systems meant to protect students from bullying (particularly the violent variety) in the first place.  Once you resort to violence, you immediately have a disadvantage to the bully because you're the one committing an overt offense.  You can argue about provocation, but that rarely sways whatever authority that may be involved.  Naturally, this is a different situation from one where your safety is being threatened (which does merit a violent response if necessary for self-defense).

    #69 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    He was just quick enough to see a purple tail with a pink stripe exit through the window.

    “No!” he cried again, running to the window. Looking out, he saw Twilight recover from the fall and race out of Sweet Apple Acres, clutching a familiar prize in her teeth.

    “SMARTYPANTS!”

    :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

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    I'm just gonna repeat what most have said

    DAT ending:eeyup:

    Although it would have been funny to see Twilight laughing maniacally while running away, now I've been wondering just how long has she been planning this.

    #71 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1172807

    She's trying to get back something that was hers, and helped her cope with problems. There's nothing really wrong with that. A lot of people have something special that remind them of better times. Why shouldn't Twilight have something too?

    If anything, having Big Mac keep it was a cheap gag.

    #72 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    :fluttershysad: I feel Big Mac's pain.

    #73 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    JACKED YO DOLL MOTHAFUCKA

    #74 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    “Now, let’s go again. This time, don’t tense up so much. There’s nothing to be afraid of.”

    SO MUCH HNNNNNNNNNGG.

    >>1173291

    this made me laugh :rainbowlaugh:

    #75 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Can't say I was expecting THAT ending to the chapter. I am forced to question how Twilight found it, though, since one would assume it'd be in Big Mac's room and not the bathroom...

    EDIT: >>1171465

    Unfortunately, bullies are largely a case-by-case scenario with no hard and fast solution. I had to deal with quite a bit of it through middle and high school, and I beat them by publicly talking circles around them whenever they tried to start something. That wouldn't work in a lot of scenarios, though. Basically, you put them into a corner where they have to either admit defeat or do something that would bring mass disapproval from your peers, since usually the only reason they're doing it is because it keeps them a step or two above you. Know what the popular kids WANT to see them do for their entertainment, then put them in a position where they CAN'T do it, preferably doing the exact opposite.

    #76 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I  never laughed so hard in my life! :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

    :eeyup:: eeyup!

    #77 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    OMG LOL SMARTYPANTS:rainbowlaugh: great way to end the chapter lol:derpytongue2:

    #79 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    SMARTY PANTS!!! :D

    #80 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    One Smartypants doll to rule them...

    #81 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    TWILILGHT RECLAIMS THE PRIZE!!! :rainbowlaugh:

    Seriously, I loved all the Rainbow/Scoot bonding in this.  Something tells me that the kid hasn't had real parents for quite a while; Rainbow Dash doesn't know it but she's taking over the job.  I wonder if Scoot's biological parents will ever notice? Or even care? The story Rainbow told about how she met Fluttershy and how she handled the jocks at school are also useful in that it reminds Scootaloo that if you throw the first buck, you're the one who's in the wrong in the teachers' eyes.  That means that Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon need to be handled in a different way.

    It makes sense that Twilight would already have tried all the stress/panic remedies.  She's probably been reading every book on how to prevent panic attacks since the Lesson Zero incident! Ultimately, I think that over-reaction is just part of her personality.  The key will be learning how to govern her responses - to think twice rather than react on impulse.  Now... Will having Smartypants help or just give her a cruch to avoid handling the problem? Honestly, I think that she's going to have an interesting conversation with Mac about why he wants and needs Mr S and they'll handle their insecurities and anxieties together.

    Is Applebloom turning into the sort of kid who can detonate a glass of water like poor Sweetie Bell? :applejackconfused:

    Now, I'm looking forward to Pinkie handling her own family-related ghosts.  Will she go to see the Pies and maybe spend a chapter or two at the Rock Farm confronting her past?

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    Hurray SMARTYPANTS!

    #83 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    LOL :eeyup: poor Mac, ah well I think smarty pants might keep twi calm atleast, even if she will be annoyed at the Apples for keeping it from her

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    Poor narotic Twilight.  She is doomed to be a paranoid worrywart forever?  I hope so.  That's part of why we like her so much.:twilightblush:

    I hope neither of Scootaloo's parents find out about her flying lessons.  That won't end well.

    And now, Big Mac no longer has Twilght's beloved Smarty Pants doll.  That ought to be an interesting confrontation.:eeyup:

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    So I see you decided to introduce why Big Mac took the Smartypants doll, good choice.

    #86 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I feel for Scoots. My parents never really help me either...so I make my REAL family to be my gran and my sister.

    Everyone needs someone.

    #87 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Nice. Just - nice.

