Friendship, does it come from the mind, or the heart? Well when Equestria's concentration of light from the kindness in everypony it attracts some dark creatures known as the Heartless. When the land is threatened by these monsters it maybe all up to the Elements of Harmony to fight off these creatures and save Equestria!
(Chapters after 5 are named after the boss type heartless that show up. Maybe in the future I will add a picture or something of what I'd like them to look like)
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You, uh... misspelled balance. Just sayin, just sayin...
Although that was oddly the one and only spelling mistake I ever found while reading this.
Adding to relevant group.
And this is in the feature box? Man that thing is broken...
Well done so far Brah! Kingdom Hearts is my FAVOURITE series of games EVER, and you just crossed it with the best Freakin' show of all time... kudos man, kudos.
First
That entire action scene was nothing more than a text brick, a big no-no in the writing community. Space that sucker out, especially with dialogue, otherwise you'll risk driving away your readers.
Other than that, it's a decent story. I'll keep an eye on it.
please update soon I love your storys and look forward to the update or others you make