    >>1171465

    Doesn't necessarily work like that. If you get a reputation for beating the tar out of people who irritate you enough, it turns into a fun game of 'poke the psycho and see if he snaps'.

    Even if you impress on all the ringleaders precisely _how_ much of a bad idea that is, whilst ensuring the circumstances always dictate you get off more-or-less scot free, there will always be some aspiring hardman who thinks he can get away with it.

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    ON the scoots thing: Great to see rainbow and her bonding, all those scenes were very sweet. I hope this issue with the neglect gets noticed by someone soon so that scoots can have a better life.

    On the Twilight thing: Do I see some twimac in the future? :twilightoops::eeyup: hehe, That should be an interesting conversation later.

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    >>1173380 Via Gabby Gums column from the Ponyville Confidential episode.

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    >>1174439

    First, I wasn't saying "jump anyone who annoys you." But someone raises a hand (or hoof) to you, respond and make it count.

    Second, you have a fascinating theory, unfortunately objective evidence contradicts it. It's been observed by countless others, and I have observed it myself. I have known dozens, hundreds of people who were bully victims in school, and the uniform response, regardless of school policy or any other factors, has been that their problems continued up until the day they lit into the bully. Some got in trouble with the school staff. Others got labeled "problem children" and hassled by teachers and principles. But in comparison to daily physical abuse by juvenile thugs, even this was an improvement.

    Your friends don't have to live with the beatings and physical abuse. Your teachers don't have to live with it. Your parents don't have to live with it. Your school counselor doesn't have to live with it. YOU do. All the BS about bullying by people who don't have to put up with it willfully ignores that bullies pick on people they don't think will fight back. So fight back. Disabuse them of that notion quickly as possible, and they will go looking for a new chew toy.

    In the end you're probably saving that jerk's life. It sure as hell isn't the teacher who's going to teach him that harassing someone can have sudden, painful, negative consequences. Better he learn it from you in a playground scrap than in a parking lot from someone with a knife or gun.

    So-called "Social bullying?" With mockery, name-calling, shunning, verbal harassment? Girly-bullying? Different problem, different answer. Wish they had a different name for it, it's not even really the same beast. Social ostracism--- probably a better term--- will exist so long as we have any sort of society larger than a family of cave-people. The only thing anyone's ever come up with for that is a thick skin and a circle of good friends that have your back. Let 'em say what they want. But if they throw anything more than words.... make 'em regret it.

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    :twilightsmile:: VICTORY!!!!!!

    #92 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    “My ticker hasn’t beat so fast since the cider makin’ competition! I feel great!” :rainbowlaugh:

    Interesting ending; Looking forward to what happens next!

    #93 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1174439

    'poke the psycho and see if he snaps'.

    My childhood, almost all of it.:facehoof:

    And then I'd hit the wrong person, I mean, really, what was wrong with me?:facehoof::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof:

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    >>1174690

    I should point out that 'jumping anyone who annoys you' is a gross oversimplification of the matter. When the person being harassed has put up with it for several hours, and by a large group of people (not just seperate individuals successively, but a group), and other tactics to end the matter have failed, lashing out  becomes a reasonable response. Naturally, violence begets violence, and so a backhand can quickly escalate into an all out brawl. In which case someone taking a beating is inevitable.

    "bullies pick on people they don't think will fight back". Naturally.  But what happens when those bullies are better at the whole rumour-mongering thing than yourself? Indeed, there were several incidents where, despite being defeated comprehensively (read- continued attempts at violence would very quickly lead them to being hospitalised), non-witnesses (and even several witnesses) were of the opinion that the bully emerged victorious. So, whilst the target of the retribution is no longer a problem, their spin on the incident has encouraged others to fill their place, under the assumption that you are an 'easy target'.

    Admittedly, physical bullying necessitates a physical response a lot sooner than any other type, but sustained harassment will eventually leave the victim little choice, ( I have to ask what you mean exactly by 'girly bullying', however. I can think of two meanings, and they necessitate _very_ different responses). Especially when they are deliberately seperated from this circle of friends / targeted when said frineds are not available.

    Finally,  I would not write on this subject without first hand experience of it. All the examples given have been drawn directly from my own encounters.

    That they did not respond in the way you describe would likely baffle me if I ever allowed myself to ascribe them any reasonable measure of intelligence.

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    Oh god that ending SMARTYPANTS:rainbowlaugh:

    #96 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    How did Twilight know where Smartypants was?  Did someone mention that to her awhile back?

    #98 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Dat Ending

    #99 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Oh dear, Smartypants.

    It continues to baffle me that despite Twilight clearly declaring that 'she even comes with her own notebook', a lot of people refer to Smartypants as male.  Go figure.

    Write on!  :twilightsmile:

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